SeHan SS : Broken hope... *Epilogue on page 54* (completed) - Page 3

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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: suni_104

Sehan as so much pain in them
Superb waiting to read more continue soon

yes that is true!
Sure!
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Posted: 10 years ago
#22

Originally posted by: sanah12

Heyyy sis thank you so much for thinking about it & finally penning it down...You can imagine how happy I am 😃
Coming to the prologue it was awesome
Loved it to the core!!!
Its an awesome idea of 2broken souls finding each other in this cruel world..
Aww rehan I'm sure this year would bring him love and for seher she will definitely get a good understanding companion who will help her...
Beautiful written
Do continue asap
Thanks for the pm 😊

aww you called me sis and thanking? Not good!
I can see that!
Am happy you liked it sis hope it goes well!
Well you have to wait for that!
Sure!
Edited by Starry-sky - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
#23

Originally posted by: SprinklesOfLove

The banner is lovely, I must say! Can't wait to read the first part, story seems intriguing! Yay, finally another story on SeHan please update soon and do PM me for the updates of this story and any story you intend to write on SeHaan in future ;)

Both Rehan and Seher are in pain, and now they'll be the ones consoling one another, do update soon and don't keep us waiting!

thanks but the banner credit goes to chamkili 😉
i hope you liked it till end am really nervous about this story!
Sure will continue soon and will pm you!
Not so soon!😉
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: snehalovegurti

This is so amazing
Was looking for some sehan story

Would love to read more of this m
thanks for writing on sehan ...



Pm me if you do plz
thnks

Love sneha

thank you sneha(can i call you that?)
hey no thanks for that as i said it is dedicated to all sehan lovers 😊
yes will surely pm you just accept the buddy request 😊
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Nice prologue
Both broken & wanted their family to be there now. A very emotional prologue dear.
Continue soon plz
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: asifiqbalsh

Nice prologue
Both broken & wanted their family to be there now. A very emotional prologue dear.
Continue soon plz
Thanks for pm

thanks dear!
Well I can't say anything about family thing because here it will be complicated! Oops can't say more😉
No problem dear!
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: Starry-sky

aww you called me sis and thanking? Not good!
I can see that!
Am happy you liked it sis hope it goes well!
Well you have to wait for that!
Sure!

aww *hugs*
It will definitely go well sis.. Sure will definitely wait..😊
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Lovely starting looking forward continue soon n pm me plz
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Originally posted by: shailu143

Lovely starting looking forward continue soon n pm me plz

thanks dear!
Sure dear!
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Banner credits to -chamkilli-

Chapter 1 - First step

She eyed the white flamboyant mainsion infront of her, it was really attractive but for her it was not!

"really beautifull! Isn't it?"A tall handsome young man stood beside her and giving a short glance to the mainsion asked her, absorbing her expression

She mumbled something inaudible for him looking staright at the huge mainsion

"What?"He asked confused

"nothing! Can we go?"She said rudely, finally looking at him

The man sigh and noded. She started to walk inside while he follows her with suitcase.

The air changed it's direction suddenly and start to blow harshly stumbling their steps.

She pressed the door bell. Her vision blocked as her hairs came on her face due to harsh wind and the door of mainsion opened at the same time as she tried to tuck her hairs behind her ears.

She stood shocked on the door step as she looked at the young girl standing infront of her trying to fix her hairs. She took a step backward.

Finally fixing her open hairs she looked up to see a woman looking at her shocked while she herself stood confused on her reaction

The sky screamed loudly as both looked at each other one with confusion and the other with shock

She took step inside the mainsion and stood face to face with woman

"Asalam-o-alaikum! Am Seher Ahmed Khan!"She introduced herself

The woman stood rooted to her spot but finally managed to greet back with shaky voice that confused Seher

"am Begum Sahiba!"She introduced herself after gulping down her feelings

Seher just simply smiled little.

"ufff! Am tired! It was so heavy with that storm blowing around was going to make me fall"He said placing suitcase on floor and holding his waist

He noticed Tanveer and greeted her

"ap?"Tanveer asked confusely

"ji hum Amanat!"He told

Tanveer fake a smile and called them inside

"So you are her friend and PA?"Tanveer asked to Amanat sitting on sofa

Seher and Amanat sat down

"ye..."Amanat was going to reply when Seher cut him off

"Nhy Begum Sahiba! He is more than my friend! He is my trusted man not a PA"Seher replied

That's when someone stand little far from there and looking at the new faces in hall, he walked away.

"Begum sahiba, I want to take some rest! Can you tell me about my room?"

Tanveer noded

"Yes! I will called servants they will took your things to your room and will show you both your room too!"Tanveer said

"no thanks, begum sahiba! Actually Seher will not liked her bag being taken by servants! I will take it myself for her! You just tell us about our rooms"Amanat told

"Sure!"

Seher stood up as Tanveer called a servant to escort them to room. Seher took out her Iphone as she followed the servant when she bumped into someone and her Iphone falled down breaking into pieces. Seher looked at the broken Iphone with devastation. Amanat quickly came forward to took it from floor and mend it but was stopped by angry Seher.

Seher looked up from the broken pieces to see a handsome man with shocked on his face. Her gaze travelled to his dark brown eyes which held many emotions.

"how dare you! Can't you see and walk? Who the hell are you?"Seher said, gritting her teeth

"Ma'am he is Ahil's baba employe! Rehan!"servant replied as he remembered his Begum sahiba warning of not letting Seher get angry and here he could see her getting angry as Rehan was not replying

"ohh so he is a servant! Mr Rehan, take this phone and repaired it as soon as possible and only you will do this!"Seher ordered and asked servant to show her room

"am sorry from her side Rehan! She is like this! You don't worry, I will repaired the phone!"said Amanat

"no problem! I will handle this!"Rehan replied for the first time in sad voice

"are you sure?"Amanat asked

Rehan noded

"By the way am Amanat!"Amanat said forwarding his hand

"Rehan!"Rehan said handshaking with him

"nice to meet you!"Amanat said with smile

Rehan smiled back

"best of luck!"Amanat said pointing at broken phone and patting his shoulder walked away

Rehan looked at broken phone. He bend. He took it in his hand and a wistful smile came on his face

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Sorry, sorry for late update but guys my school are opened so stories will be updated late! Sorry!

Tada!!!!
Edited by Starry-sky - 10 years ago

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