super fabulous!! 👏 loved it all! just what I wanted to see. sanam back! brave and fiery.😛 took it upon herself to find out the truth once and for all; doesn't stand for anyone playing around with her life, and won't stand for it a moment longer. and very sanam in how she confronts shaad, and all by herself, with dignity and eloquence and strength...showing her gratitude respectfully, stating exactly what she was grateful for, very little emotion, to show that shaad is the liar and stranger, there's nothing between them that way and will never be. she knows it, things are the way they are, and this is how she likes it, and there's just nothing to say, feel, whatever, anything more (practical and calm)...but 'don't push it' coming across loud and clear!. 👍🏼😃 busy woman, with her husband and her life, that he put to a standstill for his reasons, no thought to her or her loved ones, to get back to. and then just make it clear to stay way, goodbye, good riddance. (I know this is harsh, but..well...it fits! 😊. at least for me 😊)
loved how aahil finally took a cold stand (earlier) and made her face her feelings, and the truth she already knew.
and then, in a blink, the love and deep emotion come. no hesitation or questions. just cares that aahil's hurting and the priority is to be there for him and with him. and comfort each other, after such a long wait. knows who her love is.
I LOVE his confessions to her, everything her probably would never say to the 'not-imaginary-'cause-I'm-so-drunk' sanam. can feel the heartache and pain he's been through, that she knows she's been through too..so confirmation...definitely hers, definitely his! love how she removes the bottles and he apologizes to 'imaginary sanam' about them (so cute☺️ 😆, how he apologizes to 'i'm-just-that-drunk' 'imaginary sanam' for the drinking, and is miffed she laughed a little at his plight, needing to 'dink her real 😆), and then decides, 'who cares, don't have to be careful with words or touch or anything, so let's enjoy the imaginary'!
it's so sweet how she just listens there in the dark with him. you wrote just the right words. she knows just how to help him in his pain, and it seemed to help her too. beautiful how he let's it all out and pours his heart out to her...the pain, the jealousy, the missing her, how her wants to beat up shaad, but held back. for her sake. and that she realized it ...sweet, romantic how it was written. and used it right back on shaad in the confrontation to prove once and for all who loves her and who doesn't, and who she loves and doesn't.
(hope it doesn't backfire when he wakes...been waiting for the reunion too long to let a little hangover get in the way 😊)
loved this update!. you put so much into the one. reread the whole thing from the start. hope you'll continue, please😳😃. smiling the whole way through!😃 (know this ended up longer than I meant, so hope it makes sense😊😳)
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