OS: Zoya's Self-Respect And Life After That Fateful Night(Updated)

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This is an upcoming OS which I will update in 2-3 days. Its set wen Ayaan asks for Zoya to save Nikhat. Zoya does not agrees. Wen Asad calls her selfish n insensitive. She slaps him n says he showed his true colours. Ayaan emotionally blackmails her n requests but she slaps him too. Asad says dat she is making fuss over a small issue. Zoya gets more angry n says dat if its a small issue then everyone sud know. She runs to d hall n exposes in front of all d guests wat Asad Ayaan did to her. All r shocked. Dilshad n Najma r shocked n angry wid them. Asad n Ayaan tries to explain them but Dilshad shuts them up n supports Zoya. Dilshad tells Zoya to leave for her home. Zoya leaves widout teln them abt Imraan n Tanveer as a revenge. Tanveer who watched everything thru her burqa was also shocked. She cud not believe dat Asad cud do such a disgusting thing. Asad gives Qureshis another house so dat she does not break d relation.Wat will happen next? Will Asad n Ayaan suffer for their mistakes? There is no reunion of Asad n Zoya in dis as I can't think abt a modern n intelligent NRI like Zoya to be a woman widout self-respect. I decided to write after watching a recent episode of another serial. In dat episode, I was shocked dat a small town salwar-kameez traditional girl who came to Mumbai to study music has a lot of self-respect. Initially she was shown naive who fell in trap n became blind in a man's love who used her for his benefits. Wen she got pregnant, he decided to abort her child widout teln her. She got doubt wen d nurse was abt to inject her n realized wat a jerk he is. She kicked him n ran 4m d hospital. Wen he confronted her in d college, he tried to manhandle her n tell her to abort d child but she pushed him. He told her dat she is making fuss over a small issue. She said small issue shockingly n then stormed to d college ground n exposed him to d entire college by teln on d mike dat she is pregnant wid his child n he tried to abort it. Wen he tried to manhandle her again, she pushed him again. She even stopped him 4m slapping her. I, my mummy n my brother were shocked to see d scene. I told dat even village girls have self-respect unlike Zoya who even being modern NRI always forgave Asad. Mummy agreed wid me. So, I decided to write dis OS inspired by dat show. Gul is mad to show women widout self-respect in all her shows. She sud watch these types of shows n learn.



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I will wait for it Juhi

Let me tell you difficult after reading the plot but I have no choice have to wait for it

But yaar Zoya does not tell about Immi and Tannu for revenge

That is not our Zoya and I really stopped watching QH during that period of Zoyaan when Asad yaar sirf behen ka socha and Nik too yaar kitni bechaari bani haye main mar jaaoongi agar shaadi nahi hui seriously educated ladki aisda karti hai kya?

2 - 3 days can;t it be 1 - 2 days?

Update ASAP 4 U

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Originally posted by: Chahanya

I will wait for it Juhi

Let me tell you difficult after reading the plot but I have no choice have to wait for it

But yaar Zoya does not tell about Immi and Tannu for revenge

That is not our Zoya and I really stopped watching QH during that period of Zoyaan when Asad yaar sirf behen ka socha and Nik too yaar kitni bechaari bani haye main mar jaaoongi agar shaadi nahi hui seriously educated ladki aisda karti hai kya?

2 - 3 days can;t it be 1 - 2 days?

Update ASAP 4 U


Yaa, Zoya is not like but how long she cud be nice for ppl who don't deserve her? Asad did not even asked her where she. He manhandled her again dat also in front of Ayaan. He even did not thought day d marriage is invalid. Zoya is tired if proving herself. So, she will not tell anything. She realized how low these Khans can go. Wen Zoya helped AsYaan meet, Asad threatened to kill her n even tear some important paper. Wen shr saved his mother, he slapped her, manhandled her, threatened to kill her n said very cruel words to her using her family. No girl in her right sense will marry such a man but Gul always makes her heroines as idiots. In another show which I mentioned if a village girl who was naive can stand for herself fiercely then who is Zoya in front of her. I will try to update soon.

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U go girl!! Can't wait for ur OS 😊
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U go girl!! Can't wait for ur OS 😊


I will update soon😊
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Update???

5 days ho gaye hain

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Zoya was shocked at wat Ayaan said. He was asking her to be live as his bride till Nikhat is married. She was more shocked dat Asad d man who claimed to love her agreed wid him.

"How can u do dis, Asad?" asked Zoya shockingly, "He asked u to send me to his house as his bride and u agreed by cumn into his emotional blackmail. Did u both asked me dat I want. I don't want to do wat Ayaan is asking. Asad, u sud not listen to him."

"U r such an selfish n insensitive girl," replied Asad angrily, "Nikhat has attempted suicide and u don't care for her. U r only thinking abt urself. U have to go wid Ayaan."

Zoya cud not believe wat Asad said. She got angry n slapped him hard across d face.

"So, u have again showed ur true colours," said Zoya angrily, "Wen I came back, u did not even asked why I went out of d house n where I went. Wen Ayaan informed u abt d nikaah thing, u started questioning me angrily n manhandling me which is a physical abuse widout listening to me. Now, u showed dat u can never changed. U r trading ur fiance who u claim to love. Did u both even realized dat d marriage is invalid cuz we were unaware n we were talking on our cellphones. We were asked only once whether we accept each other n we said Haan instead of Qubool Hai dat also to d persons we were talking on our cellphones. Also, my name n my guardian's names r not registered. So, I n Ayaan r not married."

Asad n Ayaan were shocked. How sud not they think of dat. Still, Ayaan wanted to convince Zoya to pretend to be his wife till Nikhat gets married to Farhan.

"Mona, try to understand. Nikhat has attempted suicide. She will die if she Haseena Bi breaks d relation. Plz save my sister 4m dying, Mona. Plz pretend to be my wife till Nikhat gets married to Farhan," requested Ayaan emotionally blackmailing her.

Ayaan hoped for Zoya to agreed but instead he was met by a hard slap across his face.

"U disgusting creature," said Zoya angrily, "How can u even think of teln me to pretend to be ur wife till ur dumb sister gets married? Is she a child dat needs to be given toys n lollipops to pacify her? Now, she is whining for Farhan as if she did not got her favourite toys or lollipops. Ur mother sent u here and u agreed. U betrayed our friendship n also ur brother. Still, Asad is more at fault cuz he betrayed me d most."

"Zoya, can't u think abt Nikhat for once n help her?" asked Asad in frustration, "After Nikhat gets married, u can come back to me. U r making fuss out of a small issue."

"Small issue?" asked Zoya shockingly, "Let everyone know how small issue dis is."

Zoya turns to leave d room. Asad n Ayaan r shocked. Asad holds Zoya's hand n tries to stop her 4m saying anything to anyone but she pushes him off angrily. She takes a vase 4m a nearby table n hits him on d head wen he again tried to stop her. Ayaan comes to stop her but she hits him on d head too. She leaves d room leaving both of them rubbing their wounds which has caused bump on their forehead. They were shocked wid her action.

Zoya comes in d hall n stands before everyone.

"Attention everyone, d 2nd wedding dat is my n Asad's wedding will not happen," said Zoya aloud, "Ayaan emotionally blackmailed Asad to send to his home to pretend to be his bride till their idiot sister Nikhat is married cuz I n Ayaan got married accidentally. Ayaan's mother told him to bring to save their family's reputation n Nikhat's life. Asad agreed wid him n he called me selfish n insensitive wen I did not agreed. In fact, our marriage is invalid cuz of many reasons. Still, both these disgusting brothers wants me to live as Ayaan's wife till Nikhat is married n then come back n marry Asad. They r trading me like some animals or a prostitute. No need to wait for dis marriage."

Dilshad, Najma, Imraan, Qazi Sahab n all d guests r shocked. Asad n Ayaan also came in d hall. Everyone's attention is turned to them. Dilshad n Najma r lukn angrily at them.

"How u both cud ask Zoya to do such a thing?" asked Dilshad disapprovingly.

"Ammi, just try to understand us. Nikhat has attempted suicide. Haseena Bi has created chaos n broke d relation cuz Ayaan n Zoya got married," replied Asad.

"We even forgot abt whether d nikaah happened or not which Zoya said is clearly invalid. We had just requested Zoya to help us but she refused," replied Ayaan.

Dilshad cud not believe dat both of them were still justifying their actions.

"Enough," roared Dilshad angrily n asks angrily, "Don't u both feel shame to make a woman live wid man like a wife for some period time for ur benefits? Wat do u all think of Zoya? Just cuz she is an orphan u both will make her do anything? Wat answer will u both give to her aapi n jeeju? U both have 3 sisters. Will u both like it if someone treats ur sisters like dis? Will u both let ur sisters getn traded by anyone especially her love n friend?"

Asad n Ayaan became speechless.

"Why u both r quiet now? Tell me will u both let ur sisters get traded?" roared Dilshad.

"No," replied Asad n Ayaan 2gthr in a low voice.

"How did u both felt imagining ur sisters being traded? Just cuz Zoya is not ur sister, u both can't do anything wid her. I am ashamed to call both of u as my sons. U both can't be my sons. There r another ways to handle Haseena but Shirin told u to bring Zoya and u agreed. Asad, u urself hate going to dat house but still u r forcing Zoya to live in dat house. U know wat kind of people live in dat house who even hate girls wearing western clothes. U clearly know wat kind of people Gaffur n Razia are. Did u forgot dat Razia slapped Zoya once n how Zoya was insulted by Gaffur n Razia n accused of poisoning Humeira? U still want Zoya to go to dat house. In fact, u urself accused her of poisoning Humeira n also got angry wid her cuz Razia insulted me. U even called off d engagement. Did u forgot wat Razia did wid Badi Bi? Everyone knows Zoya was also involved in exposing her along wid u and Ayaan. Then also, u want Zoya to live there. U hated those people insulting me always. How can u send Zoya there where people will insult n trouble her? Do u really love? I don't think u ever loved her. 1st u always believed Tanveer n insulted Zoya even forcing her to apologize to Tanveer which no lover do. Wat kind of a lover n fiance u r? Zoya said right. U and Zoya will not get married. Zoya sud go back to her home. She can't live here anymore around people like u and Ayaan," said Dilshad angrily.

Asad n Ayaan were embarrassed now.

"Ammi, wat r u saying? How can u say dat I n Zoya will not married?" asked Asad shockingly, "U know how much I love her. I can't live widout her."

"Enough of ur lies, Asad," said Dilshad angrily wid disgust, "How many more lies will u tell? If u really loved her n can't live widout her then u wud not have agreed to Ayaan."

Asad went near Zoya n held her hand.

"Stay away 4m me," yelled Zoya brushing off her hand n pushing him off.

"Zoya, I am sorry. Plz, forgive me. I will never do any mistake again. I will never hurt u. Plz, get married to me. Plz, don't leave me. I am sorry, Zoya," pleaded Asad.

Zoya boiled wid anger n punched him hard in d face. She then grabbed his collars n stared shaking him angrily.

"How many times u will make mistakes n say sorry" asked Zoya angrily while shaking him by his collars, "4m 1 day, u were always a problem. Jabse tu meri zindagi me aaya hai tab se tu mere liye problem ban chuka hai. U call urself respectable gentle n always talk of tehzeeb n tameez. But u don't have these qualities. U easily agreed to ur brother to give him wat he asked like toys, chocolate or even bike. U are a disgusting n mannerless man who does had done many horrible things to a female guest 4m day 1 just cuz she was modern n wore western clothes. U always believed Tanveer over me cuz she always wore salwar-kameez wid a dupatta over her head. Tune aaj tak jo bhi mere saath kiya hai uske liye tuje jail me hona chaahiye. 4m d start, u told dat my parents may be busy to teach me manners. Did u think n say like dis abt all d modern girls? Its ur mother who did not teach u manners. Dats why u became like dis. She ignored how her son is becoming. U need to learn manners to respect girls. I was an emotional fool to fall for a jerk like u. U don't deserve any girl cuz one day u will show ur true colours to her also. Wat d hell u thought ha? Dat u will make me live as Ayaan's wife till Nikhat is married, then I will come back to u, I will forgive u in a second n then we will get married as of nothing happened. No Asad No. I will not let u, ur disgusting brother n disgusting step-mother ruin my self-respect. Did u realized wat people will say? They will say dat a woman spent some days wid her fake husband n then returned to get married to her husband. Do u want me to get branded as a prostitute who sleeps wid people for money? U felt so bad wen people insulted ur mother accusing her to be d reason of ur abbu divorcing her. Still u did dis to me. How can u even think dat I will forgive u after all dis n get married to u? U always said na dat its good I have no parents as I don't deserve them. U also told me dat my parents left me cuz I was like dis n dat. Now, I am teln u dat u don't deserve ur abbu. Ur abbu left u cuz u were always bad."

Zoya shoved him angrily on d floor. Asad cud not believe wat all Zoya said. Tears were falling 4m him eyes. Zoya was paying back to him for everything he did to her 4m day 1. And he deserved it. All d guests started making disgusted faces at Asad n Ayaan in anger.

"People talked abt these brothers love for each other even being step but never thought they cud use a girl like animals or a prostitute," said an mid 40s woman angrily.

"Wat u boys think of us girls?" asked a young girl angrily.

Zoya recalled abt know Imraan n Tanveer's truth. She was abt to tell to everyone but stops wen she recalls dat she only got insults n pain weneva she helped. She recalls helping Najma 4m goons but Asad said her a bad example for girls n went on her parents, installing a security alarm in Asad's room but he tuk it wrong, making a cake for Dilshad but Asad only saw d messed up kitchen n insulted her, accidently putting his presentation CD in d cake n he insulted her accusing her of doing it purposely, helped Asad n Ayaan to meet but he threatened to kill her n tore a paper which was important for her, helped Marium but he did not listened n got to know 4m Dilawar Mamu himself, saved his mother 4m dying but he slapped her-manhandled her-threatened to kill her-said cruel words like she don't deserve mother, helped Ayaan to stop Asad 4m reaching d airport n Asad left her alone at a deserted place knowing dat she don't know all d ways of Bhopal widout caring dat she might get kidnapped or raped, helped him 4m recovering peanut allergy attack but he accused her of putting d peanuts in d food purposely, helped him to see Ayaan n Humeira's engagement but he accused her of poisoning Humeira n called off d engagement, now she helped his sister Najma n he showed his disgusting face agreeing wid Ayaan to live as his wife till Nikhat's married. She will now not help those people anymore who don't deserve her care n love. Dilshad n Najma never did much to Asad to stop his behaviour. They saw everything as romantic movie however big her n Asad's problems. Dilshad only cared abt her 10 day challenge to Shirin n wanted a bride for his good for nothing son who will change him like all those stupid novels n serials. She even faked her illness before their engagement. Wen Asad declared to marry Tanveer, she said sat Zoya will live as her daughter. Does she really wanted her to feel hurt n pain by seeing Asad n Tanveer everyday? Wen Asad told her to apologize to Tanveer n she was upset she was just smiling as if nothing happened. Wen she told her dat she is upset he did not trust her she gave d stupid reason of Asad being emotional abt his family members n he wants everyone to live 2gthr. Does dat means she sud tolerate his insults everytime n apologize to whoever he says? She was behaving as if she was watching a romantic movie wid interest. She did not cared abt her feelings. Neither Najma cared abt her feelings at dat time. She can't trust them too. Najma even got married widout waiting for her to return. She only cared abt her marriage. They both r also emotional blaickmailers like Shirin, Ayaan n Asad.

"I will not tell u anything abt Imraan n Tanveer. U always insulted n hurt me weneva I helped anyone. I am done wid helping disgusing n selfish people like ur entire family. Dekhti hu tuje kaise Imraan n Tanveer k baare me pata chalta hai? Humesha mere vajah se tera problems solve hota hai qki khud to kabhi apna dimaag lagaata nahi hai tu. Now, u all will suffer very badly for wat all I went thru," thinks Zoya wickedly in her mind.

Asad gets up. Tears still pouring 4m his eyes.

"Zoya, plz give me one last chance. I love u, Zoya," begged Asad.

"How many more chances shall I give u only to be hurt again n again?" asked Zoya angrily, "If u have a little bit of shame left then u will stay away 4m me. U never loved me, Asad. U only loved urself. If u had really loved me then u wud have not seen dis day."

Asad became speechless. He has always hurt her n she forgave him. He always tuk her for granted. Ammi n Zoya said right dat he never loved Zoya. He was always a jerk.

"I wud like to tell one thing to u all girls," said Zoya aloud, "Never ever do d mistake which I had done. Never be an emotional fool for any jerk n fall for him. U will only get hurt."

D guests felt bad for Zoya. Ayaan gets a call 4m Shirin.

"Hello," said Ayaan.

"Zoya is cumn wid u or not?" asked Shirin, "Where r u, Ayaan?"

"No ammi, Zoya will not come wid me. We were doing wrong," replied Ayaan.

Zoya got angry. She snatched his cell n threw it on d floor. Then she smashed d cell angrily wid her feet many times. She hate dat woman who told her son to bring her to her home.

"Mona, wat r u doing?" asked Ayaan shockingly.

"Don't call me, Mona," said Zoya angrily, "I am Zoya. Rabert n Mona exists no more. I hate dat woman who called u. She wants me to live as ur wife for her idiot daughter."

Zoya went to her room. She tuk a shower while crying regretting for falling in love wid a jerk like Asad n how Asad n so called friend Ayaan betrayed her. She changed her clothes into a navy blue top n jeans. She threw all d things on d floor related to Asad or marriage 4m her engagements clothes n jewelleries till now. She came out wid her luggage.

"Zoya, plz don't go. I n bhaijaan r very sorry," pleaded Ayaan.

"To hell wid ur stupid sorrys, u disgusting jerk," said Zoya angrily.

She removed her engagement n threw at Asad.

"I don't need dis," said Zoya angrily, "U agreed so easily to donate me to ur brother. Wat if Ayaan was type of d man like Akram, Mariam's fiance, Vikram or Rajveer? Wat wud u have done if ur brother raped me? Then u wud have surely not believed me over ur brother n insulted me like u earlier did by supporting ur Tanu over me. A man who asks for his brother's fiance and a man who can loan his own love to anyone even his brother can never be trusted. Cuz of u people, girls don't trusts boy or agree to get married to them."

"Zoya, I wil not tell u to forgive or marry me. I accepted dat I don't deserve u. But tell me dat why u went out n how u reached d marriage hall?" asked Asad.

"U sud have asked these questions wen I came," replied Zoya wid hatred, "Now, I will not tell u where I went n how I reached d marriage hall cuz none of u deserve to know anything abt it. U both Khan families have just used me for all ur selfishness n benefits."

Saying dis, Zoya left d house widout talking to anyone while others watched shockingly. Tanveer who watching everything thru her burqa while standing outside d window was shocked seeing d entire scene. She cud not even smile due to her shock.

"I don't know abt Ayaan but I can't believe dat Jammy cud do such a disgusting thing," said Tanveer to herself shockingly.

She then felt a hand over mouth n someone dragging her backward. She tured around n was shocked to find it Zoya. Zoya lukd at her wid anger which scared her. She tuk her some distance away 4m KV n removed her hand off her mouth n left her.

"Zoya, wat r u doing?" asked Tanveer shockingly.

"Nothing," replied Zoya angrily, "I just want to thank u for cumn into our lives. I even thank u for wat all u did to me 2day. Cuz of u, I got saved 4m marrying dat jerk Asad. Cuz of u, I always saw his real face. 2day also, I got to see his real face cuz of u. Now, u can have Asad for u and doo wateva u want to do wid him. I don't care a damn abt him. U have won, Tanveer. Now, go n celebrate ur victory. I am going forever now."

"Why u did not told anyone d reason of u going out?" asked Tanveer shockingly, "U did not even told wat all happened to u and how u reached d marriage hall."

"Wat did I got after helping n doing good for these people everytime? Just insults, humiliations, hurts n pains. They don't deserve my care, kindness n love. Asad never uses his brain. Let him use his brain himself," replied Zoya in a hatred filled voice.

Saying dis, Zoya left in a taxi while Tanveer lukd on shockingly. Tanveer too left 4m there for her home.

In KV, d guests started to leave d house. They were giving angry n disgusted looks at Asad n Ayaan while leaving.

"I had to go to my house to solve d matter," said Ayaan.

"I will come wid u," said Asad.

"Do u still think Nikhat sud marry Farhan?" asked Dilshad shockingly.

"Nikhat likes Farhan, ammi," replied Asad.

"Nikhat has attempted suicide. Don't know wat she will do if she does not gets to marry Farhan," said Ayaan.

Asad n Ayaan left d house while Dilshad n Najma lukd on shockingly.

Scene shifts to SM. Shirin is pleading Haseena not to call off d relation but she is not agreeing. D maulvis r still there. Asad n Ayaan arrives widout Zoya.

"Where is Zoya?" asked Shirin.

"She has not come," replied Ayaan, "We were not married, ammi. And we were doing wrong. U told me to bring Zoya to save our reputation. U did not thought abt Zoya's feelings."

"How come u both r not married?" asked Shirin.

Ayaan n Asad explained everything. D maulvis agreed wid them n apologized to them for their mistake. D maulvis left 4m there.

"At least now don't break d relation, Haseena. Now, everything is clear na," pleaded Shirin.

Haseena did not wanted to agree so easily.

"Wat abt our reputation?" asked Haseena, "Even though d marriage is proved invalid but cuz of wat all happened, d people r talking a lot. I will not let Farhan marry in dis house."

"U will have to let Farhan marry Nikhat. I will give you a luxury house for dat," said Asad.

Haseena n Chand's eyes became wide.

"Really?" asked Haseena happily, "U will really give me a luxury house?"

"Yes," replied Asad.

"I will not break Farhan n Nikhat's alliance," said Haseena happily.

Shirin got happy n hugged Haseena.

"Thank u very much, Haseena. My Nikhat will be very happy," said Shirin wid a smile.

Tanveer who was watching everything 4m far got shocked.

"Zoya was right. Asad never uses his brain. How cud Asad agree for Nikhat to marry Farhan who did not stood for her wen she attempted suicide?" thinks Tanveer.

She calls Zoya. Zoya was sitting at d airport. She got a call 4m Tanveer. She hated dat woman but decided to answer d call.

"Now why u called me?" asked Zoya in frustration, "I am leaving na now."

"I called u to say dat u were right abt Asad," replied Tanveer, "He is an idiot."

"Now wat happened?" asked Zoya.

Tanveer told her everything making Zoya more shocked n angry.

"Good dat I left him. Now, u can have me for urself," said Zoya n hung up.

Zoya thinks abt Ayaan asking Asad to send Zoya to him as his temporary bride n Asad agreeing wid him. She starts crying while lukn thinking how Asad called her selfish n insensitive wen she did not agreed. She blames herself for falling for Asad.

"Zoya," she heard a familiar manly voice.

She luks up to find her friends 4m New York who r Prithvi Sanyal(Parth Samthan), Sanjana Roy(Fenil Umrigar), Varun Mittal(Yuvraj Thakur), Zain Abdullah(Harshad Arora), Aaliya Haider(Preetika Rao). It was Varun who called her name.

"How u all came here?" asked Zoya.

"We decided to surprise u by cumn to ur wedding but our flight delayed. Still, we decided to come n spend some days wid u," replied Aaliya.

"Why r u here, Zoya?" asked Varun wid concern, "And why r u crying?"

Varun loved Zoya 4m their 1st year of college wen they all were 18 dat is 4m 6 years. He did not know how to tell his feelings to her. Zoya always considered him her friend. Prithvi n Sanjana were couple. Zain n Aaliya were also couple. Both couples were engaged.

"I fell in love wid a wrong person who only hurt me always," replied Zoya.

"Wat did he do?" asked Prithvi.

"It's a long story," replied Zoya.

"Wen is ur flight?" asked Zain.

"I have not booked my flight. I don't know where to go. I don't want to go back to aapi n jeeju. They r also d reason of my pain. U all know na how earlier aapi fixed my alliance wid Akram n how she was emotionally blackmailing me to marry him even after she n jeeju came to know dat goons followed me to make me marry Akram by force. Wen those goons threatened abt getn me married at gun-point then also she said dat marriage will happen. Only jeeju supported me who told me to run. Wen I wanted to live in India, she only made me live in dat house. I can't trust her anymore," replied Zoya wid tears in her eyes.

"Where u will go now?" asked Aaliya.

"Don't know," replied Zoya, "U all can leave."

"How can we leave u alone like dis, Zoya?" asked Varun, "Lets go to waiting room where u tell us everything dat happened. Tell us everything abt Asad who always hurt u."

Zoya nodded her head. They all went to d waiting room where Zoya told them everything 4m day 1. Everyone felt bad for Zoya n got angry wid d entire Khan family.

"How cud they all ply wid ur emotions especially dat Asad who claimed to love u?" asked Varun angrily, "I will not leave dat. He had not done right wid u."

"Let it be, Varun," said Zoya in frustration, "I don't want to think abt dat man."

"Zoya, u will come wid us. U will live in my house," said Sanjana.

"I don't want to be a burden to any of u, Sanjana," said Zoya.

"Zoya, u r our friend not a burden. Don't worry, none of d people 4m my home will treat our guest badly like Asad did. In fact, u will be like a family member not guest," said Sanjana.

Zoya felt very nice dat she has such caring n understanding friends.

"Okay, I will come wid all of u," said Zoya.

Varun kept lukn at Zoya. All d friends except Zoya knew dat Varun loves Zoya. Wen Varun decided to tell his feelings to Zoya, they all learn dat Zoya got engaged wid Asad at airport. Varun was heartbroken but he accepted d fact for Zoya's happiness. Varun was an architect n owner of Mittal Constructions. He joined his father's business after his graduation n tuk it to new heights. He also runs a NGO for troubled women.

All of them went to New York in d next flight.

New York

Zoya moved in Sanjana's house. Sanjana had only her father and a 11 year old brother Sunny while her mother had died some years ago. Wid d help of her friends, Zoya started her own interior designing business. She wanted to be an independent woman which she always wanted to be. Zoya was depressed. She had a hard time cumn to terms. She even used anti-depressing pills. Zoya cud not forget wat all happened to her in Bhopal. Her suggested her to join rehab for counselling in order to become normal like before. Zoya joined rehab for 2 months. Her friends helped her come to terms. They spent a lot of time wid her. They helped her to move on. After cumn out of rehab, she was once again a confident n active woman like before. Her business started progressing. Zoya had started to get her scar treated long back n she was again doing d same.

Due to her business, Anwar n Zeenat got to know dat Zoya is in New York only. They had called her initially but Zoya had changed her number on reaching New York. D night Zoya left d house, Dilshad had told them dat Zoya is cumn to them after teln them abt Asad's mistake. AnZee were very angry wid Asad. They had called Zoya but she always disconnected their calls. They were wondering why she was disconnecting their calls. One morning, AnZee visited Zoya at Sanjana's house. Zoya n Sanjana were shocked to see them.

"Why u both came here after ruining my life?" asked Zoya angrily.

"Why r u saying like dis, Zoya?" asked Zeenat shockingly.

"I will tell why Zoya is saying like dis," replied Sanjana.

"Wat do u want to say?" asked Anwar.

Sanjana told them everything dat Zoya told her friends at d air-port abt wat all happened to her 4m day 1 n how even her aapi n jeeju betrayed her in Bhopal during Akram issue. AnZee were angry wd d entire Khan family. They were also ashamed of themselves.

"Zoya, I am very sorry," said Zeenat.

"Just get lost wid ur sorry, Zeenat Razzaq Ali," said Zoya angrily, "U were getn me forcibly married to a jerk. U were saying dat all NRI families do dat. U mean all NRI families marry their girls n dump them in an unknown place while they go back to their previous leaving d girl alone wid d strangers. U were emptionally blackmailing me to marry Akram even after knowing dat his relatives n friends were goons. Did u thought how Akram cud be? U were just worried abt people talking abt d issue. U just wanted to get rid of me be getn me married to any guy at any place. Now, why u both came here? Aren't u both happy dat I am not living wid both of u? U both even made me live in dat house instead of hotel."

Tears came 4m Zeenat's eyes as she was thinking of wat all bad she did wid Zoya.

"Now, stop ur crocodile tears," said Zoya rudely, "U never cared for me. Why u will care? After all, u r not my real sister. U have adopted me. I had my dreams n ambitions. U did not cared abt them. U only wanted me to get married. U told me to fulfill my dreams n ambitions after marriage wen I wanted to do dat before marriage."

"Zoya, I am genuinely sorry for wat all I did wid u. I know I was very wrong. I became a little regressive. I did not realized dat I was hurting you a lot. But I really care for u and love u, Zoya. If I had known dat dat house n family will be responsible for only giving u hurt n pain, I wud have never told u live in dat house. Plz, come back to live wid us. We will never do anything again dat will disappoint or hurt u," pleaded Zeenat.

"Do u both even know dat Zoya was takn anti-depressant pills due to depression n she spend 2 months in rehab. I don't want my friend to go thru d same again. So, u both plz leave if u really want Zoya to be happy," said Sanjana in a serious tone.

AnZee were shocked to hear dat.

"I can't believe u had to go thru all these, Zoya," said Anwar.

"All cuz of u and ur wife," said Zoya angrily.

"We did a lot of mistakes. Now, we want to rectify our mistakes. We want to take u wid us. We will not trouble n hurt u in any way. Just give us a chance, Zoya," said Zeenat.

"Fine," said Zoya, "But I have 2 conditions."

Wat conditions?" asked Zeenat.

"My conditions are: 1. U both will never bug me to get married. If u both do dat then I will leave ur house. 2. U both will cut all ties wid d entire Khan family," replied Zoya.

AnZee were shocked but they were not sumthn dat they cud not agree.

"I agree wid ur conditions, Zoya," said Zeenat.

"I also agree," said Anwar.

"Better," said Zoya.

Zoya left wid AnZee dat evening. Sanjana warned them not to hurt Zoya again in any way. They agreed wid her. AnZee n their kids(5 yearold Ayesha n 4 year old Rahim) were very happy to have her back. AnZee had ordered d servants to get Zoya's room ready.

Dat evening itself, AnZee apologized to Zoya for hiding to her abt her father's truth. They told her dat they saw her thinking her father right n he hvng some compulsion(majboori) to leave her so they did not told her fearing dat she will be shattered. They told her dat her mother Zainab before leaving for India for d last time told Zeenat's mother who was her neighbor dat her husband Gaffur Ahmed Siddiqui has married a woman 4m Bhopal n has a daughter wid her. Zoya gets angry wid them for not teln d truth to her earlier causing her to be in her own fantasy dat her father loves her. Cuz of their hiding, she had to go to Bhopal n face problems 4m d entire Khan family especially Asad. Zoya did not forgave them for dat for a week.

Bhopal, 2 months later.

A lot happened in d lives of d Khan family members after dat fateful night. Najma had married Imraan but she was not happy in her in-laws house as she imagined. On d night of marriage itself, Haseena tuk her luggage of clothes n jewelleries. Najma had to ask Haseena for everything. Najma even had to bath wid cold water as there was no heater in d bathroom. Haseena told her to get used to it as heater costs money. Haseena had even fired all d servants. So, she had to do all d work alone. Wen Nikhat came after a week after getn married to Farhan, she too had to face wat Najma was facing. Both Najma n Nikhat had to do all d housework. Imraan n Farhan never stood for them. 4m d wedding night itself, Farhan was drugging Nikhat n go to meet his 1st wife Sameera. Farhan only loved Sameera. He, Sameera n Haseena had planned dat he will get married to Nikhat for her money. Last week, Nikhat saw Farhan mixing a pill in her water. She understood why she felt asleep wvery night. Dat night, she pretended to be fast asleep before he came to give her water. We Farhan went out, she followed him at Sameera's house n got to know everything why he married. She was shattered but did not knew how to share dat wid anyone. She was blaming herself for getn to much desperate to marry d man who did not stood for her wen she attempted n his mother agreed only wen Asad gave her a house. Humeira has broke her engagement wid Ayaan cuz of his act of asking Asad to let Zoya live as his bride till Nikhat gets married. She even hates Asad for agreeing to it. She thinks dat they shamelessly thought of trading Zoya. Ayaan did not thought abt how she will live in d same house wen he will live wid another woman as his life. If his elder brother can trade his own love n fiance then he too can do d same wid her wen d time will come. She has no feelings for Ayaan now. He has betrayed his friend Zoya. She now hates him.

Asad had taken Dilshad to hospital for weakness. At d hospital, he saw some nurses were taking pregnant Tanveer inside a maternity ward. She lukd full term pregnant. He ignored n went wid Dilshad inside a doctor's cabin. After they came out, they heard some nurses talking outside d maternity ward. They were talking dat d patient has AIDS n her baby boy has born dead. Asad got shocked as he knew dat d patient was Tanveer.

He went inside her ward wid Dilshad. Tanveer was surprised to see them.

"Aao Jammy aao," said Tanveer in a weak voice.

"Tanveer, we always hated u but we never wished dis to happen wid u," said Asad.

"Allah has punished for my sins. Ur turn will also come," said Tanveer.

Asad n Dilshad were shocked.

"No need to be shocked. I am saying right. Do u know why Zoya left d house on d marriage night? Its time dat I sud tell u. It was all my doing," said Tanveer teln them everything.

"So, u tricked Zoya n caused all d troubles," said Asad angrily.

"Why u r getn angry on me, Asad?" asked Tanveer wid a laugh, "I know I did mistakes dat night but u were not less. Dat night, I saw everything dat happened in d hall. Being her love n fiance, u agreed wid Ayaan to trade for ur sister. U ruined her seld-respect. Dats why, she did not told all of u abt why she went out n wat all happened. She helped n did lots of good things for ur family n their happiness but she only got humiliations n hurt in return. So, she did not helped u cuz u all did not deserved dat. She did not told u all before leaving d house cuz u never trusted her n always thought her immature, childish n impulsive. If u trusted her 4m d beginning then she wud have told u. Still, wen she returned u showed her disgusting face to her. If u had just asked her where she went n how she reached d marriage hall n also if u did not agreed wid Ayaan's offer then u wud not have seen dis day. Zoya wud have been married to u dat night. In marriage, respect, trust n love r most important and u had none for her. I even saw how u agreed to give Haseena a house dat she lets Farhan marry Nikhat. Have u ever thought abt Nikhat's future wid a man who did not stood for her wen she attempted suicide n her greedy family? I informed dis to Zoya n she was shocked n angry. She also understood how much idiot u can be."

Asad was shocked n ashamed at wat all Tanveer said.

"I sud talk wid Najma n Nikhat whether they r happy or not," said Asad.

"U r 2 months late, Jammy. But may be not too late," said Tanveer.

"I did a lots of mistake. Even more than u, Tanveer," said Asad.

"I don't know whether u will ever change or not. U never changed dats why u Zoya left u. But, u still have time to save ur sisters lives 4m getn ruined further," said Tanveer.

Asad n Dilshad listened to her carefully n then left her ward.

In d evening, Asad had suggested for only siblings dinner. Nuzhat suggested Humeira also to come but she refused as she did not wanted to have dinner wid these disgusting brothers who hurt their love n fiance. D siblings sat at a restaurant.

"Najma, r u and Nikhat happy at ur in-laws house?" asked Asad while hvng dinner.

Both Najma n Nikhat got shocked.

"We r fine," lied Najma.

"Yaa, we r fine," lied Nikhat.

Asad n Ayaan sensed their lies.

"I know u both r lying," said Ayaan.

"Tell us d truth. U don't need to fear here," said Asad in a convincing tone.

Najma n Nikhat broke down n told them how Haseena is troubling them n how their husbands never stand for them. Nikhat even told them abt Farhan n Sameera truth. All were shocked n angry. Even Najma did not knew abt Farhan n Sameera truth.

"Dis all happened cuz of us brothers. We let ur both marriages happen," said Asad.

"Why r u saying like dis, bhaijaan?" asked Nikhat.

"Its our fault only, Nikhat. We let Haseena Bi have her way. We wud not have given her house to let u marry Farhan who did not stood for u wen u attempted suicide. Even though u attempted suicide, we wud have talked to u to stop thinking abt Farhan cuz he did not fight wid his mother wen u attempted suicide. And Najma, d baby which was Tanveer was carrying was of Imraan. Imraan hid dis truth 4m u. He even gave Tanveer 2 crores to shut her mouth. Dat night, Zoya went out on d wedding night as she got doubt on Tanveer n Imraan. She got to know d truth but she did not tell us cuz of wat I n Ayaan had to her. She had not told us cuz weneva she helped our family n did good things for us, I always tuk her wrong n insulted n hurt her. 2day, I met Tanveer in d hospital n she told me d truth. She has AIDS n her baby boy has born dead," said Asad teln them evrythn Tanveer said.

D sisters were shocked. Najma was getn angry.

"Cuz of both of u, my life has ruined. U both even ruined Nikhat's life. Dat night, I n ammi tried to stop both of u into requesting Haseena not to break d relation but u both were so much blinded wid sister's love dat u both never used ur brain. 1st u both showed ur true colours to Zoya n now cuz of both of u, I n Nikhat r suffering," said Najma angrily.

Asad n Ayaan were shocked wid her anger. Wat all she said was right.

"I know we did mistakes. We both even lost our loves forever but we both will bring u both out of dis," said Ayaan.

"U both had hurt an orphan by trying to trade her widout thinking abt her aapi n jeeju. See wat had happened. Ur own sisters r hvng problems wid husbands who don't care for them like u both hurt ur loves Humeira n Zoya very badly," said Najma.

Asad n Ayaan lukd down in shame.

Next day, Asad n Ayaan exposed Imraan n Farhan in front of all d family members. Asad n Ayaan beat Imraan n Farhan a lot for hurting their sisters. Asad tuk both d houses 4m Haseena dat he gave her till now. Najma n Nikhat filed for divorce. Qureshis were made to pay fine to both d Khan families. Asad n Ayaan even filed dowry n fraud case against Qureshis n sent them to jail. Najma went back to KV while Nikhat went back to SM.

New York

Zoya did not talked properly wid AnZee for a month for wat all they did wid her. She cud not trust them easily. But she behaved properly wid d kids. She regularly visited her friends n her friends visited her regularly. Now 2 months after she returned back to AnZee, she entirely forgave AnZee n started talking wid them happily like before. AnZee made sure not to do anything dat will hurt Zoya. Varun used to spent more time wid Zoya than any friends. Zoya started feeling sumthn for Varun. She found herself more happy n comfortable wid him. AnZee figured out dat Varun loves Zoya. They heard it 4m remaining friends last week ago dat Varun loved her 4m 1st year of college but Zoya did not knew it. She also heard d friends saying abt hoping Varun to tell his feelings to Zoya n Zoya to accept him. AnZee too wanted Zoya to marry Varun but they were afraid to talk abt d same wid Zoya fearing dat she will leave them for teln her to get married.

One day, Varun finally decided to tell his feelings to Zoya. He went inside her room wid a bouquet. She was wearing a short red sleeveless dress. She started wearing sleeveless clothes 4m a month cuz her scar has improved a lot n was visible very less.

"Zoya, I want to tell u sumthn which I wanted to tell u 4m 6 years. 4m our 1st of college, I fell in love wid u. But I cud not tell u. I was afraid to lose even a great friendship wid u. Wen I decided to tell u my feelings, u were engaged to Asad at d airport. But 2day, I want to tell my feelings to u. I will accept wateva ur decision will be. I want to tell u dat I love u, Zoya. I will always love u n never hurt u," said Varun holding out d bouquet to her.

Zoya cud not believe wat he said. Varun loved her 4m 6 years n she did not came to know abt it. Tears came to her eyes. Why he had not confessed to her before.

"Varun, u sud have tell dis to me much earlier. At least, I wud have been spared 4m d all d pain I went thru. 4m 2 months, I started feeling sumthn for u. I find myself very happy n comfortable wid u. I love u too, Varun," said Zoya wid tears in her eyes n takn d bouquet.

Varun felt happy as she accepted. He other friends n AnZee who were standing outside d room n seeing everything also got very happy. They went inside.

"I am so happy for u, Zoya. U finally found ur true love," said Zeenat wid a smile.

"U both sud start dating to spend time wid each other," said Anwar wid a smile.

Prithvi, Sanjana, Zain n Aaliya cheered for them.

"U guys sud get engaged," said Zain.

"Dat will be too early. They just confessed," said Prithvi.

Zoya n Varun started dating. Zoya was more happier than before. They got engaged next month. Varun was happy dat Zoya has moved on 4m d painful memories.

Next month, Zoya n Varun got married in a hindu marriage ritual wid d blessings of her aapi n jeeju. None of d Khans were informed of her wedding.

Bhopal, 6 months later(4m dat fateful night).

Asad was reading a newspaper. A news which made his heart break into pieces was title Businessman Varun Mittal Marries College Friend Interior Designer Zoya Farooqui Yesterday'. Dilshad n Najma who were sitting next to him also read d news.

"Ammi, she got married 6 months after leaving dis house," said Asad wid tears in his eyes.

"So, do u except her to live alone forever if she did not married to u after wat u all did to her?" asked Dilshad, " Zoya deserves happiness n she has got her happiness."

"U r right, ammi. I think Varun was only destined for Zoya," said Asad.

A week later, Humeira got very sick due to her illness. Doctors told her parents dat she needs a matching bone marrow transplant otherwise she not live for more than a month. GaZia r shocked as their bone marrow does not matches wid Humeira's bone marrow. Then Gaffur realizes dat his daughter Zoya's bone marrow was same as Humeira. He told dis to Razia who recalled how she hid d truth 4m him abt Zoya Farooqui being his daughter. She told d truth to Gaffur who got very angry wid her. Razia requested him to call Zoya n tell her to help Humeira. Gaffur tells her dat Humeira is suffering d punishment of their sins.

Gaffur somehow got Zoya's office number n called her at office. Zoya was angry dat dat her so called father was calling her wen he needed her. She cuts d call in between teln to find another donor. Gaffur n Razia were very disappointed. They recalled all their sins on how they destroyed Zoya as well as Asad's family. They decided to come in d open n confess their crimes to everyone. They told everyone abt their crimes on how they destroyed Zoya n Asad's family n also abt Gudiya Factory incident. Everyone got angry wid them. No one told Humeira abt it as she in d hospital n very weak.

New York

Zoya told Varun n her appi-jeeju abt her father calling her to donate bone marrow for his 2nd daughter Humeira. Zoya is confused whether to save her life or not. Gaffur had told Zoya also abt all his n Razia's crimes. Varun n her appi-jeeju suggests to save Humeira's life on d condition of them surrendering themselves to d police. Zoya agrees wid them. They n Zoya wud anyway save Humeira's life but they had to blackmail Humeira's parents.

Bhopal

AnZee, Zoya n Varun arrived Bhopal 2 days later. They puts dat condition before GaZia. Both d Khan families r in d hospital. Asad saw Zoya after 6 months. She was in a knee length blue sleeveless dress. Her husband Varun was next. He too was a business but he dressed up in black shirt n blue jeans instead of a corporate cloth like him. Asad felt his heart broken seeing those 2 of them married but he accepted dat.

"Now, tell me whether u both agree wid d condition?" asked Zoya firmly.

GaZia were in tears. They lukd at each other.

"We agree," replied Gaffur.

"Varun, call d police," said Zoya smiling at them, "They both sud be in jail right now."

"At least, let us meet Humeira after she recovers," pleaded Razia.

"Wen Humeira gets to know both of ur truths, she herself will not like meet disgusting people like u," said Zoya.

Varun called d police. Police came n arrested GaZia. Gaffur asked Zoya for forgiveness but she did not forgave him. Dilshad n Asad has not forgiven Rashid cuz he had affair wid Shirin even before Gudiya Factory n had Ayaan wid her. Dats d reason, GaZia tuk advantage of him. Zoya went inside to do d bone marrow transplant to Humeira. D transplantation was successful. After dat, Zoya told Humeira everything abt her parents n all d truths related to it. Zoya told her dat she sud meet her parents once. Humeira who was angry on knowing her parents truth had nothing to do wid them now.

Zoya came out as she was done wid taking rest while Humeira was still inside.

"We will take Humeira wid us," said Zoya.

"How can u do dat?" asked Shirin shockingly.

"Oh plz, I am her elder sister. U r nothing to her," replied Zoya rudely, "Humeira herself wants to come wid us. She don't want to live wid selfish people like u. U urself told ur son to bring me to ur home as his wife. Then did u thought abt Humeira? U snatched her love 4m her. U only know snatch other people's happiness. So, just stay out of dis."

Shirin became quiet not knowing wat to say. Asad came near Zoya, Varun n AnZee.

"Congratulations Zoya for ur marriage," said Asad wid a smile.

"Thanks," said Zoya in a normal tone.

"Plz, forgive me for all my mistakes," said Asad.

"Can u take back those horrible things which u did to me 4m day 1?" asked Zoya, "I forgave u many times but u never changed. I am very sure dat u can never change."

Asad became speechless.

"How dare u to hurt my sister so much?" asked Zeenat angrily, "U even tried to trade her. I feel like handing u, Ayaan n ur step-mother to d police as trading comes under human trafficking n prostitution. U paid for dat wen ur own sisters suffered."

"I know wat all I did wid Zoya was unforgiveable n Allah punished me for dat," replied Asad wid tears in his eyes.

"Ur sisters suffered cuz of u both brothers only," said Anwar.

Asad n Ayaan felt ashamed at being reminded again of dat.

"Asad, u r such a jerk. U don't know to respect women. U hurt my Zoya a lot," said Varun angrily.

Asad lukd down in shame not knowing wat to say. He was happy dat Zoya got her true love.

Zoya did not met wid any of d Khan families not even wid Dilshad n Najma. She, Varun n her aapi-jeeju waited for a week for Humeira to get discharged. They lived in a hotel during dat time.

A week later, Humeira got discharged. She left wid Zoya, Varun n AnZee to New York.

New York

Humeira lived AnZee like Zoya used to lived. She was taking time to adjust to her new life in new surroundings. She even changed her dressing sense to western clothes. Zoya n Humeira used to meet everyday. They bonded very nicely like real sisters.

One day, Zoya was at AnZee's house. She n Humeira were hvng coffee in d hall.

"Its been a week I came here but I am loving everything, aapi. I at least got people around me who truly loves me unlike d people in Bhopal," said Humeira.

"Humeira, u also deserves people who truly care for u and love u," said Zoya wid a smile.

"I am very happy dat u moved on in ur life n got married to ur true love Varun jeeju," said Humeira wid a smile.

"Humeira, u will also completely move on one day," said Zoya wid a smile.

"I came wid u cuz u saved my life and u r better than anyone in both d Khan families. For a girl, her self-respect is more important. Asad bhaijaan tried to ruin ur self-respect. He had betrayed u by agreeing to Ayaan's offer. I was disgusted wid Ayaan to make such an offer. Still, at least Asad bhaijaan's real face came in front. Who knows he cud have hurt u someday very badly if u both were married. Asad bhaijaan did a lots of mistakes. We know dat he had a troubled childhood but dat does not gives him excuse to do anything whether its right or wrong whether its virtue or sin. Some people can never change. They only stop their wrong doings for some time only to do it again wen time comes," said Humeira.

"U r right, Humeira. I left Asad cuz I understood wat he did dat night was unforgiveable. I did wrong in always forgiving him. I must have left d home dat day itself wen he insulted me after he bailed me out of jail. I was a fool to think him right n fall for him. Falling in love wid him was my biggest mistake. I always forgave him like a fool n he only tuk me for granted. Glad dat, he is out of life. Now, I have my Varun wid me," said Zoya.

"Varun is really an amazing guy," said Humeira wid a smile.

"Oh yeah," said Zoya wid a smile.

Zoya n Humeira hugged other in happiness. They both were very happy to be away 4m d painful memories n living around d people who genuinely cared n loved them.


A/N: This OS is written of what would have happened if Zoya existed in real life. A girl like Zoya will stand for her self-respect and never forgive Asad. Also, Asad never changed till the end. He kept on doing mistakes. Zoya deserved true love and she got it. She deserved who genuinely cared for her and loved her. This is my 1st work where Asad and Zoya cannot be reunited. In fact, I read several more Os like that which were written more than a year ago. This is my longest OS of more than 20 pages in MS Word.


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Originally posted by: angel_juhi04

This is an upcoming OS which I will update in 2-3 days. Its set wen Ayaan asks for Zoya to save Nikhat. Zoya does not agrees. Wen Asad calls her selfish n insensitive. She slaps him n says he showed his true colours. Ayaan emotionally blackmails her n requests but she slaps him too. Asad says dat she is making fuss over a small issue. Zoya gets more angry n says dat if its a small issue then everyone sud know. She runs to d hall n exposes in front of all d guests wat Asad Ayaan did to her. All r shocked. Dilshad n Najma r shocked n angry wid them. Asad n Ayaan tries to explain them but Dilshad shuts them up n supports Zoya. Dilshad tells Zoya to leave for her home. Zoya leaves widout teln them abt Imraan n Tanveer as a revenge. Tanveer who watched everything thru her burqa was also shocked. She cud not believe dat Asad cud do such a disgusting thing. Asad gives Qureshis another house so dat she does not break d relation.Wat will happen next? Will Asad n Ayaan suffer for their mistakes? There is no reunion of Asad n Zoya in dis as I can't think abt a modern n intelligent NRI like Zoya to be a woman widout self-respect. I decided to write after watching a recent episode of another serial. In dat episode, I was shocked dat a small town salwar-kameez traditional girl who came to Mumbai to study music has a lot of self-respect. Initially she was shown naive who fell in trap n became blind in a man's love who used her for his benefits. Wen she got pregnant, he decided to abort her child widout teln her. She got doubt wen d nurse was abt to inject her n realized wat a jerk he is. She kicked him n ran 4m d hospital. Wen he confronted her in d college, he tried to manhandle her n tell her to abort d child but she pushed him. He told her dat she is making fuss over a small issue. She said small issue shockingly n then stormed to d college ground n exposed him to d entire college by teln on d mike dat she is pregnant wid his child n he tried to abort it. Wen he tried to manhandle her again, she pushed him again. She even stopped him 4m slapping her. I, my mummy n my brother were shocked to see d scene. I told dat even village girls have self-respect unlike Zoya who even being modern NRI always forgave Asad. Mummy agreed wid me. So, I decided to write dis OS inspired by dat show. Gul is mad to show women widout self-respect in all her shows. She sud watch these types of shows n learn.





@Bold red u r talking about Kaisi yeh Yariaan right? I mean abt Naviya n Harshad
I lved Naviya in that episode too😳😳
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Wow u always like to make Asad suffer in ur stories
But this time he couldn't redeem himself
But well written zoya did right
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Wow u always like to make Asad suffer in ur stories

But this time he couldn't redeem himself
But well written zoya did right


Cuz its Asad who always commits grave mistake. In d show, I hated hoe he never changed till d end n Zoya always forgave him. A man like Asad never changes.

There is no way Zoya cud forgive him dis time. D way she exposed d brothers was inspired 4m an another show which inspired me to write dis OS.

Zoya deserves happiness n she got dat. She even tuk Humeira wid her cuz she don't want her to live wid those 2 selfish families.

I don't make Asad suffer in all stories- in CITAL Asad did not suffered n in LMWOCYP Zoya is suffering much more than Asad which made her a goth.

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