asya_kabhi ff Is there a price for passion? pg 86 BUDDY ME FOR PM - Page 58

Originally posted by: jayasree.rao

Chanced upon this ff and read all the chapters at one go.

Just loved it. But felt that you have abruptly ended it. Would have loved to read a sad pampering a pregnant Zoya.

Waiting for the epilogue.

WILL HAVE YOUR WISHES IN EPILOGUE

Originally posted by: kabhi_asya

Loving it...

Loving it...

Loving it ...

Realllyyy loving it...

OH I LOVE YOU FOR THAT

Originally posted by: pumpkin.honey

I really can't think of a word dat would do it any justice!!
Its such an alluring story.. I js got hooked to it all day.. N m so sorry dat I didn't found dis amazing FF before.. Else, I would have commented loads in every update.. Js found it yesterday bt getting to read so many chapters in a go is a bliss
** m so loving d Writer Asad here n dis Zoya.. D start scared me, how harsh he was vid her in d beginning
Bt d progress in their relationship is WOW
U totally gave me a BIG shock when I found she isn't pregnant. I mean omg dat was so depressing for her. Poor she
Loved dat dog part in d hospital.. When she cried assuming Prince died saying oh your beautiful dog.. Haha dat was awesome :)
Did I mention I js loved dis Koshka name :)
Asad's changed demeanour towards her is so pleasing
Loved d bathroom convo.. where she ran out of water.. Haha " u'd borrow a bucket of water from me every time u need to flush d toilet" Dis line js cracked me up ;)
Wow so she moved in vid him
Woah Asad proposed her fr marriage.. Yippeee m so glad he love her.. Love him more now
OMG she is pregnant.. U sure na dis time :)
Asad knows dis/assumed correctly.. Plz update soon
Bt NO NO NO!!!!!!!!!!!
U can't do dis, u can't end it js here.. M so loving dis FF n u r already planning to end it
Plz bring more chapters not js d epilogue so soon puhleesseee :)

OH AM HAPPY THAT YOU FOUND IT AND IS COMMENTING AT LEAST...WELL I HAVE OTHER STORIES TOO IF YOU COULD CHECK MY INDEX IN THE SIGGY

Originally posted by: -ABI-

AND I LOVE THE WAY YOU SAY IT😛

Originally posted by: suearmaniac

is it the end already!!!!!!!!!!
aww i'll miss it😭
well the update was awesome!!!!
nd also the whole story and concept😳

THANKS😛

Originally posted by: anopama

Ok ok very sad 😭

Why the abrupt end

I believed it was rushed

They just got to this understanding and u r done

And u ending it like tht not fair

Zoya are u pregnant

Well tht was the entire concept of the story

Very very sad it ended

But I love the last 2 updates

They had many more sleepovers with zoya staying the night and not running away

We used to think asad was the commitment phobia but I believe was zoya

Bcuz he always want to cuddle after love making but she used to make it like a duty

She always wanted to prim and proper for him and he love her all naturel

Wow we have seen asad in a whole differ light

He got what he wanted her to stay longer

He bargained give up his privacy for her

He got her to moved into his house even though she refused

I believed he had something to do with that pump and making the situation worst

She cooks for him he loves it aww she don't have to sing for her supper she can sing elsewhere which he love during their lovemaking

But the best part the cuddles and the talks after

He shared a lot about himself I guess she learnt everything abt him

Omg she is pregnant from the first time I knew it was going to happen

Aww he believes she is leaving him

He pleads he beg he will change he has been doing handstands to impress her 😊

Wow he wants to move there and he wants her too

Omg he loves her she has to know he can't say it

He wants to marry her for better or for worse

Omg he asked if she is pregnant

And the abrupt end 😭

Love it 👏

IT HAD TO END FOR ANOTHER TO START

Originally posted by: msingh27

WHOA!!!! Absolutely brilliant update. I just am so amazed with this ff..👏 So looking forward to the next update..I'm pretty sure Asad will be overjoyed to hear that they are actually pregnant this time
Thank you so much for the PM

😆

Originally posted by: SanKsgian

OH AM HAPPY THAT YOU FOUND IT AND IS COMMENTING AT LEAST...WELL I HAVE OTHER STORIES TOO IF YOU COULD CHECK MY INDEX IN THE SIGGY

😊 yeah sure I'll check ur index n m already following ur story 'boss or lover' n I do comment there 🤗 also DDLJ 😃 dis 1 also I found now only n commented.. Do check haan 😳

Originally posted by: pumpkin.honey

😊 yeah sure I'll check ur index n m already following ur story 'boss or lover' n I do comment there 🤗 also DDLJ 😃 dis 1 also I found now only n commented.. Do check haan 😳

cool will definitely send you pms then

so here it is people, the end of all updates from this story...

epilogue

She sucked in her breath. "What makes you say that?"

"Because I was naked inside you that time you cried in my arms. My first time being with a woman like that," he admitted, sensuously stroking her cheek and tracing his finger around to the sensitive nerves behind her ear. "I forgot myself, until I was inside you, but I liked it far too much to pull out. I never knew it would be so intense. I felt myself come uncontrollably inside you and I loved it, but I knew you weren't on the pill and after what you had just gone through I knew I had to look after you. I've been counting the days and you haven't had your period since. And you glow, zoya...you don't see it but you shine, from the inside out..."

She was confused by his pride, his deep satisfaction. "I" I thought you said you didn't want children."

"That's because I didn't know what a powerful healer love is... Yes, I'm afraid of the huge responsibility, the mistakes I might make, but with you beside me, to share the worries and the burdens as well as the rewards...you make me feel strong, zoya. You give me faith in myself that I never had before.

"Unless..." he faltered, looking very un-Asad like in his uncertainty "...unless you're worried because you think I might not be able to commit to being a good father... I don't have a very good role model, or track record in the commitment department, do I?"

"Nor do I, come to that," said zoya. "And you told me you thought I would still be a good mother. As soon as I get my refund from my landlord I'll buy you a whole library of books on how to be a good father," she attempted to tease him back into his usual arrogance.

He looked at the ceiling. "Actually, you won't be getting much of a refund, because your landlord thinks you and your cat have been shamelessly sponging off him all along."

She looked at him uncomprehendingly, then the light dawned. "You own the house next door?"

"I own several houses in The Beach."

"You knew that I was coming?" she accused.

"I knew the place was rented, but I don't keep up with the details. I didn't know until you arrived who the tenant was. I was angry at first, but only because you make me feel too deeply"you always have. I found myself wanting you too much. But once you were here...well"" he gave her a devilish grin of triumph ""it was just too good an opportunity to miss."

"You could have had me thrown out at any time," she said wonderingly.

"You had a water-tight rental agreement," he said glibly "And...uh...speaking of water."

"The bore pump was never broken?" she guessed.

"A fifty-cent seal and it'll be good as new," he said without any regret.

"You"" she jabbed him in the chest ""are a very devious man..."

"Then it's just as well that I'm marrying a very shrewd and managing woman, isn't it?" he said, winding a lock of her hair around his finger and gently tugging her into his kiss. He nudged her knees back against the bed, his mouth slanting on hers, his tongue sliding against hers, his hands spanning her hips, stroking the stomach that harboured his baby, rising to cup the breasts that were designed for nurture and pleasure, only to freeze in mid-caress as he turned his head.

"What's that?"

"What?"

"That squeaking. In the suitcase." He gave her an incredulous look. "Don't tell me you were even going to pack the cat."

"Oh. Oh!" She must have gathered Koshka up with the baby clothes. Her hand hovered uncertainly as she remembered the embarrassment of riches within, but Asad beat her to it, throwing back the lid and watching Koshka's head pop out of her cosy nest of clothes. He picked a white bootee off the lashing black tail.

"I've been shopping,"she said weakly, smoothing over the rest of the contents as the cat leapt from the case and shot out the door.

"So I see." Asad fitted the tiny bootee over the tip of his thumb and waggled it at her. "For our daughter?"he asked softly.

"Or our son." She looked at his grave face, misty with memory, wistful for all the love that was yet to come. "We could call him Arnav, if you liked..." she offered, her eyes stinging with tears.

He slid his arm around her waist and tumbled her with him to the bed to kiss away her sorrow and replace it with laughter and love.

"And if it's a girl we can call her khushi, after you. Because that's what you bring me, sweetheart." He made it a kiss and a vow. "khushi for now and for always."

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