New ASYA SS : I Forget You Not, Note PG 124, 04/07/2015

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Sadia Sharmeen Swapno

@swapno

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Posted: 10 years ago

#431

Life is testing them...!
So will they meet in Delhi??
Or fate will play a role here too...
Like Asad comes to Bhoopal to find her but she is gone
and he will be heart broken...!
Waiting for the readers fate now...!
Loved the update 😊

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kaju27

@kaju27

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Posted: 10 years ago

#432

you portrayed every emotions so well...
asad's eagerness to go to bhopal...then rashid's health conditions...
he postponed his programm for 15 days...i think its not correct tym for their love..
they both are fulfilling their responsibilities towards their parents...
zoya's part was so painful... her dreams crashed down... now their house sold too...
now she is in delhi to start new chapter of her life nd struggles are part of it...
i thinik zoya will get job in rashid's company...nd their i guess she will meet asad

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Kanwal4salman

@Kanwal4salman

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Posted: 10 years ago

#433

Superb update..
Waiting for asya meeting
update soon

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paru

@enthusiastic

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+ 4

Posted: 10 years ago

#434

its heartbreaking update
i m crying
good job
thanks for pm
update soon

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paru

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Posted: 10 years ago

#435

Originally posted by: ChocoBerry

Hey pinky, am glad you're enjoying my story. Will update as soon as I have the next chapter ready 😃

my name ia paru

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-.-Mariam-.-

@-.-Mariam-.-

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Posted: 10 years ago

#436

Superb update..Very well written update..

Starting was NICE with lots of teasing & happy moments of Asad & his Parents..

He was waiting for the day when he'll be going to see her but fate had another plans..

Felling very sad for Zoya & his mom..

They're going to Delhi..

Waiting to see whats you have in storefor AsYa..

Continue soon..

Thnx for PM..

Loved the update very very very much..

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sasir

@sasir

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Posted: 10 years ago

#437

Nice
Hope they will meet soon

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ChocoBerry

@ChocoBerry

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Posted: 10 years ago

#438

Originally posted by: MayurChan
Hello Choco... 😊
Thanx alot for the PM...and the Update also...before we guys passed out..😛
The Update was as usual Well scripted👏 , Emotionally Dipped..😭, Yet Brilliantly Written... ⭐️
How nicely this part started...with all the teasing and happy moments...between Asad and his parents...😳
But then suddenly what happened...Rashid got admitted in the hospital... 😕
Actually LIFE SUCKED their..🤢 This always happens at the worst time to anyone...in hope.
Zoya's scene with her mother , and that house leaving part was heart breaking..
I think they ( AsYa ) will meet for sure in Delhi...but how that is😕?
Now from here on...the new phase or can say stage two of this story starts I guess...pretty interesting it is going to be from now on even more.. 😉
Enjoy reading it... 😊
Excellent part... 👏
Continue soonish.. 😃

Thank you so much Mayur. I love reading your comments dear. They give me a true view of what my readers are feeling b😃

Am so glad you're enjoying this one too 🤗

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ChocoBerry

@ChocoBerry

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Posted: 10 years ago

#439

Originally posted by: MysticRiver
well written..👍🏼

Thank you dear 😃

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ChocoBerry

@ChocoBerry

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Posted: 10 years ago

#440

Originally posted by: ZoyaAsadKhan
interesting :)
so are asad and zoya relatives ???
maybe they r neighbors or could be that zoya tries for a job and lands at rashid's company ...i know stupid brain and stupid guesses :P
plzz update soon :)

Lol no not stupid brain but an active one, giving me loads of ideas to build the story. N no they are not relatives 😊. Again no they won't be neighbors and she won't be working in his office either 😛😆. Hope you will like it 😊