New Asya FF....Mere Humnawah Part *1-5* link to nxt thread given

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Posted: 10 years ago

#161

Hey Jas...belated Happy Birthday dear...🤗

May god bless you with all the happiness in life always...

coming to the update it was Awesome...

Loved the Khan Family intro...it was so nice feel to see the bond they share with each other...

like jealous Zoya...but its good that her mu got clear...

Loved it...

continue soon...

Thanks for pm 😊

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surbhi

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Posted: 10 years ago

#162

hey jas
i read it...was superb
abhi mummy peeche jhadu leke khadi he...🤣
so i gotta go...padai bhi zaroori hena😳
so the pic says it all

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surbhi

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Posted: 10 years ago

#163

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muskaan17rocks

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Posted: 10 years ago

#164

Beautiful chapter

waiting for more romantic asya scenes

continue soon😊

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--Sumi--

@--Sumi--

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Posted: 10 years ago

#165

Hey jas

Your banner is wonderful 👍🏼

I like on post also if you see 😊

I loved your story language 😊

Gazia good behave 🤣

Khan children's no comment 😉

Asad came with breezer 😛

I like his antics

Zoya jealous to see asad with other girl

But after knowing relief her nerves ❤️

Totally loved it 😛

Thanks for pm 😛

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radadolcevida

@radadolcevida

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Posted: 10 years ago

#166

Hi Jas sweetheart
I am so sorry, I diseapered for so long that I miss all of you but here I am now.
so coming to the update, I really love how you describe Asad's personnality and how you describe all the persons around him. He is a gem and wonderful human, I feel he is a mix between Ayaan and Asad😃. I really like this bond and it was so heart touching to see that he lost his father however God blessed him with a wonderful family. And this part was really well painted for sure 👏.

So coming to our beloved Zoya, she was happy to see him but all vanished when she saw him talking to another girl 😆. Even if I will not agree with Zeenat to say that she is already in love with him but we can see that she is strongly attracted to this stranger, like you know ++++++ (and many more 😆).
you didn't forget to mention Nazma and her diet, it was so fun to read that part, I can understand her and I am with her, why diet exist ? Why can't we just eat what we want ? Anyway, I am loosing the train of my tought.
You know I am proud of you, you didn't play a sadistic with Zoya and you reveal quickly that Nazma is his sister, poor zoya, she didn't eat because of frustration 😆. I want the same because when I am frustrated I need chocolate.
Jas, the story was really going well and the way you painted every bond was wonderful. I hope you will make them meet soon or you will enjoy the pleasure to play hide and seek with them. It can be fun too 😉.
Thanks for the pm and hope to read the rest soon.

PS: I talk a lot about food, it's just because I am fasting while I am writting this comment, I need sugar I guess 😆
PS2 : happy birthday again 🥳
PS3 : the banner is wonderful, I love it 😃

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shonajain

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Posted: 10 years ago

#167

ohhh myyy godd
it was damn cuteee
khan family...sssooo adorable

I totallyyy every bit of it
zoeee ko love at first sight ho gyaaa woowww

she was jealous

n asad najma humera nikhat
awsumeee all of them

update soon

lots of love
shona

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Binzzz

@Binzzz

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Posted: 10 years ago

#168

wonderful chapter...
loved the bond between asad's family members...
perfect...
zoya again met her stranger...
she misunderstood najma as asad's girl friend 😆
misunderstandings cleared...
zoya is like a daughter to anzi.. very nice..
zoya is going to take initial steps.. interesting..
continue soon..

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asya7

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Posted: 10 years ago

#169

Hey jas😃

I have read both the parts and I simply love it. Though it is the first time you are writing but you write very flawlessly👏

I am sorry for commenting late. Was busy with exams and the net connection was ultra-slow😡

It is very nice to see gazia so positive here. It is a very welcoming and refreshing change to see no negativity.

I love all encounters of asya and their bond with their families. You are doing a very good job dear👏

I may always not be able to give comments due to my tight schedule but my best wishes and support is always with you and your story. And you can be sure about the fact that you have a permanent reader who will never forget to hit the like button, no matter what😃🤗

And lastly I know I am late but still HAPPY BIRTHDAY🤗🥳