New ASYA SS : I Forget You Not, Note PG 124, 04/07/2015

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Uzma Ahmed

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Posted: 10 years ago

#731

Awesome update..continue soon 😊 Can't wait to see how they both open up to each other

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nilusoni

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Posted: 10 years ago

#732

Awesome part

Asya meeting and little closeness wow

Thanks for pm

Plz pm me for next part

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Mayur Chan

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Posted: 10 years ago

#733

Hey Choco...
How are You..?
Hope You are fine..!!!
Well this was a Well written and a Wonderful part...
The lift part was so so methodic like you can sit and visualize that infront of your eyes...in your mind offcourse..
Emotions Undone...hoped to prosper..but got controlled and were stopped at a painful yet hopeful junction..
Mr.Kapoor got hurt...Yaa yeh koi saazish hai...Kuch toh Gadbad hai...Rashid Abbu aur unke dost kahin mil toh nahi gayi..
Shipra's reaction was awesome and amusing...
Waiting eagerly for the next part..
Continue soonish..

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sasir

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Posted: 10 years ago

#734

Nice
Hope they will be together soon

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sj_qh_kabhi

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Posted: 10 years ago

#735

Awesome update..loved it.

the elevator scene was so cute..the way asad described zoya rxns was just so sweet..

nd their cabin s ene was so intense..!
Nd shipra is a clever girl. .I like how she made zoya fall..yay we got a choto sa romantic moment..hehe..
nd yeah its no orob you can take your time and then give us such amazing updates..;)

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Annie

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Posted: 10 years ago

#736

Hey Choco, hope you're fine :)

Such a great update. Loved every bit of it :)

The elevator scene ws so damn adorable! I luv ur FF wala Asad. ;) Liked their Lil closeness, hope to see them more open wid each other :)

Take ur time dea <3 Take care :)

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Saima Syed

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Posted: 10 years ago

#737

Res

Unres

Wow

Double wow

I loved it ChocoBerry

I felt like I was feeling exactly what they felt. My heart went out to both of them but was inclined more towards Asad

Can't wait for him to woo her back and for her to finally give in to her inner feelings and embrace him and his love that is so pure

Mwah

Edited by Saima-Syed - 10 years ago