#2 Asya ff unique love part 18-23 *thread links in the index* @ pg 1

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surbhi

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Posted: 10 years ago

#611

Originally posted by: suganti
awesome and emotional chapter.
love the haldi sequence.
OMG..zoya got injured badly by the knife..hope nothing happens to her.
happy to see everyone's love for zoya.
waiting for the past to be unfold now.

hey...kaha ho yaar aaj kal
seen u less active lately
mished u😃
thanku so much

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surbhi

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Posted: 10 years ago

#612

Originally posted by: jas91
Hi Sue
this time I m not late😆
hehee...ya ur not😆

so haldi ki rasm is going

ASya didn't liked getting painted yellow & were restless 2 see d other

Sibling teasing was nice scene
siblings hote kisliye he akhir? chidhane ke liye na??😆

I m confused knife is tarah tha wahan & no1 noticed its unbelievable😲😕 4 me its error cuz itna bda chaku jo kisi ke seene ke paar ho jaye aasani si dikh skta hai
yep...ur right...but imagine a room full of guests busy in the function and table par itna saara samaan ho...to kisi ko chaaku kese dikhega yaar...yehi to us attacker ki haaath ki safai he😉

& funny part is CCTV lgane aur tight security ke baad bhi haadsa ho gya😲

phir Zoe ki shoulder pe lga I agree blood lose ki wajah se she must have fainted but raat tak hosh na aana is weird 😲😕
cctv ki help aaage truth reveal karne me lenge asad aur ayaan
nd haan raat tak na hosh aane ka reason bhi aage aayega
wait to kar zara😆

Sue yeh kuch zayada hi creative liberty le li tune😆😆

kher every1 was tensed & prayed 4 Zoe

Eric was just like a baby even Asad realized Zoe means a lot 2 him

& finally truth is about 2 come out

I m confused if I want updt soonish or not cuz I want 2 know d raaz but scared cuz of my guess😕

besides Happy ending hogi who toh I know Sue but physical torture 2 Asya is unbearable 2 read but as u said ab change nahi kar sakte. Agla part main shayad na pad paun😭

agla part tu padh sakti he yaar...i too hate writing such things(kya pta me shayad ni likh paungi😆)
tere liye mene zada bekar ni banaya he...thodi der me update karungi
must read...some mini details are important😊
thanku for being early this tym and i just love long comments yar
thanks😉

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surbhi

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Posted: 10 years ago

#613

Originally posted by: Chahanya
res

unres soon😉

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surbhi

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Posted: 10 years ago

#614

Originally posted by: Amin21
very emotional update😭
how everything was going well.
but everything happens for a reason
now asad will find out about zoya's past
eagerly waiting
do try to update ASAP

hey dal😃
oh did i make u said...well i already apologised but again m sorry😳
update aaj pakka

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surbhi

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Posted: 10 years ago

#615

Originally posted by: NaughtyRiya
awesome update
like it

glad u like it
thanku riya😆

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surbhi

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Posted: 10 years ago

#616

Originally posted by: nikii11
ressy
unressy

omg

😲

awesome piece of writing

it was lik I am watching tv show or a film..
hehee...thanku so much nikita
its a big compliment 4 me😃

I was glued to it till the end

both wer craving for each other

sab teasing nd all fun

thuddd a twist in the tale

someone had placed knife in the center table 😲

nd zoya shoulder was sliced..the aim was her heart...bapre ithni katarnak saziish...😲

and haldi turned red due to her blood

this was bloody update filled wth mystrys...

asad got a shock...

admitted her...

eric was shattered cant liv wthout zoe

asad eric bonding nice

nd eric gonna say abt zoe past

aage kya hoga reveal fasttt jaldi karooo😡

orelse i'll plan to murder u wth invisible knife hehehe🤣😈😈