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Azraa

@Azraa01

Voyager

Posted: 10 years ago

#301

And they Still dont know they have bad ideas of their halves...

Please let them introduce themselves very soon

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asadzoyaqubool

@asadzoyaqubool

Explorer

Posted: 10 years ago

#302

Super update

dey met again

nw dey r frnds

hpe dey recognize soon

thnks fr pm

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Priya_KABHI

@PriyaKABHI

Sparkler

Posted: 10 years ago

#303

Thanks for PM,Dear.😊

It was Super Part.😊

Zoya's Pov was just Amazing.😊

The feelings of Zoya on Asad(KSG) was same as Asad(KSG) had on her,it was so Interesting.😊

The way Zoya describing the incidents with Asad(KSG) was so Nice.😊

But still she also loves his Love Asad(KSG) only like him,it was so Interesting.😊

The Pool Part was Amazing.😊

The feelings of ASYA(KABHI) on holding each other was so Cute.😳

It was so Interesting that ASYA(KABHI) became Friends.😊

But they didn't said their names to each other,It was so interesting.😊

Please Update Next Part soon,I am waiting here.😊

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(MISSING KSG and KABHI So Much)

PriyaCherry.

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ikhlass

@ikhlass

Navigator

Posted: 10 years ago

#304

loved reading Zoya's pov, her first pov was so touching, she desperately want to find her loved one. Asad pov are always funny, they make me laugh... Both are irresistibly attracted to each other but their hearts want to remain loyal to their respective first love... Their souls already recognized themselves. Now they are friends, let's see where this friendship is going to take them.

Please continue the suspense i don't want them to know their real identity so soon, the misunderstandings are so much more funny 😛 Bravo for this chapter 👏

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radadolcevida

@radadolcevida

Voyager

+ 2

Posted: 10 years ago

#305

I was waiting for this chapter and I am really happy that you posted it finally.😃

It was really interesting to see her pov, she looked more touched by this miss than Asad, maybe women emotions contained more words than men, who knows?

it was beautifully written and well described. Her obsession about Asad, spending years waiting for a dream, it keeps her alive and in love for so long, that she missed many things. She loved to stay alone and she satisfied herself with his image. I can understand and in this you really nail it. The intensity of her need and her hope was perfect.

Well coming to her present, she was obsessed by his eyes and he sounded familiar to her, his touches, his look, but still not his face. So as I guess, she ignored him the first time she saw him in the wedding, he wasn't so discret afterall, men 😆. I can't blame him, his soul recognize her but not his eyes.

It was really nice that you show in this chapter, the parallel of her feeling with this stranger, like Asad had with her, but both were still loyal to their old love. Asad saw her tattoo and she saw the same, but thought it was an N. Really nice detail, I must say. They did it after they left each other? or maybe I miss one point.

Anyway, it was really good chapter, full of her heart, emotion and intensity, she looked strong and confident as an artist, but so devasted inside. I love how you portray her character, I love this kind of women, who knows what she wanted but still was fragile inside due to emotion.

Beautiful chapter and really well paint, continue soon

PS: so sorry, that i didn't comment earlier, i was a bit busy those days 😕

Edited by radadolcevida - 10 years ago

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sasir

@sasir

Dazzler

Posted: 10 years ago

#306

Nice
But once again they missed it

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sweet_tehs

@sweet_tehs

Sparkler

+ 2

Posted: 10 years ago

#307

It was just awesome.

I loved the way both their pov's were there at the same situation...

Loved Asya here.

N I'm falling in love with this story as well sue just like unique love..

The beach party was fun.

But wanted to yell at Sakshi she came at such a wrong time.

Don't know when they will actually find each other.

Continue real soon.

Thanks for the pm.

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sweet_tehs

@sweet_tehs

Sparkler

+ 2

Posted: 10 years ago

#308

Originally posted by: suearmaniac

hey dearie😳
nice to see ur finally here😃
thanks a ton😆
haan itna change nahi hote
but then it differs frm person to person na
tumhari tasalli ke liye
imagine that asad joined jim
so he;s become a man frm a boy
nd as for zoya...umh ok this is funny
socho ki zoya moti hogi bohat (esa he nahi par u can think to give ur questions and confusions a halt😆)
aur ab wo patli hogai🤣
smart nd sexy ho gai😆

ok enough of joking
its a fiction so yeah chalta he yaar😳
thanks again😳
i hope u enjoy wat u read