|AsYa TS ~ All I Ever Wanted| (P2 updated pg8 1/6)

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Asif

@asifiqbalsh

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Posted: 10 years ago

#61

Awesome update
Like ayaan asad talk. He told him to pacify his love. Zoya anger towards asad was beautiful written. He tried but she won't be ready this time. Teasing session wax wonderful. Finally Asad said her that he wants to keep her happy & wants to marry her. Curious to know zoya reaction on his confession. Update soon plz. Thanks for pm

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KeyaHira2

@KeyaHira2

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Posted: 10 years ago

#62

I wanna cry rn

I think this is my fav part out of the whole thingy

This line just touched my heart

"Zoya, I want to marry you...for real."

This one just killed me.

Im such an emotional mess

OMG

But i really love it

It was BANG ON

YAAAS

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sanarujub

@SanKsgian

Inactive

+ 2

Posted: 10 years ago

#63

They bicker all the time...when will they find time to fall in love...????
But its cute

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sanarujub

@SanKsgian

Inactive

+ 2

Posted: 10 years ago

#64

Thanks for the pm sweetie
Update soon

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sanarujub

@SanKsgian

Inactive

+ 2

Posted: 10 years ago

#65

And about the pm thing...Every writer is having the same problem. ..I guess

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Devakshilover

@Devakshilover

Rocker

+ 4

Posted: 10 years ago

#66

awesome asad is just impossible kuch seekho asad miya apne chote bhai se Hahaha reading paper upside down

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anopama

@anopama

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 10 years ago

#67

Love the update

Asad frustration is too good

Love ayan he is awesome he give his bro some good advice

Haha he knows asad has feelings for Zoya and likewise

Asad was so happy to hear Zoya like him

I could have imagine tht smile 😃

Love his ammi and sis teasing him

Too good they go,to share with Zoya but he ducked out

Aww loved how he smile to her when she came to breakfast

Oh oh so he tries again now she refuse to go out bcuz she don't want to tell him where

Oh boy asad tries again after he found out where and y

Ok asad hope u make it count this time

Aww when did we ever get along

But he wants to now he wants to keep her happy

He wants to marry her for real

Can't wait to see Zoya reaction

Continue soon

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ksen

@ksen

Voyager

Posted: 10 years ago

#68

that was written beautifully

very interesting

asad wants to marry zoya for real and to keep her happy

excited to see their reaction

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teja21

@teja21

Rocker

Posted: 10 years ago

#69

amazing update dear

thanx fr d pm

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Aashka

@Chillichick

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 10 years ago

#70

Wohoo!

So nice to see you back!

Wonderful updates!

And the cliffy is so damn tempting!!

I mean Mr. Khan actually talking about his dil ki baat?? *Surprised*