Mannat Har Khushi Paane Ki: Episode Discussion Thread - 25
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Chapter 1
Duke took the old lady to the sitting area, they both sat down on the chairs.
Duke: "Okay where did we leave off."
The old lady was just looking at him
Duke: "Oh yeah I remember, it was the night of the carnival, Asad was there with his friend Ayaan and Humeria"
Old lady: "Asad?"
Duke: "That is where they met, Zoya was 17 years old."
Flashback: Duke(Asad) reading from the notebook
Ayaan was playing a game at the carnival, Asad was standing to the side watching him play, the game attendant pointed towards Ayaan
Game-attendant: "and the winner is this guy"
The game attendant handed him the prize, which was a teddy bear, Ayaan walked towards Asad
Ayaan: "Man, I smashed that thing really hard."
Ayaan and Asad walked over to the bumper cars, Humeira and Zoya were in different cars and bumping into each other, they were having so much fun, Humeria and Zoya couldn't stop laughing, Asad saw the girl laughing
Asad: "Who is this girl with Humeria."
Ayaan: "Oh that Zoya Farooqui, she is here for the summer with her family, her Dad got more money than anyone else."
Humeria spotted Ayaan and Asad standing near the exit, She waved at them and screamed
Humeria: "Hi Ayaan."
Ayaan screamed
Ayaan: "Hi honey,look I got you a prize."
He waved the teddy bear in the air, Humeria screamed
Humeria: "Oh my god how sweet, thank you."
While this conversation was going on, Asad could stop staring at Zoya, she was laughing and smiling showing her dimples. The ride was done Zoya and Humeria got off the ride, This boy that was on the ride came towards Zoya and said
Boy: "Hey you don't look like a girl from here, would you like me to show you around we could eat cotton candy while we are at it."
Humeria looked at Zoya and showed her with her eyes that she should go with the boy and enjoy herself, Asad saw this he came towards Zoya
Asad: "You want to dance with me."
Zoya looked towards him
Zoya: "Excuse me"
Asad: "I said do you want to dance with me."
Zoya: "Umm No."
Asad: "Why not"
Zoya: "Because I don't want to."
The boy that asked her to show her around spoke
Boy: "She is with me so back off guy."
The boy looked towards Zoya
Boy: "Hey you want to go on the Ferris wheel."
Zoya wrapped her around the boys arm and looked at Asad and smiled a wide one
Zoya: "I would love to."
Boy: "All right then lets go."
They walked away, and Asad saw them leaving.
Humeria catched up to Zoya, who was looking back at Asad
Humeria: "He is Asad Khan, he works with Ayaan."
Zoya: "Oh, did you see how he was standing like two inches away from my face."
Humeria: "Yeah I saw, That is Asad though."
Both of them looked over at him
Humeria: " You know, Im surprised he even came over to you, I think he likes you."
Zoya and the Boy was on the Ferris wheel,Asad was standing on the ground and was looking at her and she was looking at him, she looked towards the boy and smiled at him and held his arm, Asad saw this and smirked, When the seat that they were sitting on came to the ground Asad ran towards it and jumped on to the seat and tried to make room for himself
Boy: "What jerk."
Zoya: "Get off me."
The Ferris wheel got up to the air, he sat in between them
Zoya: "What are you doing."
The guy that was operating the ride screamed
The operator: "You cant do that."
Asad: "Ill pay you when I get down."
Asad turned towards Zoya and held out his hands
Asad: "Im Asad Khan."
Zoya was looking at him confused
Zoya: "So?"
Asad: "So it's really nice to meet you."
The boy was looking at them
Boy: "Who is this guy."
Zoya: "I dont know. Asad Khan."
Asad ingnored the boy that was sitting next to him
Asad: "I would like to take you out."
Boy: "Friend do you mind?"
The operator stopped the ride
operator: "No more than two people in a seat."
Asad: "Okay, all right."
Asad stood up and hanged him self on to the bar of the Ferris wheel.
Humeria was in the seat behind them she saw this and she screamed
Humeria: "Get down, Asad, you are going to kill yourself."
The operator saw him hanging on the Ferris wheel
Operator: "Cut it off, get down now."
Asad ignored them both and continued looking at Zoya
Asad: "Now, will you go out with me?"
Zoya: "What? No."
Boy: "Hey pal, she just told you."
Asad: "Why not?"
Zoya: "I don't know, because I don't want to."
Humeria screamed
Humeira: "Asad"
Asad ignored her
Asad: "All right, well, you leave me no choice then."
Asad left one hand and he was left hanging with only one arm, Zoya screamed looking at him
Humeria: "Im not kidding Asad, stop fooling around."
Boy: "What are you doing."
Operator: "Grab the bar you are going to get injured."
Asad: "I'm going to ask you one more time, will you or will you not go out with me?"
Humeria: "Asad are you nuts."
Asad: "Goddamn my hand's slipping."
Humeria: "Then grab the bar you idiot."
Asad: "not unitll she agrees."
Ayaan screamed
Ayaan: "Just go out with him Zoya"
Zoya: "Okay, fine I'll go out with you."
Boy: "What?"
Asad: "No, don't do me any favors."
Zoya: "No, no I want to."
Boy: "You want to"
Zoya: "Yes!!"
Asad: "say it"
Zoya: "I want to go out with you."
Asad: "say it again"
Zoya screamed
Zoya: "I want to go out with you."
Asad grabbed the bar
Asad: "Alright Alright we'll go out."
Asad chuckled
Zoya: "Oh you think you're so smart, don't you?"
Humeira: "That wasn't funny Asad, you idiot."
Zoya looked down at Humeria
Zoya: "No, its okay. Ill take care of this"
Zoya leaned forward and went towards Asad belt and clutched it open
Asad: "What are you doing, Please don't do that Zoya, cant believe this."
Zoya pants him and he was hanging there with his pants to his knees and in his boxers.
Zoya: "Haha"
Ayaan and Humeria was laughing at him
Zoya crossed her arms together
Zoya: "You're not so cocky now, are you?" ahha
Asad: "I am going to get you for that."
Zoya: "Maybe you will, maybe you won't"
Here you guys go! Chapter 1!! How was it? Thank you guys for the wonderful comments! Please do press the like button and do comment will be looking forward!!!
PS: Zoya is 17 and Asad is 18 in this part
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