AsYa Story - Smooch The Mooch! On hold for a while. - Page 5

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Posted: 10 years ago
#41
Really love this chapter 😃
I love how Zoya answered back to Asad, his jealousy don't give him the right to talk badly at her, and I love her in this 👏

I guess Zoya has nowhere to stay and I am glad that he found her in time.

His excuse was hilarious, she got an extramarrital affair for a change it's not a man 😆, I love his speech and his concern in some way.
I am really impatient what will happen next between them?

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Posted: 10 years ago
#42
That's superb and loved it
Asya were mindblowing
Asad's description for zoya hillarious
Excited for next part
Thanks for pm
Plz pm me for next part
Continue soon
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Posted: 10 years ago
#43
Awesome Concept As usual ...👍🏼

Just Love It...😊

Both Parts Are Amazing...

Every Scene Is Mind-Blowing...👏

I Love Asya Fight Too Much...⭐️

I Like The Name Nobel King...😉

Update Next Part Soon...😃

Thanks For Pm...😎
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Posted: 10 years ago
#44
brilliant update...Zoya is homeless...?
last part was hilarious...kids names were too funny!
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Posted: 10 years ago
#45
welcome back juliet.
you havent lost your touch at all.
i cant wait to know whats zoya's story here. .

Btw how did you lose butterflies?

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Posted: 10 years ago
#46
Hey Juliet,
Its amazing that you have started another story. It had been forever since THE BUTTERFLIES ended. Put that story back on IF soon. Thanks for the pm. I missed you :) I'll drop comments regarding this story after giving it a read. I have always been a silent reader and you kept sending me PMs :D Thanks!
Love Z.
Edited by iluvarmaanmalik - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
#47
Wohoo...u r back juliet
N wid a new story...awsm...
I ws such a big fan of d butterflies...I m so sorry dat u lost it...it ws a gr8 piece...
now cmng back to d new story abt asad who is super rich (wid 7 billions) n zoya d smarty pants out here who claims to b d owner of half of his property...obviously asad wont give...but dere interactions r a treat to read...
I also lyk dis jasmine n farz...
n abt zoya's story...it think she really needs dat money fr something imp may b...n wid her sleeping at a railway twrminal gvs an idea abt how badly she needs it
but d convo wid d station master ws d bst part...shit...he called him as his wife on d first instant...n thn poplu chotu n motu...seriously mr khan...what an innovation...
l b waiting fr d nxt part
thnx fr d pm btw
Edited by tacker_karan - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
#48
Loved it
Asad n his antics...I love him here
But still confused...about zoya n asad's family.
I guess it might be cleared in future updates...
All the best for your book...
Pls continue soon...
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Posted: 10 years ago
#49
Loved it!
LOL at his made up stories!
hahaha

Thanks for the PM

Cant wait for the next update!
XXX
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Posted: 10 years ago
#50
I was thinking about the Butterflies today Juliet
😭
Its funny Im reading Romeo and Juliet rn
Do post your new story
Would love to read it
So just to be clear
The Butterflies is forever gone
Like you don't have it on your laptop and stuff
😔
I loved the story btw
My fav line

Poplu won't stop screaming because she wants your boobies at night.

Lol
Im dying
🤣

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