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Posted: 10 years ago
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wow you have delivered a passionate story as promised!

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Posted: 10 years ago
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That was like literally very intense and passionate
awesome piece of writing😊
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Are you kidding me! You said it's not the best youve written!
This was amazing!!!

They kissed and still doesn't realize she's sanam. I was happy she didn't remember everything cus then we wouldn't get the next few amazing amazing scenes
The jealousy came back
Then ahil's solution "jallad Jin back" loved it!
Then boom he convinced her slowly and passionately
Great job
Gotta read it again :)
Thanks!
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Posted: 10 years ago
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its full of intense love nd passionate,HOT...
i love it...
sanam even didnt understand wht she said???she was in ahil's trance..
i wanna see jealous jallad jinn...hayee...whtever he said to sanam...
i m still blushing...
its fantastic,mindblowing...
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Posted: 10 years ago
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😲
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😆😆

OH GOD. What in the world was that even?!! Not your best?!! Ermm...I sincerely ask what would be your best then?! ☺️😆

As you can see, my mind is totally out of control right now. Would you believe I had goosebumps reading this, I felt so heated up and almost in a daze. You HAVE to believe me okay?! I couldn't think straight for almost 5 minutes after reading this..LEGIT! 😆

Damn! This was HOT. Would be such an understatement, that the word "HOT" would be feeling embarrassed 😆😆 Please don't laugh at my feels getting all over the place right now. I am just not "in" the senses 😆

That kiss that was SO gonna happen at that tribal village, you did that. And my my! What a "lasting impression" it left on HER! 😉😆

She couldn't think just straight, and was feeling guilty to take that step. Oh you Jannat, you should have thought earlier, now its too late to back off. You should have known what kinda mess your putting yourself in, - by mere being around ARI. It does something, you know?! 😆

Oh his jealousy! Damn! That clenched face and all those heated and sexy lines! Damn! I needed air, when I was reading. I just wasn't aware of my surroundings literally! I was holding my breath, thinking WHERE would all this lead to...😆 No kidding! Trust me! (Would you believe I actually wrote "kissing" instead of "kidding' just now) 🤣 I am clearly way too spoilt 😆😆

What have you done?! Oh god. What has HE "done"?!! ☺️😆 Oh god. I need to control myself a little bit, maybe thats why I just had an ice-cream! 🤣😆

Damn girl! This was scintillating-ly sexy. And sinfully gorgeous! If that's the word gorgeous can be described ever ☺️😆

The part where he smirked at his washroom "bad guy" he is. That just did things to me...I hope you know what those things are..😆😆

And the part where he went and grabbed her waist and whispering being all huskily sexy. Damn! I wonder how she would be even standing! ARI turning on his sexy charm, and her too 😉😆

There are my favorite parts like SO MANY of them! But I just seem to forget all of them now, I don't know how 😆 Its just all scattered, like my feels and my thoughts..eh 😆

The part where he told her "Your a screamer" DAMN! 😲😆 How dirty was that?! And she argued on that too, she IS SANAM! 😆😆 "Sanam, you have just got back from your memory loss, I know what I am talking about" 😆

And that line "to make that certain someone hear" Dude! I was dead! 😆 And I even imagined all that..you know..like how she would scream his name and that certain someone would suddenly have the shock of his life 🤣😆

This was intensely wild man! Oh god! I can't seem to stop myself writing about it. Like I used to rant about those episodes all those days back 😆

I would be even quoting almost whole story I guess. Wait for my second comment for all my favorite parts 😛😆

But girl! What are you even?! This has to be you at sinfully best, ofcourse in writing 😉🤣
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Posted: 10 years ago
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"Should I have touched you in another way then? Is that what you're telling me?" Aahil raised a crooked eyebrow.

"Save the screaming for later, Jaan. I know you're begging for it."


"I want you to scream so loud, Jaan. I want a certain someone to know who you belong to."

Never mind. The whole story is m favorite.But these were something else..☺️

Oh hell! What a badass he has been in this! Dark desire?! Damn! This is just too wild and raw. Damn you girl! You just made me read this whole thing, I guess 6th time in a row 😆

This one is so one for the books! I won't be forgetting this, trust me 😆

Paani paani re...paani paani re...🤣🤣

Okay done! 😆
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: Junoon-e-SaHil

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<font size="2" face="Geneva, Arial, Helvetica, sans-serif">"Save the screaming for later, Jaan. I know you're begging for it."</font>

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<font size="2" face="Geneva, Arial, Helvetica, sans-serif">"I want you to scream so loud, Jaan. I want acertain someoneto know who you belong to."</font>
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<font size="2" face="Geneva, Arial, Helvetica, sans-serif">Never mind. The whole story is m favorite.But these were something else..☺️</font>

Oh hell! What a badass he has been in this! Dark desire?! Damn! This is just too wild and raw.Damn you girl! You just made me read this whole thing, I guess 6th time in a row😆
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<font size="2" face="Geneva, Arial, Helvetica, sans-serif">This one is so one for the books! I won't be forgetting this, trust me😆</font>
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<font size="2" face="Geneva, Arial, Helvetica, sans-serif">Paani paani re...paani paani re...🤣🤣</font>
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<font size="2" face="Geneva, Arial, Helvetica, sans-serif">Okay done!😆</font>
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OMG! I need to sit down by the amount of praise I'm getting.. 😆

No seriously, you've read it 6 TIMES already? 😲 Haai... You have to believe I was actually so insecure with the story. I kept thinking I rushed it and it isn't good enough.. I swear I never thought it would cause such an effect from you 😆

Trust me! All what you said is causing me to light up 😳 Gah.. Prags!! You're seriously something else. All the places you've pin pointed, are the exact same ones I loved!! Mind connection, I tell you. 😉 😆

I need a moment to comprehend the long wonderful, spirit-lifting comment 😆 ❤️ I'll sure to be back.. Haayeee...
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Pragya said it! Paani Paani ☺️ I will be back need a drink to cool down 😉 And knowing me, I will probably read it again before commenting 😆
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Posted: 10 years ago
#9
Pure passion. 😳

Loved it, Mahwash! I've read it twice already. 😆

You did a stupendous job giving voice to the seething passion between the two of them! 👏
This is what I want to see on the show! 😭 Obviously, it won't ever be this passionate, but a masterful Aahil actually doing something and Sanam falling under his spell, no black magic needed. 😎 How wonderful would that be?

I loved his onslaught on her senses . . . his smirky returns when she protested. I loved how he asked her if she wanted him to touch her some other way . . . how he kept his eyes on her at all times (Loving her with his gaze) . . . asking her the tough questions . . . and finally admitting the truth . . . she is his Sanam. How could she not fall under his spell?

How could we not fall under your spell?

Beautiful! Great job!
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Whoa ... who turned on the heat in here! !
Phewwwie ... that was HOT HOT HOT !!!
Loved the way he was restless and jealous , you wrote that awesomely! !

And the challenge and who knew losing could be so sweet!
Finally Sanam listens to what her heart is saying ...

Sigh ...❤️

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