New ASYA SS : A Deal Close To Her Heart! PART 11 - PAGE 103 ~ 19/03/16 - Page 36

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Posted: 10 years ago
res😃
unres
ok here I m wid my super late comnt😳😳
both part 5 & 6 were basically same wid Asad & Zoya's POV
1st it was Asad's
it stared wid him admiring d pic he snapped of Zoya widout her knowledge & thinking how beautiful she is inside & outside that's true😛
earlier d night Asad asked Zoya 2 shift 1 day b4 despo he is & even Zoya eagerly agreed😆😆
Gharke staff ko chute bhi de di aur same Room main bhi shift ho gaye MR Khan😆😆
his monologue that he felt he had given himself 2 her intentionally was very nice
true both have given themselves 2 each other widout their knowledge or they know but don't admit😉
they felt shy & embarrassed at start of d evening but later threw their sharmo hya our of KV😳
their sweet yet passionate kisses were magical 2 read
Soon both couldn't wait 4 more but Asad wanted 2 make it special & both groomed themselves 2 impressed each other I like what I see oops read😆😆
both shamelessly admired & complimented & finally claimed each other
D love making or I say baby making was very passionate & intense & at d same time overwhelming u gave it an emotional touch which should b there👍🏼
nxt came Zoys's POV
she was hesitant 1st but didn't wanna lose 1 extra night😉
she kept d dress simple & sexy were 4 later😳😆
Zoya's checkout session zyada detail likha kyun Mona Darling KSG AAK hai isliye😳😉
She was touched wid Asad's small gestures like dismissing house help keeping in mind their privacy & calling Zoya all d week asking things she will need awe so sweet of him
All his care & gentleness has struck a chord in heart ❤️
she feel pampered precious cherished happy satisfied secure & at home in his arms.
Zoya agar itna sab feel hota hai toh what more u want just marry d man & do d love making & baby making as much u want 4 d rest of ur life.😉😆
Mona darling Fantastic piece of work 👏👏
I know maine humor dalne ko bola tha but its ok I loved this style as well
Baby making process was big hit ab jaldi aage ka likho😃
Love u sweetu
Take care always🤗
Edited by jas91 - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago


Hi guys!


😃



How ya doing?


One question...


Can I put this story on hold tooo? And run away?


😳



Yeah, that's all!

Thanks!
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: mona12345




Hi guys!


😃



How ya doing?


One question...


Can I put this story on hold tooo? And run away?


😳



Yeah, that's all!

Thanks!


Whattt..???? Nooo 🤢
no no yr plzzz..
we are such lovely ppl..dont do this to us..
ab jldi se update and make us pls..
pls pls..
jas91 thumbnail
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: mona12345



Hi guys!


😃



How ya doing?


One question...


Can I put this story on hold tooo? And run away?


😳



Yeah, that's all!

Thanks!

Han ttu kar hold phir main btati hun tujhe😡😡
yahan incomplete storiyan likhne aati hai kya
aur hume wait karke stane ke liye😭😭
upar wala unres main jo I love u bola who cancel I hate u "turning my face other side"
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: mona12345



Hi guys!


😃



How ya doing?


One question...


Can I put this story on hold tooo? And run away?


😳



Yeah, that's all!

Thanks!


of course you can, 😃

but think about again

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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: mona12345




Hi guys!


😃



How ya doing?


One question...


Can I put this story on hold tooo? And run away?


😳



Yeah, that's all!

Thanks!

no yaar 😭 😭 😭 continue this
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Posted: 10 years ago
are you serious?????
Don't be so cruel
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: jas91

res😃
unres
ok here I m wid my super late comnt😳😳
both part 5 & 6 were basically same wid Asad & Zoya's POV
1st it was Asad's
it stared wid him admiring d pic he snapped of Zoya widout her knowledge & thinking how beautiful she is inside & outside that's true😛
earlier d night Asad asked Zoya 2 shift 1 day b4 despo he is & even Zoya eagerly agreed😆😆
Gharke staff ko chute bhi de di aur same Room main bhi shift ho gaye MR Khan😆😆
his monologue that he felt he had given himself 2 her intentionally was very nice
true both have given themselves 2 each other widout their knowledge or they know but don't admit😉
they felt shy & embarrassed at start of d evening but later threw their sharmo hya our of KV😳
their sweet yet passionate kisses were magical 2 read
Soon both couldn't wait 4 more but Asad wanted 2 make it special & both groomed themselves 2 impressed each other I like what I see oops read😆😆
both shamelessly admired & complimented & finally claimed each other
D love making or I say baby making was very passionate & intense & at d same time overwhelming u gave it an emotional touch which should b there👍🏼
nxt came Zoys's POV
she was hesitant 1st but didn't wanna lose 1 extra night😉
she kept d dress simple & sexy were 4 later😳😆
Zoya's checkout session zyada detail likha kyun Mona Darling KSG AAK hai isliye😳😉
She was touched wid Asad's small gestures like dismissing house help keeping in mind their privacy & calling Zoya all d week asking things she will need awe so sweet of him
All his care & gentleness has struck a chord in heart ❤️
she feel pampered precious cherished happy satisfied secure & at home in his arms.
Zoya agar itna sab feel hota hai toh what more u want just marry d man & do d love making & baby making as much u want 4 d rest of ur life.😉😆

Hahaha.. Hi Jassy! 😳
Kaisi hai? Kidhar thi tu?
I missed you so mch. :(
Yes, very desperate to be with each other, spend some more time with each other, also, yes, they are stupid people who are unnecessarily complicating their lives, and making it difficult for me to write a balanced story! 😕😆

I think I'll just get them married and finish the story! Hai na?!😃😃😆
Mona darling Fantastic piece of work 👏👏

Aww! Thank you Janemann! :*

I know maine humor dalne ko bola tha but its ok I loved this style as well

Yeh story main humor shayad himilega, One because its a different story line and two because main likh hi nahi pa rahi ! 😵
Baby making process was big hit ab jaldi aage ka likho😃
Love u sweetu
Take care always🤗

Love you too , babydoll!
You too! 🤗
P.S: Like always, I loved loved your comment! It's so sweet of you to leave back these detailed feedback!⭐️
Mwah! x

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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: cutie15


Whattt..???? Nooo 🤢
no no yr plzzz..
we are such lovely ppl..dont do this to us..
ab jldi se update and make us pls..
pls pls..


Hahaha,,

Hi Cutie,

you guys sure are lovley people! 😃

Yeah, I'm facing a bit of a block right now. I'm writing at snails speed.. which is why ... But I'll try to work something out,

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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: jas91

Han ttu kar hold phir main btati hun tujhe😡😡

Hhaha.. Darr gayi main tere se! 🤢🤢🤣
yahan incomplete storiyan likhne aati hai kya

Hahhaaha, okay this really cracked me up, even though it shouldnt have! (besharam me :P)
aur hume wait karke stane ke liye😭😭
upar wala unres main jo I love u bola who cancel I hate u "turning my face other side"

Peace woman! I love you okay, and I love I love yous, dont change stuff! 🤔
Maarungi teko! 😳

Acha but seriously, sorry lekin aajkal likh nahi paa rahi main, toh thodasa time lagege... hopefully I'll complete the next chapter soon. Aaj hi start kiya hai, one parah- current status. so please be patient and non- violent! 😳😆

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