Nice Post Soup... but this makes it even more sad ... Aahil worries only about himself! Very disturbing and Sanam will have to come back to this Shauhar who will care for her only if she loves him else throw her to the next well behaved man. She is a woman not an object..
. Sanam must know about her family, her identity.
Besides, I think the answer to his question is a no. Aahil in not in her heart at all, let alone be the only one in her heart. Sanam had no reactions to Aahil AT ALL. I read people saying she was bothered by Aahil's presence. I do not think so. In fact she treats Aahil like a lecherous host and nothing more. A man she is barely tolerating coz her husband is being too polite to refuse courtesies for his own reasons. Off course Shad finds it good excuse to be around Sexy without too much effort associated with bike riding,
the way in which she was wanting to be out of the house was very similar to what I would say to my husband if someone would be going out of their way to be our host. It is normal for her to be sceptic about the reasons.
But Jannat was definitely missing Shad. we got a monologue.
In fact there is no difference in how she reacts to Shad's presence (when she is vacant Jannat)as opposed to Aahil's presence(when she was the normal Sanam) . So she might have actually fallen for Shad. But still she must not be deprived of knowledge about herself, whichever man she loves.
you write well though.. just that I can't connect to it.
Edited by minnie2308 - 10 years ago
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