AsYa FF : Hopeless end (completed) -Chapter 17 - last part on page 111 - Page 35

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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: angel_juhi04

<font size="2">Awesome Part Dear👏😊</font>
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<font size="2">I am happy dat Zoya is not giving attention to Asad</font>
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<font size="2">Asad sud learn a hard lesson for always mistreating Zoya. He sud not have told her to apologize to anyone no matter wat by calling her acts as childish n even believed dat she replaced Tanveer's blood wid chicken's blood n brought fake burning skins😡.</font>
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<font size="2">Ayaan is missing Humeira😭 n repeating d moments wid her😊</font>
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<font size="2">I faintly recall dat flower vase scene wid old Ayaan. Wen dat scene was shown?</font>
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<font size="2">PS: My like button is not working. So, count my like too😊.</font>


thanks sweety🤗
glad that you liked it
yes asad should learn the lesson and i guess he learned it somewhat too
ayaan is truly repenting and wished too correct everything so he did that
that scene hapened in starting episodes I guess 7th episode😛
sure you are counted😃
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: jas91

i m back after a gap

so Asya r still stuck in d same situation
Dillu asked Asad 2 marry Billi😲😲
Asad is getting doubtful on Billi😊
Asya met i wish Zoya thodi si help kar de
Ayaan Zoya meeting was good
i liked all 3 updts😃


hey welcome back jas🤗 truly missed you❤️
yes they r still stuck but are gonna get out now
dilshad took the step as she thought it to be necessary and it was too, to make asad realize more
yeah finally he is doubting her
thodi help? Well they are going to team up so get ready for lovely moments with anger too
glad that you like that
aww am happy that you liked them all😛
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: SanKsgian

Want to read more...please update karo na


awww will try to update soon sweety :)
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Posted: 10 years ago
jab zoya suna chati thi tab asad keh nahin paya...
ab jab asad kehraha hai to zoya nahi suna chati

bad timeing
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Originally posted by: SanKsgian

jab zoya suna chati thi tab asad keh nahin paya...
ab jab asad kehraha hai to zoya nahi suna chati

bad timeing


yes that's right! Asad behaved mum all the time or shout at her without his or her explaination that hurts zoya but now she will fight back she don't want to be a toy anymore
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: SanKsgian

continue soon and do pm me


sure am working on it
surely😃
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Posted: 10 years ago

sure I will update in some days or maybe by tonight😛
thanks
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Banner credit to Sameera_12

Chapter 10 - Change of Time (a)
This chapter is dedicated to Jas91 for coming after the break and SanKsgian as new new excited reader🤗

"I fainted that day and when I woke up I found you infront of me! Believe me, I don't know how I ended up with Tanveer"Asad told with low head

Zoya looked at Asad shocked, her mind processing the information and trying to find the answer. She took a deep breath

"she always wanted you! She wanted to marry you, I don't know why? She even challenged me and told me that she will spend a night with you before our wedding night"Zoya told softly

Asad looked at Zoya shocked. This much hapened and he was deaf and dumb to see or hear what is Zoya going through. Was his love so weak for Zoya to understand her pain and truth?

"it was acid that burnt my hand not the allergy to Mehndi!"Zoya looked at Asad "it was also Tanveer's plan so that our Mehndi don't take place."

"and how do you know that?"Asad asked shocked with this new piece of information

"she told me before hand to warn me to not use it"Zoya told looking in Asad's eyes

Asad felt chocked, he felt breathless. Tanveer was the main culprit and Zoya accepted to let the acid touch her hand just for him and he never knew, she loved him so deeply. He remembered Zoya closing her eyes and her discomfort when the Mehndi was being putted on her hands, she brushed all that when asked and like a fool he believe her! What a fool he is to believe Zoya when she is lying and not to believe her when she is truth, he is a big fool!

"that means all the mishaps with you or Tanveer during our premarriage rituals were done by Tanveer?" Asad said slowly

Zoya noded at Asad and he closed his eyes

"she knew I was going to purpose you that's why she planned all that fire and attack thing"Asad said with anger

"she told me that you are going to breakup with me"Zoya told silently

Asad melt hearing her words

"she played a big time with us! I can't believe how come she became such a witch! She was my childhood friend once"Asad said with disgust

"How did you end up with Tanveer that day?"Zoya asked finally, she can't keep her curiousty with her

"I was comig at wedding altar when Tanveer came, she told me to buy some gift for you! I thought she is helping me so I agreed and when I was buying the gift for you some goons came and took her away I thought she is actually kidnapped by her husband so I ran to help her. She was taken in doll factory and was molested but I saved her and during that someone hit me on head and I fainted!"Asad told the much he remember "she fake all that kidnapping drama she was nor kidnapped neither molested but in all this someone surely help her because when someone hitted me on head am sure it was not Tanveer because she was standing infront of me and I was hitted from back"

Both sit in silence, thinking the confession of other. They had been played big time and that too very smartly

"Zoya..."[b]Asad called

He looked at her with red eyes she too looked at him

[b]"will you help me? Will you help me to find the truth of her? To find the evidence against her and to know her partner so that we could avenge her! And arrest her?"
Asad asked

Zoya looked at Asad boggled, she looked in his eyes and wished to say yes but something held her back

"no Mr. Khan! I can't help you! This was the help that I could provide you nothing more! I have my life to live and find, Mr. Khan. I cannot spend my life in solving your problem especially for the person who believe me when he wants to get out of some mess and dismissed when he is out of mess"Zoya said sternly

[b]"please Zoya! Please, she need to be punished for trying to kill you and for playing all those games and I don't know much about her evill side but you do so please just one hour from your life from your everyday, just one hour!"
Asad plead

Zoya felt a tuck in her heart, she loves him and she can't let go of all his pleads, a little help can't harm but she need to keep a good distance from him, she don't want to be hurt again

Zoya took a deep breath and noded-"okay! Just one hour!"

Saying so, Zoya left away without hearing Asad because she can't stand his demands anymore

Asad sighed - "each one hour from your every day will be my redemption to make you forget every pain, Zoya! I know I can't do it completely still I will try!"

Zoya sit on the chair in her room, closing her eyes remembering about Asad

[b]"I wish Asad, k tum mujh pr us wakt yakeen karte ya atleast koshish to karte par... Tumhe to us wakt mere ilzamat mai kuch dikha jab tum khud Tanveer ki daldal mai phas chuke ho."


[u]At night

Asad was entering in his room when he saw Najma going some where. He was confused.

"Najma...where are you going? And didn't you go to college today?"Asad asked as he walked towards her and stood beside her

Najma rolled her eyes and acted uninterested in his words. She just looked away without answering.

"Najma, I am asking you something"Asad said little sternly

Dilshad was walking towards kitchen when she noticed Asad and Najma. She was confused seeing Najma behaviour and stood silently waiting to hear her.

Najma looked at Asad sharply.

"why? Why should I tell you? Why should I tell something to you Bhai jaan? When you can do anything without telling then I can also do without your supervision and also don't worry I will not bring shame to Ami like you"Najma said bitterly and walked away leaving stunned Dilshad and guilty Asad

Asad stood stunned and guilty but one thing that was alerting him was Najma's sudden strange behaviour. He know he did wrong, even if he fall in someone trap it was wrong, it was a shame on him and was a black spot on his ami's upbringing which is extremely wrong. He know that no one will point at him because he is a man but the guilt in his heart was eating him. Whatever he did, he know he did a grave mistake whether trusting Tanveer or Not trusting Zoya whatever it was, but Najma! She is his sister. She is that lovely Tamatar who will never say a word even if it hurt her ownself then what hapened today that she has turned so bitter? No she can't do that because she is very soft-hearted and can never do this, there is something else.

Dilshad stood stunned into silence at Najma's words. She know her little daughter, she can never be so rude, whatever hapened she will be the same naive and sweet girl. Moreover, she loved her brother to core and will never be bitter with him whatever grave mistake he do also a small sister can never be bitter to her elder brother because a sister heart is so soft that it can never even think of hurting her brother then what hapened to her that she hurt him? There is surely something amiss.

Najma ran in a garden and sit on a bench, crying her heart out. She did such a thing today that she never thought she will do in her whole life but she did. Today, she hurt her brother and what else could she do? She hurted him for a reason, she have to be strong and bitter but only she knew how difficult it is.

"ek khubsoort larki ka is trah baag mai rona acha nhy hota"Najma heared someone voice, she was confused. She turned to see a handsome man with a smile. He was quite attractive and seems to be a gentleman with an innocent smile.

Najma was confused seeing him but looked away thinking him to be one of the roadside boy.

"arree ye kya bat hoye? Apne to mun hy phair liya"He said sitting beside her

Najma tensely wiped her face and stood up

"am sorry if I scared you but I just thought to help you"He said standing up undestanding her dilemma

"dekhiye, hme apse koi bat nhy karny chahe ap jo koi bhi ho"Najma said and walked away

"arre apna naam to bataty jayen aur han mera naam Rehan h"He shouted while Najma walked away

"kamal ki larki h!"Rehan said with smile, shrugging his shoulder

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Humaira was roaming around the garden of her house and was enjoying the beautiful green scene.

Ayaan came in garden and saw Humaira smiling and walking around. He smiled feeling very much better seeing her so happy. He was lost in Humaira beautiful smile.

Humaira felt someone's presence that warmth her heart and make her feel all the more happy. She turned to see Ayaan and her smile widened, she don't know why because the reason was buried in her memories which she lost. She felt that tingling sensation in her stomach as she found him smiling at her. She don't know why but a blush crept on her already pinkish cheeks, enhancing her beauty.

Ayaan was mesmerise by Humaira's beauty that increased with her dazzling smile and blush. He felt attracted towards her. In a trance, Ayaan walked upto Humaira and caressed her cheeks lovingly.

Humaira blushed hard and felt shy but suddenly their bubble burst as one came out of trance and the other get some blurry flashes of opposite situation, where someone(Ayaan) was shouting at someone(Humaira).

Both walked one step backward, one embarrased and the other confused.

"Ayaan.."Humaira called softly and hesitatly

Ayaan looked at Humaira

"k...on? Kon Ayaan?"Ayaan said stammering and getting back to himself

Humaira frowned

"ap bhi sab kuch bhool gye?"Humaira said concerned

Ayaan smiled at her concerned

"nhy, Humaira begum jab ap hamare sath hain to hum kese bhool sakte hain?"Ayaan said in his usual style

Humaira smiled at his words but then something come in her mind

"phir hm kyun bhool gye? Ap to hamare sath the na"Humaira said innocently

Ayaan smile faded, though Humaira has said it innocently she didn't knew that what hole it has createn in Ayaan's heart.

"nhy hum apke sath nhy the!"Ayaan whispered inaudibly

Humaira looked at him confused

"Ayaan"Humaira called her

Ayaan looked at her and smile forcely

"han...wo...wo...han ap to hmare liye Humaira Begum hain is liye hm kuch nhy bhol skte par ap bataye hm apke hain kon?"Ayaan said after thinking lot

"hum apke..."Humaira thought and the similar scene in garden flashed infront of her eyes but these time it wa not much blurry it has some colours around but the faces were invisible

"hum apke koi nhy"And Humaira laughed out loud happily

Ayaan looked at her with a satisfied smile

"if not then, then atleast now I could bring that smile on your face"Ayaan said in heart with a smile

Precap : Zoya in Asad's arms, both lost, Mitwaa.😃




Please leave your honest thoughts.

I have changed this SS into FF as I think it has long way to go and my updates are short so it is an FF now hope you guys will like it!

Tada!!!!!
Edited by Asshi... - 10 years ago
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Awesome update...
So Asad is trying to make Zoya forget the pain..
He can do his magic during 'One hour from everyday'
Continue soon
plz do pm me..😊

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Edited by --Arpita-- - 10 years ago

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