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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: rabiamunawar

Love the all update
Actually read in one g
Allah miyan save zoy
Who is he want revenge zoy
Update soon
Plz pm me of ur next update

thanku so much dear
will pm u 4 sure
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Posted: 10 years ago
Here you go.
Your 40 likes completed.

Went thru the full story now.
It's very nice.
Please continue soon.
N I feel Zoya had some kind of a bad past in USA when she met Eric n uncle.n they must have helped her out.


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Posted: 10 years ago
Please pm me the next update.
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: sweet_tehs

Here you go.

Your 40 likes completed.

Went thru the full story now.
It's very nice.
Please continue soon.
N I feel Zoya had some kind of a bad past in USA when she met Eric n uncle.n they must have helped her out.


yep! Got 40 likes so happy
an update's not that far
btw ur close to the story
will pm u surely!
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Posted: 10 years ago

hello people!!!!!!!!!!!!

thanku so much for all those likes and comments.means lot to me.

please buddy me for pms guys.and stop thanking me for the same.i always pm my buddies so it's a n obvious thing.

enjoy reading my dear ones!!!!!!

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"eric what's more important than us"belinda said.

"look honey I know we had a date but I can't come.i have errands to do and you don't have to know about it"

"oh really?then mr. eric m sorry for such a bother. we're through."

eric spitted frustrated"yeah whatever!get the hell outta here"

"what?u know ur such a womanizer a*****e!"with that she shut the car door with a loud thud.

"thanku and let me tell you u were no better than a b***h"eric shouted at her back.he have to get to zoya real fast.

^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^

"asad tum aa gaye"a very worried looking dilshaad said to asad who have just walked in.

"kya hua ammi?aap kuch pareshaan nazar aa ri he?"asad sensed the tension in dilshaad's voice.

"asad kitni der ho gayi he zoya abhi tak ghar ni aayi."

asad sighed"ammi vo aa jayegi wese bhi she's mostly late.vo apne alawa kisi ke bare me sochti kahan he?m sure office me hongi"

"ni bhaijaan office to band ho chuka he.zoya ka phone bhi switch off aa raha he"nzma informed him with concern clear in her voice.

asad rolled his eyes'typical ms. farooqi!'

"ammi aap aur tamatar so jaiye me jagta hu"

"ni beta zoya ka khana..vo"dilshaad started but asad was fast

with his hand at his temple he said"ammi aap so jaiye me keh ra hu na.i'll see to her supper.nzma khana table par laga do"

zoya sat motionless thinking'allah miya mujhe ye ghabrahat kesi ho ri he.i love mr.khan aur ab phupi chahti he ki me unse nikaah karoo par kya vo bhi ye hi chahte he?kuch samajh ni aaraha kya karoon kya kahu'

"hey zoya you're here."eric's voice was heard in the dakness.

"shit!" zoya's stalker muttered under his breath"wats with this asshole?"slowly he backed away to the SUV.

zoya looked up at eric.they hugged.

eric asked"so wat ur doing here so late.shudn't you be at home.?"

"hmm but I needed some space to think"zoya replied absently.

"ok um...zoya is there somethin' you wanna share ?"

zoya gave him a long glance"I guess you know already"

eric nodded "yeah y don't u go ahead?"

"I don't know what to do eric.i love him and m willing to marry him.i shud be happy but for some reason m not."

"why"

"why?i guess I don't know"she said with a sad smile

"I don't understand"he frowned"u want it right?"

"I do but I have a feeling he gave his consent not coz he want it but his family want it.eric marridge is pure and its about love.but what if it remains one sided?"zoya let her insecurities out.

"zoya u need to give him some time too.he's a guy and m sure he must be having his types.maybe if u stand in bkini in front of him maybe then..you never know"eric tried to lighten her mood.coz that's the one thing he cud do whenever zoya started a mature convo wth him.he was a teen afterall and marridge talks were just not his cup of tea.zoya too knew that and it was the best thing about their relationship.zoya let her heart out always to feel less burdened and then like now eric wud joke around to bring back the chirpy zoya.

zoya hit him hard on his back"stupido!!!don't say a word in front of mr. khan or u'll be the poor lamb of ur majesty lion."

"owww!!that hurts zoya"

"it was meant to be"

"btw ur gonna be soon the lioness of ur majesty"

they laughed togather.eric's phone buzzed.

"hello"

"eric asad here."

"oh hey asad"eric covered the phone and whispered to zoya"lion's missing his lioness it seeems"

zoya gave him another punch"owww!!"

"hello eric r u ok?"asad came on

"yeah yeah wats up"

"um...do you know ms. farooqi's whereabouts?"

"unhuh 46 street daffodils estate "eric was having fun.

asad rolled his eyes and gritted his teeth"I wasn't asking that."he heard zoya's small and light laugh in the background"is zoya with you?"

"yeah she's here.we're comin' home.bye"

asad was furious like a real lion.here they were all worried about her and she was having fun with eric?it was true he didn't had insecure feelings with eric and zoya's relationship but at this time of night she shudn't be with a boy alone roaming around when his ammi is hell worried.

he was reading a book but his eyes searched the minute hand of the clock.but how can he find one when he was living in a zoo.the monkey clock was digital above the LCD.it showed 12:13 am.he slammed the book and stood frustated.he will change this zoo soon.the door clicked open as his nostrils flared.

zoya headed straight to the direction of her room when asad's voice stopped her.

"ms. farooqi"

'allah miya mr khan is awake till now'she closed her eyes and took a deep breath before facing asad.she looked up

"ji?"

"don't you dare pretend.y u so late"

"ji?"zoya was taken aback by such volume of his voice.

"mene pucha aap itni der se ghar kyu aa ri he.aapko zara bhi andaza he ammi kitni raat gaye aapka intezaar kar ri thi?"his temple veins were throbbing.

she scowled"mr khan ye bhopal ni he new york he.yaha raat tak shahar jagta he.allah miya wats wrong with you!.ye mera ghar he me jab aa jaa sakti hu.aap kon hote he mujhe ye sikhane wale?aur rahi baat phupi ki to vo to me unhe phone karne wali thi."

asad enraged with a sudden fury spitted "how ms farooqi.aapka phone switch off aa raha tha."

zoya started but asad helds his palm up"ab aap kahengi ki th battery was dead?hena?u know mene aapke jesa selfish insaan kabhi ni dekha.kis baat ka itna guroor he aapko is ghar ka?then m sorry to say ye ghar jald hi mera hone wala he.aur ghar me kis time par aana jaana he vo mere control me rahega understand."

zoya was close to tears by his harsh words"ghar aapka kese...me "she swallowed her tears unable to put words in a sentence.

"yes m soon gonna be HOD of ur company.aapke boss hone ke naate na sahi par me aapka hone wala shauhar hu goddamnit!n ur asking me me koun hota hu aapko sikhane wala.apne mulk ke sanskar aur mariyada aap na bhule to behtar hoga samjhi aap?kisi bhi mard ke saath itni raat gaye ghumna aapko shobha ni deta he.i know aap eric ke saath thi par uski bhi apni kuch life he.har koi aapki wajah se apne saare kaam chod humesha aapke liye maujood ni reh sakta he.har baat ki had hoti he ms farooqi.aainda se I'll make sure aap mere rules follow karengi.rahi baat is ghar ki to me ise jald hi GHAR banane wala hu naki koi zoo+digital home understand?"asad's voice was very high.thanks to technology the walls were soundproof or else dilshaad and nzma wud have come down and maybe even the neighbours.!

zoya turned around as the tears made the path thru her cheeks.she was sobbing and shaking"aap mat bhuliye mr khan ki humare mulk me aurto se is tarah baat ni kari jaati he.ek mahine tak aapke aur mere beech bahut silly arguments hue par aaj aapne jis tarah mujh par hak jamane ki koshish ki he I don't know I feel like hatered is paving the way slowly.mene nikaah ke liye manjoori ni di he mr khan.atleast abhi tak to ni.aap itne insensitive honge ye mene kabhi ni socha tha.aapka mujh par koi hak ni he .rahi baat aapke naam ye ghar karne ki to kal subah papers le aaiyega.isiliye ni ki ur gonna be man of the house but isliye kyuki uncle ye chahte he and unlike u me apne se chote bade sabki izzat karna janti hu.ye ghar HOD ka hoga ye pehle hi uncle mujhse clear kar chuke the.you can throw me out if u want"

she ran to her room and cried herself to sleep cursing her fate.asad stood there as he got the reality check.maybe things have gone too far.he shudn't have said that and for god's sake when did he said to throw her out?

'ms. farooqi bhi na pata ni kis baat ka kuch aur hi matlab nikalti he!'he retired to sleep but cudn't get any due to the guilt.he was going to talk to her about matters like the HOD post,the house,their wedding,her views,his views and the silly passwords of her.but his frustation came over and he made matters worst.he was looking forward to apologise to her.a new day and many new decisions were waiting for him the next morning.

zoya woke up with a headache.her shoulders pained coz she had slept in single position all night.she walked to washroom and the mirror showed her tear-stained face and red puffy eyes.

'allah miya mene kabhi nahi socha tha ki mr. khan will grow such insensitively.this isn't the man I loved!not at all.his eyes carried softness but his words last night stabbed me.did he really think to change this house.i designed it with all my heart for none other than phupi.par mr. khan is ghar ko badal denge?is ghar ki ek ek brick me love cherished he mere ammi, abbu,bhaijaan,nzma,phupi,asad ke liye.nahi me is ghar ko badalne ni dungi.theek he agar ye ghar unke naam hojaye and even m not allowed to live here but ye ghar ni badlega.ye mera wada he apne aap se and to my loved ones.'

after a good bath she was changed into an elegant aqua capherie and a white tank top.there was a knock on the door.she fetched her remote and opened the door.nzma rushed in.

"zoya jaldi chaliye na dekho ammi ko achanak kya hua?"

"phupi?"

they rushed to dilshaad's room.asad was already by her side.zoya looked away but thought this isn't the time to hold grudges and quickly placed the call to doctor.

$$$$$$$$$$$$$$$$$

"dad r u free this week?"eric asked hopefully.they were seated in their hall.

"why?m going out next week so this will be a busy week for making arrangements."

eric shook his head"is there any way u can make oout some time for zoya?"

"zoya?wat happened?"rickwood frowned.

"nothing but I think u and zoya need to talk about this whole marridge thing."

"hmm I was thinking of it myself for a while.i'll see to it if I get some time.maybe at this weekend before leaving."rickwood said thoughtfully.

"okay then go ahead with u plans and m heading out."

"this is ur holiday I supoose so where ur heading?"

eric said with a grin"you know to hunt some chicks"

his dad just shook his head knowingly"good hunting"

"thanks"

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"doctor is she alright?"asad asked worried.

"yes she is for now but it seems she had a low BP and stressed her mind over somethin'"

asad looked with fury at zoya and she looked down guilty.she knew well now that how phupi must be worried for her last night.she must have forgot to take her medicines.damn her mobile battery!

"I've given her some injestions.make sure she is fullfilled with all her wishes.at this state of mind m sure u don't want to give her anymore stress"Dr. sullivan said.

"not at all doc.we'll make sure"nzma resolved and shared a secret and knowing smile with the doctor.

"I'll set the bills"zoya said softly.

"oh no zoya.no payment this time.ur family;'s my family.m happy that after all those years of lonliness u will have someone to take care"she smiled at zoya and then asad.

asad cleared his throat and offered her to show her to the door.on their way out Dr. sullivan said to asad.

"Mr. Khan I hear from ur sister about ur wedding.zoya has always been a li'll sister to me.she is kind and gentle.i know she's been thru a lot in her past.but believe me ur the one to heal her wounds.she was distraught 5 years back and it took me long to bring her back.please take good care of her.and ofcourse of ur mom too."

"I will"

they exchanged a warm smile and asad nodded"Dr. sullivan"

while coming back he pondered over what doc said.at first he thought she was talking about zoya's late family.but wasn't that 10 years back?wat happened 5 years back then?he was left with a question.

in dil's room zoya and nzma were sat on either side of dilshaad.

zoya spoke with wet eyes"phupi m so sorry.aap meri wajah se dawa lena bhool gai.me bohat buri hu na.mr. khan sahi kehte he m so selfish.me..."and she apologised again and again.dilshaad took her in for a tight and comforting hug.

"esa ni kehte zoya.shh ab tumhe meri kasam agar ek aur aansu giraya to."they broke the hug."now smile like a good girl"

zoya wiped her tears and asked"pehele aap mujhe maaf karengi?"

"are baba maaf kiya bas?wese bhi koi bhi maa apne baccho se zada der tak naraz thode hi rehti he"

zoya's lips curved up.dilshaad said "now that's my good girl"

they hugged again and this time nzma too joined the hug.asad who've been standing at the door smiled with an unknown contentment.he got the feeling of complete family.

dilshaad noticed asad and smiled"asad waha kyu khade ho beta ?andar aao."

asad walked in and zoya immidiately made room for him.

"phupi I'll make some soup for u"zoya started to walk away but was stopped by dilshaad.

"zoya,asad yaha aao tum dono,mere pass baitho."

they complied and sat on either side.on her ammi's signal nzma walked out saying she will prepare soup.

zoya glanced at asad and looked down finding that he was looking her way.

"zoya asad ne to is rishte ke liye haan kar di thi.tumhe kuch ni kehna?"dilshaad spoke softly

zoya remembered their fight yesterday night.'so its true.in jahapana ne apni ammi ke kehane par hi nikaah ke liye manjoori di he.'

"kya is khamoshi ka matlab me haan samjhoo?"dilshaad said.

zoya gave a quick glance at asad who was looking her way expectantly.'wow!!kal to sher ki tarah chilla rahe the aur ab ese dekh rahe he ki me haan keh doo?did he really think so'

"phupi nikaah ek bohat badi zimmedari he.mujhe vo..."but dilshaad was fast in acting.she showed her creased lines on her forehead and pretended to feel dizzy.asad and zoya reached for her.

"ya allah lagta he apne bete ka nikaah aur apne pote-poti ka muh dekna ab mere naseeb me nahi he."

asad rubbed his temple with his palm"ammi yeh aap kya keh ri he?"

"zoya tum chahti ho na ki yeh nikaah ho?"dilshaad again ' 'aahed' a little.

doc's words rang in zoya's mind.already dilshaad was in this state coz of her.she have to give her consent for her phupi.if it was a deal for asad then why not it be same for her.anything to keep her phupi stress free.

"phupi me nikaah ke liye ready hoo.bas aap aur koi stress mat lijiye please haan?"

dilshaad smiled and kissed her children's temples lovingly.asad looked at zoya relieved that she was contributing in keeping his ammi's health fine.

nzma cheered from behind with a tray of soup in her hand.zoya took the bowl and took a spoon full to her soon to be mother-in-law's mouth.

dilshaad frowned and denied to take it."aree itni khushi ka mauka he.ese mauko par kuch meetha khate he.asad jao kuch pies leke aao.we'll celebrate."

"ammi aap soup pijiye me leke aata hu pies"asad left with that.

"phupi chaliye muh kholiye"zoya tried to feed her phupi.dilshaad paid high price of the act she put up to make zoya agree.she had to gulp down that tasteless soup.zoya too left for washing the dishes.

nzma asked"ammi hum ye theek to kar reh he na?i mean wat if we've forced them into this marridge?"

dilshaad smiled at nzma's concern."nzma yeh meri experienced aankhe bohat kuch dekh paa rahi he jo tum ni dekh paa rahi.zoya ke har ek action me har ek baat me asad ke liye jagah hoti he.uski aankho me tumhare bhaijaan ke liye pyaar hi pyaar he.even when they argue.aur asad to khud ye nahi janta ki vo bhi kahi na kahi use pasand karne laga he.asad ko zoya ki zaroorat he.use ye jaan jana chaiye ki jo log usse alag he vo humesha galat ni hote.they'll make a perfect couple.tum dekhna bas"

"m sure they will.ammi finally ab humhare ghar khushiya aa rahi he.i can't wait for the marridge to start."nzma said excitedly.

"even I can't.allah mere baccho ko ese hi mehfooz rakhe"dilshaad wished.

.special thanks to

aashi

juhi

sana

mayur

shailu

Abi

asif

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thanks a lot frends.😛keep supporting⭐️.and please forgive me if i forgot to thank any other dear.😊

i need ur comments

please spend some seconds and let me know how is everything going and if u want to make some suggestions m all open😉

hit like guys

sorry for the disappointment🥱 to niya and all those who expected some action but its not the right time for action sequence😳

sorry again to all those whom i've promised to treat them with 2 updates but due to the system problem it just got deleted.iguess i will have to write again.😕

but still i'll try to write same as the previous one i've written😊

c'mon now enough of my dukhara😆

i want quick comments😛

Edited by suearmaniac - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
Awesome Part Dear👏😊

Zoya did a mistake staying late at night

But Asad was a jerk wid her😡. Why did Rickwood made Asad as Zoya's boss over his own niece? I hate Rickwood for dis😡. Now, Asad tuk advantage n said her rudely abt his words. Luks like he will mistreat her using his power n she will call him Sir. I thought in d last part dat Zoya will be Asad' boss but Asad is Zoya's boss. I hated dway he talked to her abt being his house n he is being in control. I hate him for teln her dat she has to follow his rules as if she is his servant not a fiancee. Hate him for being Zoya's boss.

I also hate how Dilshad emotionally blackmails Zoya to get ready to marry Asad. I can't believe Asad changing d house n bossing over her using his status.
Edited by angel_juhi04 - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: angel_juhi04

Awesome Part Dear👏😊


Zoya did a mistake staying late at night

But Asad was a jerk wid her😡. Why did Rickwood made Asad as Zoya's boss over his own niece? I hate Rickwood for dis😡. Now, Asad tuk advantage n said her rudely abt his words. Luks like he will mistreat her using his power n she will call him Sir. I thought in d last part dat Zoya will be Asad' boss but Asad is Zoya's boss. I hated dway he talked to her abt being his house n he is being in control. I hate him for teln her dat she has to follow his rules as if she is his servant not a fiancee. Hate him for being Zoya's boss.

I also hate how Dilshad emotionally blackmails Zoya to get ready to marry Asad. I can't believe Asad changing d house n bossing over her using his status.


thanks dear😆
yeah asad's a jerk when it comes to his ammi's health🤢
well rickwood's not choosen asaad over zo.he was already searching for some1 and asad is eligible😲
well u have to just wait about the bossing part
there's lot more in store
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Posted: 10 years ago
Res
Unres.

So finally Zoya agreed for the marriage.
But Zoya was wrong in coming late n also Asad was wrong in all that he said.
Zoad company did Zoya make it as it includes both their names?
N that is y a sad was offered this post coz it eventually belonged to him.

Dilshad faking Illness.😆
Don't know if it is right or wrong.

Continue soon.
Edited by sweet_tehs - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
Awesome update thank u 4 mentioning me but who is that person yaar am dying here plzz tell us soon n asad i don't like him today bachari zoya n what happen to her 5 years ago plz yaar update soon 😃
Edited by shailu123 - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
i stalked your thread for update but didn't get pm😕

awww is that asshi me? If not still thank you sweeety

the update was awesome but you just left us in cliffhanger and told nothing not good

update soon

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