AsYa(KaBhi)SS: Dil Dhadakne Do. (Completed) - Page 13

Originally posted by: -hotsauce-

Loved it!

Can't wait till they meet in the next update!

Update soon! :)

Originally posted by: ayat20

Waiting for their meeting as childhood sweethearts

Originally posted by: Amin21

Wow what a surprise?!

Awesome update yaar👏

brilliant job👍🏼

their convo about warning and being innocent was so so so lovely❤️

really enjoyed reading it

btw what was that card changing for?

Isn't zoya going to stay at asad's house😕

Waiting for it

Originally posted by: -ABI-

unres
well Aish update was something so Flawless & something so Awesome
I compeletly l❤️ve it
&
further more I've something in my mind as a Title of this SS.
I want U to give it a thought.
So,how about: "Childwood Love"?

Originally posted by: nilusoni

Wonderful part loved it

Aaya are totally opposite and cute

Excited for their meet

Thank for pm

Plz pm me for next part

Continue soon

Originally posted by: cutie15

Wow. Amazing. Superb. Mind blowing.
I'm loving this so much..:)
It is so good..
so interesting and so gripping. .
I wanna read more and more..
asad and zoya hav such striking chemistry..!.
loving their nok jhoks.. such gud memories associated with it..!
Awesome. . :)

Originally posted by: angel_juhi04

Dunno how u write so big chapters wid hindi-urdu words at d age of 13? Luks like u are a proper company to Riddhi n KSGmaniac(dunno her real name). KSGmaniac is just 12 n Riddhi is 13 or 14.

Unres

Awesome Start Aishu👏😊

Asad n Zoya r in d same train

Yaar, Zoya is too much🥱. Asad was right dat even nursery kids eat properly than her.

Zoya is a wedding planner & Asad is an architect so dis may not be one of those boss n employee type stories

I seriously hate Zeenat yaar cuz she is always after Zoya to get married😡

Luks like Asad n Zoya r childhood friends😉

Originally posted by: angel_juhi04

Unresed comment of Part 1 on Page 2😊

Awesome Part Aishu👏😊

Zoya continues her stupid antics n Asad gets irritated

Zoya is afraid of a cockroach🤣

Zoya threatens him wid pepper spray n karate😆

They exchanged their numbers😃

They did not told each other their names otherwise they have doubted abt each other being childhood sweethearts😉

How much page u tuk in MS-Word to write a part?😛

Originally posted by: MayurChan

Heyy Aishwa... 😃
Well a wonderful , well written and a Fabulous part... 👏 ⭐️
Zoya & her antics always are fun and amusing to read...😆
Their seems to be a bond being developed between ASYA unknowingly...now eagerly waiting for the first meeting... 😉
Continue soon... 😳

Originally posted by: suearmaniac

So awesome update dear!
Love it!
Train journey over nd asya said their parting words
bt obvio! They were nt departing words
so asya gonna meet as childhood frnds!
A kiss!
Lets see if The AAK can do it!
Abt the title
will thnk that nd let u knw
ur story's idea is asya childhud frnds
bt whn they meet they don't recognise each other
thn again they develop a gud acknwledgement nd exchanged no. Too
so i was thnking of the title related to fate. Bt still i'll ponder upon it somemore
ty 4 pm
will b waiting 4 nxt 1