New Asya ff:The Playboy Proposition part 6 A pg 66 07/11/2015 - Page 7

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Posted: 10 years ago
#61
Nayab ur awesome nd i love the update 😊
nd wat made u add that at the end of update haan?
Don't u dare thnk ur nothin coz ur so somethng if nt everythng 😉
u amaze me with ur writing style
nd u knw when i wrote 4 the first tym i was never as gud as u
nd nw u see m one of those ppl who inspired many beginners like simmi
eventhough i take myself as a beginner lol
m happy nd more than happy 4 u sweet heart
love u <3
nd pls update another piece of ths wonderful story
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Posted: 10 years ago
#62

Originally posted by: azsumay

Nice nayab

Continue soon
Thanks for pm


Thank..happy u liked it..
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Posted: 10 years ago
#63

Originally posted by: suearmaniac

Nayab ur awesome nd i love the update 😊
nd wat made u add that at the end of update haan?
Don't u dare thnk ur nothin coz ur so somethng if nt everythng 😉
u amaze me with ur writing style
nd u knw when i wrote 4 the first tym i was never as gud as u
nd nw u see m one of those ppl who inspired many beginners like simmi
eventhough i take myself as a beginner lol
m happy nd more than happy 4 u sweet heart
love u <3
nd pls update another piece of ths wonderful story


Awww thanks a lot sue.. U dont know i was so much scared when i started this but now lil bit relax..and now i hv realized its very tough job to write ..yeah i read simmi's ff..she has written very well and concept is also gud..
Again thanks a lot sue for encouraging thought..
I will update next part tommorow inshallah..
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Posted: 10 years ago
#64
Sorry for lateness...thanks everyone for liking first part..
Enjoy reading...
Part 2
Mum , you've got to help me!
What was that, Zoya ?
Listen ,Mum I wouldn't ask unless this was an emergency.
And if it were emergency I would quite naturally be there for you. Zainab returned serenely. But really Zoya don't you think u are being overdramatic, darling? They're only three little children...just how much trouble they can be??
Oh,God ,mum its not about them ,its me! Zoya said tiredly.
The logical part of her knew she was wasting her breath. How could you explain to someone whose idea of handson parenting was giving her teenage daughter charge accounts and a car.
Hold on a minute Mom!
No Zara that's Aunty Zoya's. she grunted, diving to retrieve a bottle of hair conditioner before the five year old could apply it to the brown curls of her sleeping baby sister.
These three childs are Zoya's brother Haider, Zara and Saif are five year old twins and eighteen month old Aisha.
And Haider wasn't here to protect his children and neither his wife, Humaira. They had been killed the previous month when their car had gone through the central reservation on the motor way and collided head-on with a lorry.
She had loved being there phoopi, who could spoil them before handing them back at the end of the day. Having total responsibility was quite another matter,as she was learning!
I can't do this Mom, she whispered miserably down the phone. I'm messing big time.
Well Haider must have thought you could or he wouldn't have named you as the children's guardian,came the bracing response.
I doubt he expected I'd ever be put to the test, Zoya retorted sadly.
But I have to live where the work is, Mom. Thankfully they were being really good about giving her time off at the university where she lectured, so that was one less thing for her to worry about right now.
Is all this about your job, Zoya? I must say I'm disappointed in you, but not surprised. Zainab sighed
This isn't about my job Mom.she managed finally. Though financially I do have to work, I'm good at my job. I'm not good at-
There is no such thing as the perfect parent, Zoya, her mother interrupted. Your problem is that you're perfectionist; you always have been .you don't like situations you can't control, or people.
Now Zoya was just too tired to fight. I'll try, she promised.
Good girl. It's just a pity that you haven't got a husband yet,because let's face it,no man's going to look twice at a girl who comes with ready-made family of three.And on that cheery note, Zoya thought, shaking her head slowly from side to side. My Mom is really on-off, which is probabily juct as well...
Thanks mum. Then Zoya put down phone and slumped down on the spfa amongst the biscuit crumb and building blocks..
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Posted: 10 years ago
#65
That was nice
Zoya got 3 kids readymade
Well somewhere its good Labour pain bear ni karna pda 🤣
M waiting for asya to meet
it is so exciting 😃
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Posted: 10 years ago
#66
Hey hey hey
R u for real ?
Why don't u write it before
I'm in love with it
U r such a awesome writer and omg ..
I don't have words dear
It was really brilliant
I'm sad I missed it before
Sorry yaar I'm just newly wed now
Please please keep sending me pm
Coz I want to read it but won't be able to comment coz we r heading to hm lol
Always count my 1 like more dear
U r really very very very good writer
Keep it up and give us extra long updateupdate
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Posted: 10 years ago
#67
Wow
Finally zoya entered...
She is also having a family of 3 😆
Must say feeling bad for poor girl... 😆
Missed AAK in the update though...
C'Mon akram b the Cupid for asya n get them marry fast...
Lovely update
Pls continue soon...
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: -simmi-

That was nice
Zoya got 3 kids readymade
Well somewhere its good Labour pain bear ni karna pda 🤣
M waiting for asya to meet
it is so exciting 😃


thanks simmi..
Yeah thats plus point for zoya.even there will be addition of one more kid.omg! How zoya is gonna handle so much kids poor girl..
Anyway asya gonna meet in next update...
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Posted: 10 years ago
#69

Originally posted by: Kanwal4salman


thanks simmi..
Yeah thats plus point for zoya.even there will be addition of one more kid.omg! How zoya is gonna handle so much kids poor girl..
Anyway asya gonna meet in next update...

one more kid omg 😲 and add one kid of asya too if it happen there will be 5 kids again omg 😆
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Posted: 10 years ago
#70
Very good start pls continue it 😛 😊

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