AsYa SS: A Love Unconditional #2 - Ch 26 Pg 120 COMPLETED

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Mayur Chan

@MayurChan

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Posted: 10 years ago

#91

Salaam Aapii...
Thanx for the PM...and the dedication..it is soo soo sweet of you to do that for us..because you are writing only is a boon for us..and me getting my name up their in Dedications is something else...Thank You.,
Update was very very emotional & Well written..
Well Zoya's abbu's demise part was really heartfelt touching and painfull...
I mean...it was real and wonderfully emoted and written part..
Zoya's hesitation and then little stubornness to not to accept her father's will is understandable...
How and why aren't Zoya's siblings are not even visiting their Father's last rites also..
That scene in the bathroom btw AsYa was also a emotional scene...very good part..
And lastly the room scene.
Wonderfully written part...Aapii..
Continue soonish..

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Saima Syed

@Saima-Syed

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Posted: 10 years ago

#92

Originally posted by: MayurChan
Salaam Aapii...
Thanx for the PM...and the dedication..it is soo soo sweet of you to do that for us..because you are writing only is a boon for us..and me getting my name up their in Dedications is something else...Thank You.,
Update was very very emotional & Well written..
Well Zoya's abbu's demise part was really heartfelt touching and painfull...
I mean...it was real and wonderfully emoted and written part..
Zoya's hesitation and then little stubornness to not to accept her father's will is understandable...
How and why aren't Zoya's siblings are not even visiting their Father's last rites also..
That scene in the bathroom btw AsYa was also a emotional scene...very good part..
And lastly the room scene.
Wonderfully written part...Aapii..
Continue soonish..

Thank you so much Chottu 🤗

Am glad u liked it even though it was emotional

For all the love and support you and all the others give me dedicating a chapter seems to be very small in comparison, it's the least I can do.

Best wishes

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anopama

@anopama

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Posted: 10 years ago

#93

Sorry sorry just caught up on the last 3 update

Was stuck reading TCL since Monday so back logged

So Zoya and asad progressing well

Zoya get news her Abu on his last and wants to see her

She rushes to his side with asad beside her to support her

Her Abu seeks forgiveness she gives it

He meet his future son in law

She also found out she owns everything tht was her father she don't want it

She found out her other siblings don't care and her ammi comes and goes

So asya shares a room in hotel and a bed

Zoya looked for physical comfort in asad but he refuse saying she is vulnerable

But he wants he r too but when the time is right s

Aww both think they don't deserve the other

So finally Zoya and her ammi comes face to face a bit hostile

Asad is so calm and comforting

So her Abu passes and she is shattered the love of her life is their for her to comfort to hold her to be there for everything

So her ammi invite her home asad persuade her to go

He ammi seeks comfort from her

Wow her room was preserved just as she left it in childhood

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sanarujub

@SanKsgian

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Posted: 10 years ago

#94

Awesome and so emotional
Loved it .
Asya are always together

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sanarujub

@SanKsgian

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Posted: 10 years ago

#95

Continue soon and thanks for the pm

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nnnnnnn

@nnnnnnn

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Posted: 10 years ago

#96

Wonderful albeit very emotional !

Feel sad for zoya... good that she has asad

Continue soon

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Gourav

@Shubh007

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Posted: 10 years ago

#97

Awesome + Emotional Update...👏

Just Love It...😊

Every Scene Is Mind-Blowing...👍🏼

Update Was Portrayed Beautifully...⭐️

Update Next Part Soon...😃

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jas91

@jas91

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Posted: 10 years ago

#98

A dedication 2 us

I always feels honoured & overwhelmed when u do this

Love u so so so much Sam di, u r d best🤗

updt was very emotional so Mr Farooqui died & it was very shattering time 4 Zoya, I feel so happy Asad was wid her that time don't know what she would b widout him.

Yasmin her ammi got a liitle softer in this part is it cuz her other children didn't come

U brought change in her but I still feel it will change when WILL will b out which I earlier thought

Zoya's breakdown in washroom & later Asad helping her change shows immense amount of trust they have on each other. Wish every1 gets such life partners.😊

btw this has always been uniqueness of ur stories strong trust & love btw d lead & I love such stories & u 4 sharing them wid us😛

my fvrt part was last 1 when Asya went in her childhood room which was same as b4 I guess her Dad must have kept it like that & Zoya's answer 2 Asad's comnt was very touching

'I used to do everything and anything I thought would get my parents to compliment me, to tell me that I am a good girl' 😭😭

great job again Sam di 👏👏👏

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-Prinky-

@-Prinky-

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Posted: 10 years ago

#99

It was an Amazing update..!!!!

like the way u portrayed Zoya's emotional state...

hospital scene with her father, their last convo, the way Zoya reacted after her father's demise & then that bathroom scene was so much emotional...& well written...it feels so real...

I love Asad...the way he was there for her as her strength...

Loved the every bit of it...

continue soon

Thanks for pm 😊