Meri Sanam ki Yaddein SS-part 12pg 16 - Page 6

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Posted: 10 years ago
#51

Originally posted by: muskaan17rocks

Beautiful update

seher come back was amazingly written
loved the sahil convo
Eagerly waiting for the next part
continue soon 😊


glad you liked it! Yes I always like to write strong scenes/ roles for my female characters when I get to define them. I would want to be strong in front of Nayi Sanam and get justice for her runining my family
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Posted: 10 years ago
#52
Very good update!!! I loved it!!

Thanks for the pm!!
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Posted: 10 years ago
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glad you like it
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new update, frustrated with the show, hope I did a better job than CVs with this tale so far

Part Six

" Shaad Aftab Khan please stop. A young woman has requested for you to wait a moment before you proceed for boarding," the stewardess stated.

He frowned.

Who could be wanting to talk to him? He had lost the figmentation of his love.

He nodded and was directed to look behind him.

A woman in a top and jeans approached him. What struck him as surprising was that she was idenitical to Jannat or otherwise now he knew she was Sanam Raaza Ibrahim.

"Aap toh..," he trailed off.

" Allow me to introduce myself," she stated.

(Oh right in the background).

" I am Seher Ahmed Khan the one and only sister of the woman who you tried to snatch away from her family," she snapped.

Shaad turned solemn.

"Listen I am..."

"Sorry if that is what you are trying to say then you should really finish what you came here for," Seher said.

"Lekin Sanam ko Aahil milega hai. There is no need for me to stay in India now," he stated.

Seher shook her head at this senseless man. How did the Pakistani army allow him to be on special forces, let alone get to the rank of Major she didn't understand this.

" Shashi Kapoor is the reason you gave customs in order to get your trip here scheduled so conveniently. If you truly want to amend for your mistakes and conduct your duty, then help me catch her," Seher stated.

Shaad frowned.

"How can you be sure that you will be able to catch her?," he asked puzzled.

Seher smiled brightly.

" I have experience in dealing with her now departed mother. Now if I can unveil that woman that jiaji workshipped his whole life, then why can't I scrunch this Shashi Kapoor?," she hissed.

Shaad shook his head.

" She already tried to bomb this airport. This is no child play. Are you sure you want to take this on?," he asked.

Seher smiled.

"There is one thing about my family you don't know. We play with death all the time," she declared.

"Well after meeting your sister I could possibly believe that," he replied.

Seher stiffened.

"Now listen two things, first is you tell me what you have on this Shashi Kapoor and second, you will not enter my sister's life again. You saved her life fine, but everything in between and after that was a lie. The real question is do you want to redeem yourself before returning to Pakistan?," she asked.

"Yes I do Ms. Khan. How can I be of service?," he asked.

Seher smiled.

"Come with me this conversation needs to be in a more secure location," she stated.

Meanwhile .. (Kuch toh Hua hai from Singham returns).

Suddenly a storm announced its arrival. Sanam clung to Aahil's collar. Storms tended to always scare her. The sound of thunder reminded of something bittersweet. She could not quite place it now. All she knew is that she had definitely clung to this man many times before this occurrence. How could she not understand this before? She had whispered his name perhaps while she was with Shaad. But neither he spoke of it and neither had she recalled back then. Come to think of it she had heard Aahil's voice before coming to India. Had it been that strange phone call? She had recalled the number but when she had redialed it there was no answer.

How had she wished she had acted quicker then, Shaad had waved away her affirmations as figmentations of her amnesia?

She looked into Aahil's eyes.

However this man standing before her, held her without any grievances and he had not doubted her despite the fact she had been with someone else for a few months. Agar yeh sachi mohabbat nahin hai toh kya ho sakti hai?

She loosened her grip off his shirt and stood back and it began to pour down on them. They were lost in each other for a few moments and didn't realize they were already drenched.

She realized her clothing was clinging to her and she ran towards the car. She nearly tripped but he caught her swiftly before she could hit the ground. He lifted her to stand up straight then opened the door to her side of the car. She sat down lost in thought.

(Kuch toh Hua hai from Singham returns).

They arrived at the farmhouse several minutes later.

Aahil sensed she was uneasy. He should have kept his distance. She would not become the old Sanam this quickly and even if she never recovered her past memories, he would love her the same if not more.

" Aahil I want to tell you something," she stated.

"Not now Sanam. You should go dry off. I will start the fire," he stated.

Sensing something was disturbing him, Sanam merely nodded, However with her memories or without she would get her feelings off her chest tonight. She could not evade it further. She knew somewhere there was a great love between them, but she had to make sure the slate was clear before they moved further in their journey together.

Aahil had left the suitcase in the bedroom for her and left her alone as he started the fire.

" Aahil bhi na, he is drenched too. He should have changes before going off to start that fire. Shaayd meri wahje se naraaz hai," she thought to herself.

Sanam changed quickly and grabbed a towel for Aahil and left his clothes laid on the bed for him.

He was tending to the fire when she approached him.

"For a Nawab you are pretty handy," she commented.

He looked at her and smiled slightly.

" I have had my days of roughing it," he replied.

"Here you should dry off. I have left your clothes on the bed," she stated.

"I'll just be back. Keep an eye on the fire," he stated as he took the towel from her hands.

Sanam looked at his retreating back and then back to the fire.

"Yah Allah will I ever remember the past? Aur meri behn kahan hai?," she said aloud.

Aahil returned and she wanted to speak her mind now.

"Aahil main kuch kehna chahti hoon," she said.

"Bolo Sanam, jo bhi tumare maan mein hai," he urged.

He wanted to know if he was rushing her or pressuring her in anyway. He would give her all the time she needed.

" Mere aur uss Shaad ke beech aisa kuch.."

"Kuch nahin hua," he finished for her.

She looked at him stunned.

"Mujhe meri mohobbat aur tum pe pura yakeen hai," he clarified for her.

She looked at him puzzled.

" I had no idea he was lying to me, had I.."

" Relax Sanam. Tumari koi galti nahin thi. I should have made her leave but you wanted her to help her," he muttered.

"Kaun?," she asked.

"She is nothing to us anymore. Forget it. Let us get some rest after we warm up. Tomorrow we have to work on the dhaba project. You need to be well rested Sanam," he stated firmly.

"Lekin Aahil.."

"Shh! Be a good girl and come to bed now with me," he insisted.

He picked her up in his arms as she resisted him.

" Aahil please tell me who was trying to bother us. Shouldn't I know all this?," she asked.

"Sanam everything is fine now. Let's not dwell on the past now," he hissed.

He dropped her on the bed gently.

"Haha, easy for you to say," she snapped back.

" Sanam go to sleep now!," he yelled back.

"Fine! Be stubborn then!," she snapped as she turned over to sleep on her side.

Aahil sat up for awhile listening to the rain drops hit the roof. He had made a blunder today, but he would not risk her health or their future together by dwelling on the past.

He looked over at his sleeping wife. Today she had tried to apologize for the past few months. But none of that had been her fault. It had been Nayi Sanam's fault. She had led the Khan sisters to be kidnapped and to their near deaths.

Sanam was alive with barely any memory of the past. Seher could be anywhere. However as Aahil recalled the message his contact had sent him about Nayi Sanam's capture, he realized only a few women possessed the ability to handle the evil chudali. The first was her mother, his now deceased stepmother who had planted her in their lives, his stepsister and last but not least was Seher. He hoped it had been Seher. However until he met Seher again he would not tell any of this to Sanam. For now his thoughts were mere speculations.


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Posted: 10 years ago
#55
hey,i lv the part.sahil as usual awsm.
pls dnt pair seher with shaad.
want some jija-sali and sase moment.
thnks 4 pm,cntinu soon,
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Posted: 10 years ago
#56
Beautiful part as usual!!

Loved it!!

Thank you so much for the pm!! 😊
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Posted: 10 years ago
#57
Great chapter. Liked how Seher made an apperince! She is cleaning the mess those who wanted to harm her family. Good one :)
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: LoveSonu2408

hey,i lv the part.sahil as usual awsm.

pls dnt pair seher with shaad.
want some jija-sali and sase moment.
thnks 4 pm,cntinu soon,


Seher will not be paired with anyone as for the scope of this story, I want her to be an independent girl until she meets the right person and feels it is the right time. My situation is same my sister is married and I am single. I am happy for her and try to help her whenever I can, had I been married my duty would be divided to more than one household and I would have not been able to assist her in the way I have. I have no regrets I met guys but none of them have worked out so far, so I am writing Seher as I would see myself or any average girl in her situation. As my good friend Priya told me once you don't need a man to define you! I hope to get married someday but have yet to find my true match
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Posted: 10 years ago
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thanks for reading! appreciate it!😉
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: --Aishwarya--

Beautiful part as usual!!


Loved it!!

Thank you so much for the pm!! 😊


thanks so much for support when are you updating yours? Looking forward to it!

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