Cupcakes & Barbells [ON HIATUS] (A/N: Pg27, Apr 29/16)

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-Prinky-

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Posted: 10 years ago

#51

Wow...!!!! A New Sweet Story...

Loved the concept...

Asya's bickering is always a treat...it seems like Asad loved to fight with Zoya...

waiting eagerly for the next update...

Thankew so much for pm 😊

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Chandnii.

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Posted: 10 years ago

#52

Hi Astonm,

I, absolutely loved this story of yours.

It's so very well written.

Extremely gripping.

Waiting to read the next part.

Also, I've read a few one shots written by you and must I say , I'm a fan of your writing❤️

So I'm sending you a buddy request,would love PMs to your write-ups.

~Chandni! x

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vj2102

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Posted: 10 years ago

#53

This sounds like fun.. Can't wait to read more

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astonm

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Posted: 10 years ago

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Abi

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Posted: 10 years ago

#55

Edited by -ABI- - 10 years ago

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thefangirllife

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Posted: 10 years ago

#56

RES!

UNRES!

Ahhh!

"I wouldn't even follow you on Twitter!"

ASYA FEELS ARE KILLING ME.

Lmfao, I love that Asad followed her to Starbucks while talking to himself, who is the mystery man?

Lol, and Zoya with the cupcake squishing and the cake, eeks, I wonder what she's gonna do.

OMG. MY ARSHI FEELS FOR THIS ONE ARE OUT OF THIS UNIVERSE. SO CUTE I CAN IMAGINE IT ALL. THE STORE THING WAS SO CUTE AND THE "OUR KIDS" COMMENT.

Update soon Anjali! I am dying, I love this story so much already!

Edited by kmh2lover - 10 years ago

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fatima30

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Posted: 10 years ago

#57

Brilliant update...Arshi are adorable!
Looking forward to Zoya's idea for Asad's birthday cakes!

Who was the mystery man? Poor Asad is so down in the dumps since he saw Zoya with that man!
Zoya's reaction to those girls' comments was hilarious!

They've both got it so bad yet they're so stubborn! lol

As always I'm loving your story! 😃

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radadolcevida

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Posted: 10 years ago

#58

res

unres

Well we had a few of Asya and a lot of Arshi. I don't know much about the serial but it was interesting to have a glimpse of them, even as a newbie on them, it was need.

I guess this new man was Haider, an old cousin of her or her best friend.It's just a prediction.

Honestly, I started to write a new story really close to yours about cupcakes but not barbells, but your were faster than me to publish in IF. Mine will be different and it involves their meeting and the track will be about competition between Asad and Zoya's store for selling cakes and so one. And in my story, there is the same twist as you, he is an army and his name is Haider (that's why I predicted this 😆).

Just a coincidence 😃. Anyway, you are one of my favorite writer here and I love your way to write, it's always fresh. And I am glad that I have an idea close to you, I am not so bad afterall.

Anyway, thank you for this story and update soon

Edited by radadolcevida - 10 years ago