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surbhi

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Posted: 10 years ago

#531

Originally posted by: Chandnii.

Reserved for Choco and Surbhi!😃

thanku for special ressing chandnii 😃
Have unresed
Nd m dying to read more
Update pls

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radadolcevida

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Posted: 10 years ago

#532

Chandnii, I am so sorry, you will hate me 😭
my comment was really long , promise next time, I will be short (maybe one or two paragraph 😃, promise i will start diet 😆)

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ChocoBerry

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Posted: 10 years ago

#533

Originally posted by: Chandnii.

Reserved for Choco and Surbhi! 😃

Chandini 🤗 tha k you for the Res.

I absolutely loved the update. So sensuous, uff. Fanning myself ☺️. The detailing of their love making ☺️ was done so flawlessly Chandini. A brilliant job dear 👏

And then the morning after. Where one expects more romance and more ahem ahem! What did poor Zoya get? An empty house 😲

Her feeling used and left alone again is not baseless. Has a history to support that fate will play bi**h again in her life. But I felt happy seeing her strong (somewhat) take a decision and wanting to go away.

I know it doesn't and wouldn't end here. Waiting to see how you take it further.

Loving the whole concept and your execution of the plot. Update jaldi OK!

Love you dearly Mo... Oops trying 😛... Love you dearly Chandini ❤️🤗

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Mayur Chan

@MayurChan

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Posted: 10 years ago

#534

Very Good and Well written chapt..
But again...the Cruelty strikes...and A Misunderstanding is created..
Why do i feel that...Someone yaa Dilshaad only must have come and Asad went to receive...her.
Starting part and Zoya's confession was good and I don't feel in any way she is wrong...about making a life for whatever reason she...said.
Interesting part..
Its a request plzz...don't let this seperation and MU for a longer time.
Continue soonish.

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nilusoni

@nilusoni

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Posted: 10 years ago

#535

Gr8 part

Asya romance soo hot

Omg but end is cliffy and shocking

Excited for next part

Thanks for pm

Plz pm me for next part

Continue soon

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Asif

@asifiqbalsh

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Posted: 10 years ago

#536

Wonderful update
Both love each other but stopped bc they didn't want to ruin the mood. Zoya scene at end was heartbroken. Hope Asad will come on time & stop her. Waiting for next update soon. Thanks for pm

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Nav

@kabhi_asya

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Posted: 10 years ago

#537

Oh my god... It was amazing...

There emotional support and concession...

Then...hot and sexy encounter...

And in the morning... Everything shattered..

Why... What happened...??

Where is asad..and zoya is thinking all the negative things...

Plzz..plz...make it right...

And update soon...

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JASLEEN

@Jasleenkaur01

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Posted: 10 years ago

#538

It was super hot...

Asad zoya emotions were written beautifully...

Loved the part...

Continue soon...

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jas91

@jas91

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Posted: 10 years ago

#539

No res 4 me katti Chandu😭

updt was Superb

Zoya explained her reason 2 have a baby

She just wanted 2 have some1 who will be hers only but that was outcome of her Mother who used 2 come in her dreams

But I loved it ki now Zoe is more happy wid baby as its wid Asad whom she has fallen in love😃

Their love making was hot & intense as always u write these parts wid ease😉

Both have had slip of tongue almost confessing their love but 1 qstn did other person caught that incomplete ILU or not ?

D end was emotional Asad has gone somewhere & Zoe is thinking he left her 🥺

her breakdown was absolutely fantastic she's blaming her cruel fate Trust is gone & shedding tears on her lost love.😭😭

Ab kar kuch Chandu😡😭

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-silentbang-

@-silentbang-

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Posted: 10 years ago

#540

Hawwtt update 😳

Where are u asad ???

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