New ASYA SS : I Forget You Not, Note PG 124, 04/07/2015

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Abi

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Posted: 10 years ago

#771

Update Aapi

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Chandnii.

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Posted: 10 years ago

#772

Mine.

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Hiii! 😃

Sorry am late again. Same usual reason! 🤢

Coming to the update,

Kitna beautifully the emotions were written ,I could feel it while reading.

oh the intense eye-locks, accidental touching & the heart beats racing!

I like Asad losing his patience to make sure Zoya drops her stupid resolute of staying away from him. Whyy ?

When she told him how it was all in the past, years ago only for a few days💔😭

As much as it hurt him, Asad obviously can read her better and her eyes do give her away anyway so yay!

"You were still inside, how could I have gone without seeing you leave for home?"

Aww! Sweet boy!

The car ride was an adorable read! 😳

"Home! Where else?"

So do you want to go to my home?"

YES!!!! PLEASE!! 😃

The last bit was heart wrenching!

It's very difficult to write such emotional scenes and you were perfect at it, Chocs! 👏

your words pulled at heart strings!

And the song selection was spot on!

Can't wait to read more.. how Asad gets her to tell him about all that has happened and how he wins her back! Please jaldi jaldi next part likh do.. waitinggg 😳

love you! ❤️

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Binzzz

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Posted: 10 years ago

#773

nice update...
loved the vehicle scene...
emotional one...
hope zoya will take a good decision soon...
continue soon

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ASYAaishu

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Posted: 10 years ago

#774

love the update... that was my fav song..

i thoroughly enjoyed.. plz continue...

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Gulaabo

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Posted: 10 years ago

#775

thanks yumi darling for reserving a place for me

choco...what can i say!? this update made me cry throughout...this much pain mingled with unsaid emotions!!

heartbreaking...

thank god asad has started on his mission "MAKE ZOYA CONFESS"

continue soon...i am waiting for things to change for good

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Avie

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Dazzler

Posted: 10 years ago

#776

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Berry..😊😊

Finally update aa gaya.. 😛 Was waiting for so long.. 😃

This was such an intense yet beautiful chapter..😳

Its clear both have feelings for each other.. I wish Zoya would just accept them.. 😕

Heartbeats race, accidental touches, intense eye-locks.. And she wants to deny it.. 😕

Asad loses his patience.. Its not his fault.. He has been yearning for her for years and now that they are face-to-face, she is denying anything.. I felt so bad for him when Zoya said how it happened three years ago and they were together for five days only..

Little she knew, that it may take just 5 seconds for somebody to fall in love.. 😳

Asad's sweet gesture waiting for her outside her office.. 😳😳

The car ride was just beautifully written.. Eyelocks and that song!! ❤️

That's my new favourite.. Its has been continuously playing on my Ipod for days now.. And you used it here.. I was so happy!! 😃😃

Finally Asad tells her how he felt when he couldn't find her all those years.. 😳 I feel really bad for him.. All that he went through. And Zoya too.. Its high time she comes to terms with her feelings.. 😳😳

Asad is determined to find the reason for her aloofness.. 😃 Can't wait for him to find out.. 😃

A beautifully written update Berry.. The emotions and the feelings that you portray are just too good and I kind of feel them through your reading.. 😳😳

Write soon... Waiting! 😃

Love you loads!! ❤️

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Annie

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Posted: 10 years ago

#777

Yayy an update!!!

Resss :D

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This was such an emotional but a very well written part Choco! The way you portray AsYa's emotions is flawless :)

Zoya is really determined here, so hell bent on fighting her emotions...but I'm glad Asad is also the stubborn one here :D Poor thing is confused right now.

Update soon Choco-lateeyyy :D Take careee:)

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Mayur Chan

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Posted: 10 years ago

#778

Originally posted by: yumna.imad
Res 😃

ok since this is the last post of this page... This spot goes to

Saima Aapi, Nims , Baby doll, Golu , Affu , Behna, Jas , Mayur , Hena, Adi , Srash Api and for rest of my family 😆

Thank You so soo much Yumna for the Res*.
Helloo Choco..
THanx alot for the PM..
Well this was an emotional , well written and a very bery good part.
Well Choco the control and grip you have on emotions about AsYa...everytime U write is impeccable...and flawless..right from LOVE HAPPENS days...
So here also as i said every thing was spot on...Zoya is fighting it hard with her emotions , feelings and her Heart...to give in to her pleading..but...yes She is really really decided and made up to be on her decision to not to fall...somewhere she might be esctatic and Happy that Asad also reciprocates her feelings...they share the same love..and they both were affected by this pain and seperation...but I only feel this is going to be a tough fight for Asad...to mend her walls...and thus their LOVE would win...
As far as Asad...he just fighting with himself...to break free and held Zoya to himself and heal her...but again his rational self is stopping him I guess.
Perfecto Update..
Loved it.
Continue soonish..