NEW ASYA FF: Khamoshiyan teaser updated on page 120(11/9) - Page 54

Created

Last reply

Replies

930

Views

61.9k

Users

58

Likes

1.1k

Frequent Posters

--Sumi-- thumbnail
11th Anniversary Thumbnail Rocker Thumbnail + 2
Posted: 10 years ago
Haha
Don't know when sue 😕
Writing for angel😉
suearmaniac thumbnail
10th Anniversary Thumbnail Sparkler Thumbnail + 2
Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: azsumay


Haha
Don't know when sue😕
Writing for angel😉

han jaldi likhke update karna
m waiting
asyaarshilover thumbnail
12th Anniversary Thumbnail Stunner Thumbnail + 4
Posted: 10 years ago
Sumi🤗
Finally I res this part... it was awesome blossom tiresome
I loved it a ton... beautifully written
Each and every scene had it's own charm

Poor Asad 😭
I loved asya's conversation the most even though it was qute short...
Next time want huge asya scene... n cont soonish😊
--Sumi-- thumbnail
11th Anniversary Thumbnail Rocker Thumbnail + 2
Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: asyaarshilover

Sumi🤗

Finally I res this part... it was awesome blossom tiresome
I loved it a ton... beautifully written
Each and every scene had it's own charm

Poor Asad 😭
I loved asya's conversation the most even though it was qute short...
Next time want huge asya scene... n cont soonish😊

Thanks aroo
For reading and beautiful comment
Updating
Edited by azsumay - 10 years ago
--Sumi-- thumbnail
11th Anniversary Thumbnail Rocker Thumbnail + 2
Posted: 10 years ago
Chapter 6

At siddiqui mansion
today is last day of Zoya's college.

zeenat insists Gaffur to ask zoya about the marriage so that they can give their decision to dadi. zeenat is laying breakfast table and Gaffur sat on head of table. zeenat signing him to ask.

" hmm, zoya what is your next period plan? "Gaffur asked her looking at zeenat

"I have farewell party tonight at my college then will go be going out with friends ."busy with her breakfast.

" zoya did you think about nikah means... " zoya cut her in between

"ammi, I want to focus on my career now
I didn't think about it. "

"she is right , every girl should stand on her own feet. at least financially she should not be dependent on anyone. "Gaffur supported zoya's decision.

"you, two people make a gang and always win with your decision "

both Gaffur and zoya high fived each other.she came to zeenat

zoya hugged her mom from behind and kissed her cheek "no ammi, please don't agree with me, I will do whatever you want but give me some time to settle down in my career "

Gaffur gone to bid good bye to them as he was going out of town.


asad and zoya still didn't know about the feelings they had about each other. they didn't have any reason to meet.

zoya would go to meet dilshad at odd times. she didn't want to face him.

her career was taking nice shape her externals and written exams almost completed. today she has farewell party in college.

she wore a shiffon golden color sari and matching jewellery. and left her hair on shoulder she looks pretty cool. minimum make up applied on her face. This is the last function of her college.

Gaffur was out of town and her car at servicing garage. asad was going to site to check out on work. zeenat adviced zoya to go with asad but she denied. asad sat on driver seat waiting for zoya. Zoya didn't have any choice But to go with him.

they didn't utter a word but his eyes glancing at her through rearview mirror. she looks beautiful after long time he spent time with her. The journey was silent. he stopped the car infront of college she came out of car and didn't look back at him but asad checked she was gone in college safely and left.


at office


nikhat was sketching graphs. She called the peon but nadim came before the peon and stood infront of her. she didn't see him and assumed it's the peon and instructed to him gave her some file and ordered him for cold coffee and nadim shushed the peon and sent him back. nadim brought coffee for her.

Nadim put the tray on coffee table and stood behind her. she stood up to take coffee while reading a file and bumped into him. she was surprised to see him here.

"you OK? "

"ya I am but why you are here? "

"why, I can't meet my best friend without any reason? "

"no you can but I didn't expect you to be here "nikhat assume that she was dreaming about him but his touch feel his presence.

"oh come we will take coffee, your favorite "

"ha, you still remember? "

"yes I didn't forgot any single second about us "nadim amazed see at her surprisingly.
"what's up with you? ,anyone entered in your life to handle you? "
"na, ammi finding bride for me, I will marry with her. "
nikhat looked at her ,nadim saw pain her eyes, he knew that she love him but he want confessions. "oh, it seems like arrange marriage" and
" I don't believe in this ,but I don't have option ."
"why, you like any girl? "
nikhat want to check out , he were find any girl.
"you like any girl, I know her? "
nikhat ask eagerly to know that name of girl. because if he told another name her heart will be break up. nadim smiled at her,
"you know her very well "
"rossy, aayesha, Elena or anything else... "
" she is none of them, you know her, I love her alot but I don't know she will loves me or not. I am scared if she will not agree with me ."nadim teasing her alot.
nikhat have no patience to listen anymore, her heart cried silently.
nadim poused and looked at her she is in sad and didn't utter a word after that. he didn't seen her like this he held her hand and took her infront of glass window.
"" I want you to meet her. he pointed at her on glass but she didn't understand
"here is no one nadim. she looking at him querying by her eyes.
"look at Glasgow carefully " nadim turn him and stood behind him.
"it's me. "she put her hand on her mouth nadim turned her to face him.
"yes, it's you are girl ,I love her alot, she was my best friend "
" still I am "she told him while crying. "Who share the same thing happened with me like chocolate, chips, cock, even punishments also, but didn't share her heart with me "he pouting at her and turn to face his back to her and showing his fake anger .
she still crying didn't even get to know how much he loves her. her dreams come true. today her heart crying with full of joy . she also also didn't stop her. because lots of emotions merged and flowing through her eyes.
" hey nikhat, sorry if you did not like my proposal .but I... "
she hugged him still crying in her arm . their hearts communicate with each other.

nadim smiled at her cuteness.
but nikhat realize he was fooling her to get her truth. she separated from hug and biting him
"why you did not tell me. checking on me what I want?
"you also didn't tell me. " nadim stopping her by held hands.
"you are a boy then you should propose first "
"Is there any rule, boy proposes first and girls will never be the same. "
"don't know "
" I am scared ,if you will not accept it.
"me too."
asad dropped zoya and came in office he just entered the office and want to discuss UAE
project but stopped at door and saw. his eyes moisten because he always want happiness for nikhat because many people rejected her because of her skin color. is not only one reason to reject anyone or judge anyone. only one meeting is not sufficient to understand our soulmate. it must be heart is more beautiful than your posture. he left from there to pick up zoya
because he promised his masi he will drop her also .

At zoya's college
party goes well. no alcoholic beverages were allowed in party but some boys are Adding alcohol in drinks and zoya was going to take soft drink.she sees faiz added alcohol in soft drinks she stood behind him
"you don't have shame to do this "
zoya asked him loudly everyone stopped and looked at them. staff teacher came over there . they can't take risk because faiz was always copying in exams, touching girls wrongly over all. he was a characterless student. many of them complained about him but didn't have proof to show him wrong. they call police officer to get him.
party goes well zoya bid good bye to her friends
"no riya, my car is on the way to pick up me. you guys take care. we will meet soon. bye "zoya waiting for asad but there is no sign of him to come. he told her to message him when she wanted to go home he will pick up. today there was taxi strike in the city. then didn't have chance to go home. she decided to walk herself. after some distance some road Romeo was stalking her she didn't gave attention to them then they touch her lustyly and taunting her . she was scared because no one else can help her because road was empty. it's turned to midnight.
she ran but they crossed her path.
they pushed on road and she almost hit on road but two strong arm held her she looked at him. their eyes locked. asad always searching answers of his questions in her eyes. she hid her feelings from him but her eyes never lied to asad. they always shows that what she have in her heart. he held her hand and put on her own feet.
"you OK? "
"hmm " put her Saree on right place. and push her tears
asad looked at them . he fought with them like never before. zoya stopped him but he didn't listen her. she angrily came to him and stopped him to go them off.
all of them were lying on road lifelessly . they both went up to the car but one boy came to zoya. zoya looked at back listening a voice from behind.
he threw acid on zoya but she put her hand on her face and hid
her face. some drops had reached on her arm. she winced in pain Asad looked at her and ran upto her.
He held her but her skin were burning. he took her to A hospital.
his heart skipped a beat when he saw her lifelessly lying on floor.

in city hospital
doctors took her immediately at operation Theatre but zoya still held his hand to not to leave her. she was unconscious and Asad requested them to let him be with zoya .

"There are rules and we are not allowed to keep you in theatre please wait outside. nurse separated their hands and took her in. He sat on bench lifelessly . His battle of heart who gave him confidence was gone. he had no courage to fight with his emotions. he loved her more than his life. he didn't expect zoya to love him back. because his love was sufficient for both of them live peacefully.

flashback
all children were playing cricket on ground but asad was sketching some pictures. zoya forced him to play with them then he agreed that but by mistake colors put on landscape and his pictures looks awful zoya scared of asad. She thought he will hit her that's why she ran away and asad behind her but asad :His leg got floundered in the mud.
he hit on ground and but zoya came upto him took her room. still asad was crying. she washed that bruises and applied antiseptic cream on that gave him chocolate box which is she doesn't share anyone because she loved to eat anytime. both smiled at each other . she cared about him.
flashback ends

he failed today he didn't take care of his friend. if he would have came to pick up her on right time then she would not be in that condition. he was responsible for her state. he would never forgive himself .

He decided from now onwards he will not give her any pain . he will go away from her. far away then she will live peacefully.

Faith is not believing that
God can ,
It is knowing that
God will

If you read like and comment also
Hope you like it 😊

Edited by azsumay - 10 years ago
ashlesha2 thumbnail
12th Anniversary Thumbnail Dazzler Thumbnail + 2
Posted: 10 years ago
Yippee res
Unres ss
Zoya is injured hope she is fine
Fabulous
Fantastic
Outstanding wala
Part


Edited by ashlesha2 - 10 years ago
--Sumi-- thumbnail
11th Anniversary Thumbnail Rocker Thumbnail + 2
Posted: 10 years ago
Res for all 🤗
Edited by azsumay - 10 years ago
sweet_tehs thumbnail
17th Anniversary Thumbnail Sparkler Thumbnail + 2
Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: azsumay

Humm 😉
It's my pleasure
Nothing is perfect without you
I will do those things 😊


🤗
sweet_tehs thumbnail
17th Anniversary Thumbnail Sparkler Thumbnail + 2
Posted: 10 years ago
Res
Unres..

Very well written part sum...
Asya going through a tough time..
Feeling more bad for Asad n angry on Zoya...
Can't help it Asad is my favorite 😉

But please put some sense in both their heads soon before taking any rash decisions..

The last line tells that now Asad will again do something stupid n more seperation..


U have literally stood up to your title khamoshiyan with both of them being khamosh...

Nikhat Nadim part was cute..

Continue soon.
Edited by sweet_tehs - 10 years ago
ashlesha2 thumbnail
12th Anniversary Thumbnail Dazzler Thumbnail + 2
Posted: 10 years ago
But for what res res rest only res🤣

Related Topics

Qubool Hai Thumbnail

Posted by: desidillse

1 years ago

AsYa FF ~ Broken Ties (chapter 5 updated)

[NOCOPY] Hello everyone! Happy to be here. I was searching for an opportunity to be here with all of you as a member after a long time as writer...

Expand ▼
Qubool Hai Thumbnail

Posted by: Coloursoflove

2 years ago

*New chapter updated* Asya FF: Rendezvous with Honor *New chapter updated* Asya FF: Rendezvous with Honor

Asya FF: Rendezvous with Honor Asad Ahmed Khan is the prodigal son. All the tabloids say so. Coming from an affluent family in Bhopal, he's done...

Expand ▼
Qubool Hai Thumbnail

Posted by: ExoticDisaster

6 months ago

AsYa OS - Unfolding Yesterday

Writer - ExoticDisaster | Graphicer - Oh_nakhrewaali | Theme - Bag Unfolding Yesterday Zoya coughed, pulling the scarf higher over her nose and...

Expand ▼
Qubool Hai Thumbnail

Posted by: missFiesty_69

6 months ago

AsYa OS - Mixed messages, Matched Hearts. AsYa OS - Mixed messages, Matched Hearts.

This is one of the entries I had submitted for Valentine's day contest - A Bag full of love. cover : oh_nakhrewaali | writer : missFiesty_69 |...

Expand ▼
Qubool Hai Thumbnail

Posted by: missFiesty_69

6 months ago

AsYa OS - Love, Lies and a Spilled Latte AsYa OS - Love, Lies and a Spilled Latte

This is one of the entries I had submitted for Valentine's Day contest - A bag full of love . cover : ExoticDisaster aka Shiri | writer :...

Expand ▼
Top

Stay Connected with IndiaForums!

Be the first to know about the latest news, updates, and exclusive content.

Add to Home Screen!

Install this web app on your iPhone for the best experience. It's easy, just tap and then "Add to Home Screen".