New ASYA SS : I Forget You Not, Note PG 124, 04/07/2015 - Page 87

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Posted: 10 years ago
Hey Choco,
I dont know where to start from. Honestly am so ashamed of delaying posting a comment here. Plz excuse me for being such a laxy person :(


Coming to the parts, no need to say dat I loveeed it to bits. Absolutely wonderful.

Asad's concern for Zoe warmed my heart. Even after how she behaved with him through out the day, he didnt leave till she was inside. The way he gave her space and watched from far made me respect him even more. He knew she wouldnt take help from him at the first chance, only as a last measurement.


Ok.. I run short of words, honestly, to describe how perfectly you've described every single thing in the car. Their emotions, the thick silence, inner thoughts, silent conversation through eyes and The SONG. I think this song was made only for this situation. It was just so apt. Portrayed their conflicting emotions and shattering hearts so well. You know I cried reading this part :,, (


The hurt and agony AsYa were going through made my heart break. My poor babies. Zoe's last words to him before running away make me wish to lock AsYa in a room till they sort out their differences.


This part was sort of comforting. Hope blossomed within me seeing so many people on Asad's side and ready to help him win his love.


Rashid and Dils have once again proved to be the best parents one could ask for. Their unconditional support and love at this critical time in their son's life is heart touching. Not many are like them.


Shipra.. She really deserves the title of Zoe's best friend. The way she cares and looks out for Zoe is touching. She even stood tall in front of Asad to protect her friend until he convinced her of his intentions and confirmed his love for Zoya. She even explained the whole scenario to Mr. Kapoor. I really admire this man. Despite having her work as his secretary and maintaining a professional repo at office, he never fails to care for her. How he declared Zoe was like his daughter confirmed his good intentions n heart.


Ok. This is getting interesting. 3 against 1. Poor Zoya. Has no one on her side. Lol. Kidding. She has everyone of them on her side. Each one looking out for her happiness in their own way. Cant wait to see what they plot to make her confess or bring her closer to Asad.

Choco yaar, sach mein u r not upset wid me na for not replying earlier? Sorry..

Love you.. infinitely. Muaaah
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Posted: 10 years ago
Hey everyone,

I don't know how far it's true that we cannot post comment just thanking people for reading our stories, some new rule or something id read somewhere on IF, so am not doing that now, will see what I find more on it.


For now, this is the place I would like to dedicate to all you beautiful readers that I have who always leave behind so much love for me. Thank you all for liking the part. I hope all this plan stuff am able to write well and it all lives up to your expectations


Ankie darling... Welcome hai on my thread 🤗, am glad you remembered that I miss your cute comments and you took time out to leave me this cutest comment. Abhi no going MIA again . Aate rehna and Hume happy karte rehna with your cute cute comments. 😃


Nims, how many times am I going to tell you to never say sorry for being late. I know the reasons and don't mind you being late, as I already know you love the update 😉


Annie, agar mujhe kha liya toh update kaun likhega 😛😆. But don't worry I will be updating on Monday, pakka 👍🏼


Mayur, Monday tak wait kar lo please 😳


Love you all so so much 🤗
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Posted: 10 years ago
hey I m ur new reader and luvg dis story plZz pm me ...
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Posted: 10 years ago
Hey choco
Don't worry
Your readers are eagerly waiting for next update count me in
But take you time
We will wait
Come soon with update

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Posted: 10 years ago
waiting for monday to come!!!!!
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Posted: 10 years ago

Thanks dear. Hope to see you on the second thread too 😃
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Posted: 10 years ago
Can you please inbox me the link for thread 2. Its not opening.
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Posted: 10 years ago
I'm catching up with this story, I absolutely enjoyed the intensity of chapter ten, more especially because of the song, downloaded it a few days ago and since listening to it on loop, looking forward to the next chapters. P.S. I love Asad, especially the determined one!
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: MisHumptyDumpty



Look who is here

Swagat nahi karoge ap hamara?

Hmm. This story is really good. Jawani ka Falling in love. Realization. And then comes Yea Dooriyaaan In Rahoo ki dooriyaaan... much needed for any love to be muqqamaal
Liking the way Asad is determined. The purane butterflies the indifference and everything it is now and how it is shaping


So refreshing to read


But when will you update

Bye bye


Me 😳


Your signature! 🥺
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Posted: 9 years ago
sorry aapi i lost dis story some where may b large breaks betwn updating stories made me do tat...now i wil get back to job like a gud girl...chap 7...wowww beutiful part...dey met after 7 years...my asya
beutifuly n amazingly written aapi...

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