New Asya SS:Crossing time, chap 14 (LAST); 08-11-15

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Abi

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Posted: 10 years ago

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muskaan17rocks

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Posted: 10 years ago

#552

Amazing chapter

Loved reading it

And i must say very emotional. U actually made me cry with the zed leo flashback and a little in akram's flashback too😉

This was so beautifully written that i am really speechless about it

Looking forward to the next chapter to see the real asad / leo

Please try to continue soon

Will be waiting impatiently 😊

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Arpita_Mirage

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Posted: 10 years ago

#553

Beautiful update

Very emotional

Finally Asad is free from all the burdens

The person who was the reason for his misery himself helped him to come out of it...

Zoya lost a life during the surgery and now in danger..

Do continue soon..

Want to read more on Leo and Zed.

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Shaila Banu

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Posted: 10 years ago

#554

WWWOOOWWW Rada just love it yaar 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏
ur just awesome writer 🤗 ❤️
Isse jayada kuch nei bol sakti
continue sooon😃

Edited by shailu123 - 10 years ago

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sasir

@sasir

Dazzler

Posted: 10 years ago

#555

Awesome...
Superb...
Bowing down literally...
Wat u said in this chapters are one of the best lessons of life...
Very greatful to u for sharing it in such a beautiful way...
Felt every emotion to core...
Amazing...
Crying buckets literally ...

Thank u

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sweet_tehs

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Posted: 10 years ago

#556

It was beautifully written Rada...

Very emotional...

The flashbacks, Asad Akram convo...

The hospital scene..

Everything seemed perfect..

Finally everyone is at peace ...

Continue soon.

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Kabhibloom

@Kabhibloom

Voyager

Posted: 10 years ago

#557

Awesome chapter

Just loved it

The flashbacks of Leo, Zed n Akram were very emotional.

Asad got rid of his misery from who caused it

Finally everything started to fall in place

Excited for next chapter

Wanna see the real Asad/Leo.

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Sumi Roy

@LoveSonu2408

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Posted: 10 years ago

#558

U knw,i lv all ur writings,bt ths is the most i lk & lv 2 read more n more.
The past nd present merging r beautiful.
The akram who mk leo 2 asad,only he let him free.thr convo of past & specialy present is beautiful.
In ths all chaoas wht happen with zoya thts unfortunate..
Lets c hw it goes nxt.thnks 4 pm.cntinu soon.i lv ths stry 4m bottom of my heart.

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aseela sha

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Dazzler

Posted: 10 years ago

#559

Wow Radha darling hats off to u

Bravo dear

Brilliant update

Everything is in check dear

Perfect by all means

The scene shifts from past & present u blended it very well always

Akram Asad scene was so touching & brave too

Zoya is facing her bad time once more

I love u darling

I know u will become a great great writer one day

U have the potential to keep the readers so keen & breathless

U are perfect by all means dear

May Allah bless u darling everything in this life & life after death

I cant express how i am feeling now.

I am soo soo proud of u

When u will become famous i dont know if i am with u or not but always remember i will be soo happy that day .I am praying for that day to come soon

Pls update soon

Thank u soo much for pm

Love u dear

Take care

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radadolcevida

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Posted: 10 years ago

#560

Originally posted by: muskaan17rocks
Amazing chapter
Loved reading it
And i must say very emotional. U actually made me cry with the zed leo flashback and a little in akram's flashback too😉
This was so beautifully written that i am really speechless about it
Looking forward to the next chapter to see the real asad / leo
Please try to continue soon
Will be waiting impatiently 😊

thank u so much
Yes, indeed it was very emotional one and finally, everything was clear about their seperation. it was important to show why Asad was feeling so guilty.
In the next chapter, you will see how he will save Zoya and his new him.
I will try to update earlier than one month 😕