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surbhi

@suearmaniac

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Posted: 10 years ago

#751

Originally posted by: azsumay

Ya hoe romantic scenes you wrote
Loved it😊

thanku

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surbhi

@suearmaniac

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Posted: 10 years ago

#752

Originally posted by: azsumay

Thanks sue
It's applicable to you also😉😳😆
Confess very soon

hehe mene karwa diya na confess

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surbhi

@suearmaniac

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Posted: 10 years ago

#753

Originally posted by: azsumay

Iss bar jaldi ho gaya
Chatting jo karate hai😉😆

hehe haan aur promote bhi usi se hote he 😆

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Gulaabo

@Gulaabo

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Posted: 10 years ago

#754

Wonderful update

So zoya realized that asad loves her

That's news!

I want them to be together soon

And the last lines were beautiful

Continue soon

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radadolcevida

@radadolcevida

Voyager

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Posted: 10 years ago

#755

res 😃

Unres

So sorry for the delay, but here i am now.

First let me tell you that the first part was beautifull and so emotional. Asad 'break down was so heart touching and his words constricted my heart for him. I felt so much his pain and this is because of you. You improve a lot in this chapter and we can see that you handle Asad's character perfectly and his turnoil.

I can understand how it was so love someone but from one side and it was well expressed in this chapter.

Coming to Zoya, she wanted to thank him but in the same time, need to see him fine. She didn't even think about her own pain (maybe for few minutes). And sending Asad to New york was a good twist, you show the slow travel of Zoya to find what Asad was hidding and what was his feeling. Afterall, we can't blame her, he never said anything to her. She thought he was just like her forced into this engagement.

Even if I am not good in hindi, I understand your poem and it was really deep and intense with Asad's devotion and feeling for her. She just realized at the end that it was her. Poor girl, I really want to know how now she will bring him back now that he made a promise to go away from her.

Do you plan to make him Akdu and to reject her? Or are we going to see her crazy plan to make him confess? Both can be interesting for the story , but you are the writer and you are free to add what you want 😃

I really love how the story it's slowly growing between them and this is how it happen, Zoya needed to see Asad diffenrently and to ba assured of his feeling. Now let's see what Zoya Farooqui is going to do to seduce her prince charming.

Edited by radadolcevida - 9 years ago

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--Sumi--

@--Sumi--

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Posted: 10 years ago

#756

Originally posted by: -Crazy4AsYa-
Wonderful update
So zoya realized that asad loves her
That's news!
I want them to be together soon
And the last lines were beautiful
Continue soon

Thank you so much srushti

Ya it may be in two update

Together soon 😳

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--Sumi--

@--Sumi--

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Posted: 10 years ago

#757

Originally posted by: suearmaniac
hehe mene karwa diya na confess

Mam this peom suit you 😳😉

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--Sumi--

@--Sumi--

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Posted: 10 years ago

#758

Originally posted by: shailu123
Hey di i got first place😳🤗
Awesome update di👍🏼
Glad zoya is fine now n she also love him wow
Woh kavita bohot hi khubsoorat hai di
Asad is also back now
Continue soon😊

Hey shailu

Congrats for getting first place

I remember previous days

When you ressing first

👏

I glad you like it

Asad have to back because no one want separation of Asya 😉

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jas91

@jas91

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Posted: 10 years ago

#759

Originally posted by: azsumay

Hey jas

Thank you so much for celebrating my promotion

I want another gift

Update kab degi meri ma

Jaldi update Karo

Bahot din ho Gaye 🥱

Koi shak hai kya 😲

Cute pie se sweet pie ban gayi hu 😉

Thanks I glad you like poem

Mujhe to laga is bar chappal tamator bahot padenge 😆

I want to give update on my promotion

Iss liye jaldi me likha tha

Only one and half hour 😳

Thanks for everything

Ya hug smile is my favorite

Because hug smooth pain and increased joy

Right or wrong

Ye le 🤗