asya TS: Night call of the dogs :) *completed* index @ post no. 1 - Page 30

Originally posted by: -simmi-

Congrats on your first compelete story..
That was good 👍🏼
But dilshad and najma both were in coma at same time.. Lol 😆
Otherwise i loved the update 😳

Originally posted by: MayurChan

Congrats..on First successive completion of your work...
And Update was also Very entertaining..and interesting.

Originally posted by: sweet_tehs

It was a wonderful ending.

Just loved it...

Tanu deserved more than this punishment..

But lol just one slip u made...

How can Dilshad n Najma both go in n out of coma together..

Hehe😆

But again creative liberty.

Continue other stories too n this one too.

Originally posted by: kabhi_asya

Nice story...

All confusions got clear...

Everything is normal and good and that's how it should be...always...

Very well written part...

Originally posted by: azsumay

Hey sue

Very nice update

Congo for story completed

Thanks for pm

Originally posted by: -Prinky-

Hey Sue...Congrats...your story completed👏

Very nice read...

like to see the reunion of family

enjoyed it...!!!!!

Thanks for pm 😊

Originally posted by: nilusoni

its superb

all confusions also got cleared

asya and dilshaad najmaa all are together and happy wow

thanx for pm

plz pm me for other work

Originally posted by: NaughtyRiya

superb ending
like it
thanks for pm

Originally posted by: suearmaniac

<font color="#660000">thanku simmo🤗
haan sahi pakde he🤣...fiction me sab kuch ho sakta he re😆</font>