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Separation... No Moreee


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Part 16:

In SM, arrangements for the part were on full swing... AsYa were living here from last week as per Dilshad's order... yes she didn't allow Zoya to move back in KV... she wanted to provide Zoya each and every comfort so Zoya can't feel the absence of her mother... but AsYa were adamant to spend some days at Mannat, so Dilshad agreed for a week only... so AsYa were going to Mannat after the party...
AsYa was dressed by her father... yes Asad himself got reay his princess... but with the help of Ayan... and Zoya was still deciding her dress... Asad asked Dilshad to take AsYa downstairs and he came in their room to help out Zoya...
Asad: Mrs. Khan... sab log aa chuky hain app ready kyun nahi ho rahi???
Zoya: Mr. Khan I m fed up... pichly 2 ghanto se main dress decide kar rahi hoon or apko party ki pari hai...
Asad: yeh party app k liye hi to di gai hai... after all you are the person who gave birth to AsYa...
Zoya: zaida smart ban'ny ki zaroorat nahi hai... AsYa hum dono ka part hai... ab app meri help karengey k nahi...
Asad selected a red dress for Zoe as he was dressed in black... so they can compliment each other... Zoe was putting her earings when he came behind her and hugged her...
Zoya: so apko apni biwi k liye time mil gaya...
Asad: jab biwi etni khubsoorat ho to time nikalna hi parta hai... he said kissing her cheek...
Zoya: or agar main kaho k app apni beti ko zaida time dety hain to... she said turning around and sneaked her arms around his neck...
Asad: to phir app mjhy zaida time dy diya kejiye na... he said placing his hands on her waist...
Zoya: okay... now kiss me... warna hum late ho jayegey...
Asad: we are already late Mrs. Khan... he said pecking her lips...
Zoya: kiss karny ka keh rahi hoon... yeh peck thori na kahi hai...
Asad: I know Zoe... but is waqt etny se kaam chalana hoga... bcox your safety is more important than our love sessions...
Zoya: pata nahi mene Kashmir janey ki zidd kyun ki... she pouted...
Asad: Kashmir se yaad aya... app k plan ki vaja se kitna darr gaya tha main... apko kya zaroorat thi Kashmir ki zidd karny ki... agar kuch ho jata to...
Zoya: Asad... I m fine... AsYa is fine too... jo hua nahi us k barey main soch kar kya karna relax na baby... she said cupping his face...
Asad: haan par... he was going to argue but she stopped him in his sentence by capturing his lips... he was hesitant but responded to the kiss... they broke apart in need of oxygen...
Zoya: I know meri galti thi... app hain na mere sath... so no worries... ab chalen???
Asad nodded his head and they made their way downstairs... Asad rushed to his mother and took AsYa... Zoya was busy in greeting everyone while Asad was busy introducing his princess to his friends... he was happy... not just happy... he was feeling out of the world... and credit goes to Zoya... he looked at her... she was talking to some ladies when she felt his gaze on her... she turned and raised her brows in questioning... he simply nodded his head in no and blew a kiss and mouthed a thank you... she blinked her eyes and mouthed I love you... Ayan was witnessing their eye talk so he announced a dance by AsYa... he took AsYa from Asad and pushed him near Zoya... all cheered up for AsYa... Asad came and offered her a hand and she obliged happily... both were in the middle of the hall... her hands were on his shoulders... his hands were on her waist... eyes locked...

Main Rang Sharbaton Ka
Tu Meethe Ghaat Ka Paani
Main Rang Sharbaton Ka
Tu Meethe Ghaat Ka Paani
Mujhe Khud Mein Ghol De Toh
Mere Yaar Baat Bann Jaani
Rang Sharbaton Ka
Tu Meethe Ghaat Ka Paani
Main Rang Sharbaton Ka
Tu Meethe Ghaat Ka Paani
Mujhe Khud Mein Ghol De Toh
Mere Yaar Baat Bann Jaani
Rang Sharbaton Ka
Tu Meethe Ghaat Ka Paani
Main Rang Sharbaton Ka
Tu Meethe Ghaat Ka Paani
Zoya sneaked her arms around her neck and came closer to him...

Maine Toh Dheere Se Neendon Ke Dhaage Se
Baandhaa Hai Khwaab Ko Tere
Main Na Jahaan Chaahoon
Na Aasmaan Chaahoon
Aaja Hisse Mein Tu Mere

Asad pulled her more closer and placed his hands on her bare waist...

Tu Dhang Chaahaton Ka
Main Jaise Koi Naadaani
Tu Dhang Chaahaton Ka
Main Jaise Koi
Naadaani
Mujhe Khud Mein Jod De Toh
Mere Yaar Baat Bann Jaani
Rang Sharbaton Ka
Tu Meethe Ghaat Ka Paani
Main Rang Sharbaton Ka
Tu Meethe Ghaat Ka Paani
AsYa finished the dance and hugged tightly... Ayan came and told them to control their feelings as they were in a gathering... after the party AsYa bid their good bye and left for Mannat...
In Mannat, AsYa were in their room with their AsYa as they can't leave AsYa alone in her room designed by her father... AsYa was in the middle of the bed with AsYa on her sides... AsYa held their hands together and placed on sleeping AsYa... both were looking at each other and drifted to sleep...
Some hours later AsYa woke up... Asad too got up and placed AsYa on his chest... he didn't wanted to disturb Zoya's sleep so he patted AsYa's back but she was hungry and started crying... Zoya was up but she wanted to see Asad's reaction at AsYa's crying...
Zoya: apki princess ko bhook lagi hai...
Asad: I thought she is not comfortable so...
Zoya: give her to me... she said sitting on the bed...
Asad placed AsYa in her lap... Zoe was feeding her and Asad being the best hubby and father was watching his girls... Zoe was feeling strange under his gaze after all she was feeding AsYa... okay it was not for the first time in front of Asad but right now he was disturbing her...
Zoya: Asad stop looking at me like this...
Asad: main to sirf dekha raha tha... he laid on her other lap and closed his eyes... now fine...
Zoya: more than fine... she said pecking his lips... Asad and AsYa both were on her lap... she didn't want anything else...
AsYa spend 5 days in Mannat and shifted back in SM... actually Dilshad was not allowing for a separate stay so they obliged... Zoya was in touch with Dr. Heena... she called her once a week in hope for a green signal but no Heenu was adamant at her decision... actually her duty and responsibility was not allowing to fall in Zoe's trap...
AsYa was now 3 months old... Asad had arranged their due honeymoon... he was sure that his lioness will be on cloud 9... he wanted to surprise her... he was at office when his PA informed him that his GF came... Asad was shocked by hearing GF but than he remembered his dearest wife who had set-up a date for him 3 months ago... he called her in...
Jas was in Bhopal for a work but she remembered Zoya's deal so she came at DC to claim her date... she entered in Asad's office...
Jas: hello Mr. Khan...
Asad: hi... have a seat Miss???
Jas: Jas... Jas Ksgian... she said sitting opposite to him...
Asad: so Miss. Jas... app yaha???
Jas: I was in Bhopal so I thought to claim my deal...
Asad: deal... if I m not wrong we just met for once or mjhy nahi yaad hamari koi deal hui thi...
Jas: deal apki wife ne sign ki thi... I had asked her for a date with you and she agreed on that... apko yaad nahi... she pouted...
Asad: actually... I remember but right now I planning for a surprise for my wife so may be next time... he reasoned...
Jas: surprise haan... that's really sweet of you but I m here for now... pata nahi phir kabhi yahan aany ka chance milta bhi hai ya nahi... she tried to convince him...
Asad: hum Zoya se bat karty hain... if she permits I will go for a date... and let me tell you my is too possessive about me and she will not allow you for a date... or haan mere surprise k barey main app nahi btayen gi...
Jas: done Mr. Khan... she said excitedly...
Asad and Jas came at SM... she greeted everyone... being a bubbly girl she talked with all of them frankly... Ayan flirte with him but she broke his heart by saying that she is AAK's date... all were shocked hearing about the date... she told them the entire story... all wished her luck as Zoya being so possessive about Asad...
Jas went in AsYa's room and greeted Zoe... they sat and talked for almost an hour... Jas asked for her promise... Zoya cursed herself for being so open mouth... she wanted to cancel the date but Jas face fell after observing her facial expressions...
Jas: its okay Zoya... may be I m not that good... she pouted...
Zoya: hey you are too good... actually main Asad ko aisy...
Jas: I know you are possessive about Asad but I promise no hanky panky just a dinner and some talk's plzzz... pretty plzzz...
Zoya: okay fine but only 2 hours... she agreed...
Jas: OMG... she jumped in excitement and hugged Zoya...
Zoya: etna khush mene sirf 2 hours allow kiye hain or tum aisy behave kar rahi ho jesy mere hubby tumhy propose karny valy hain...
Jas: Zoya yeh 2 ghanty mere liye boht hain... I m really thankful to you... she kissed her cheek...
Zoya: so your time starts now... go and enjoy... or haan Asad ko aisy hi ly jao agar tummy ready hony ka kaha to tumhara time waste hoga kyun wo suit hi pehnty hain so hurry up...
Jas: thanks again Zoe...
Zoya: sirf Asad mjhy Zoe keh sakty hain par tum 2 ghanty k liye Asad ki GF ho to theek hai...
Asad didn't want to go for a date but he agreed as per Jas and Zoe's wish... Jas took his cell phone and handed over to Zoya and told her that Asad is her BF for next 2 hours so no disturbance and all... Zoya tried to reason her but to her shock Asad agreed with Jas...
Asad: come on Zoya... jaha 2 ghanty k liye mjhy bhej sakti ho to phir Jas k liye etna to kar hi sakti ho... he said in a harsh tone and placed a hand at Jas's back... Jas I think we should leave...
Jas nodded her head and bid good bye to all of them... Zoya was busy shooting death glares at Asad... and Asad was smirking at her jealous wife...
Asad and Jas reached to a 5 star hotel and asked for a table for 2 in candle light area... Asad told her that he will spend 3 hours with her... Jas was scarred as Zoya had just allowed for 2 hours... Asad told her honestly that he wanted his lioness back with a bang... so Jas agreed with him and asked for a dance in return... Asad was impresse with her guts... here he was telling her that he will spend extra time so he can find his over possessive wife back and this girl was asking for a dance... he smiled at her and agreed...
On the other hand, Zoya received a call from Heena...
Heena: hi Mrs. Khan... how are you???
Zoya: I m fine Heenu... tumhari internship kesi ja rahi hai...
Heena: meri internship to chal rahi hai... how are you feeling now... mene disturb to nahi kiya... I know tum is waqt apny hubby k sath kisi romantic date par hogi... after all its your day...
Zoya: my day???
Heena: don't tell me k tum bhool gai... Zoya you have completed your 3 months so now you can... you knw what I mean...
Zoya: are you sure Heenu... she asked happily...
Heena: yeah in fact kal mjhy Mr. Khan ne call kar k pocha tha and I assured him that you are fine now...
Zoya: Asad ko pata tha...
Heena: haan... oh kahi mene unka surprise to kharab nahi kar dia... sorry but I wanted to wish you both...
Zoya: hey don't need to say sorry... acha listen main tmhy fre ho kar call karongi... okay don't mind haan...
Heena: no problem Mrs. Khan... bye... take care...
Zoya: bye...
Zoya cut the call and dialed Asad's no. but his cell rang in front of her... she cursed herself and waited for his hubby to rturn from his so called date...
Jas and Asad had their dinner and decide to walk around the deserted road... Asad was telling her, his and Zoya's story and Jas was telling him about her aims and ambitions... she asked for a dance on the road but Asad refused nad promised her that he will come at her wedding and danced with her in front of her fianc... they spent more than 3 hours and than Asad dropped him at Airport but she grabbed his hand and asked for a hug... Asad was hesitant but agreed... she hugged him tightly... she clicked a selfie and kissed his cheek... Asad was shocked but he ignored it and bid her good bye and she left for Mumbai...
Zoya was on verge of crying... Asad was taking more than enough time... she asked Najma to take care of AsYa and left from there in haste...
Asad came back and searched for Zoya but she was not there... Najma informed him about her going out alone... he called her but he cell phone was switched off... he was getting worried for her... suddenly he thought about a place and went in search of her...
Precap: Asad found Zoya... Emotional Drama...
Zoya Asad Ahmad Khan is back with a bang...




Sooo that's it...
ignore my mistakes plzzz...
hit like n leave ur replies...
next update till 40+ likes...
Ashii...
Edited by ashiii333 - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
Yaar Jas,,,,
i don't know mene kya kiya????
i m really scarred yaar...
agar tujhy acha nahi laga ho to plzzz bta dena main edit kar dongi...
main paka mind nahi karongi...
hope u like it... fingrz crossed...
Ashii...
Edited by ashiii333 - 10 years ago
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res 4 arzoo, jas, amu, aroo, nilu, hena, asif, abi, mayur, sasir, yumi, anopama, cinderella
Edited by ashiii333 - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
mera res
unres

awe Asad dressing Asya i so wish yeh QH main hota..hate Gul😡
Dillu forced Asya 2 stay in KV
Zoya wanted kiss but Asad just pecked her😆 loved d scene that followed😉
& in d party d way Asad rushed leaving Zoe 2 pick up Asya & introduce her i loved baby ke scenes😛
Asya danced on party i like d song😊 than they went 2 mannat
cute family was sleeping so peacefully when Asya awoke due 2 hungry tummy😛
Zoe uncomfy ho gayi cuz Asad was watching her 😆😳
Zoe was in touch wid Heenu but aur strict Doc din't fell in her trap🤣
Aur finally my D day came 🥳
Ayaan flirted wid me😡 & i broke his heart🤣
OMG I enjoyed reading my part after that😃
mujhe dance nahi mila but 1 kissi mil gayi heenu mumma aapki beti got 1 more point than u😆
Heenu ne phir mari entry but Asad ka surprise reveal kar diya what mumma
Main chali gayi mera chotu sa role aur meri wajah se ladai kra di Asya main not fair
Zoe pakka mannat gayi hogi 😆
Edited by jas91 - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: jas91

mera res

chal me going now😳
see u 2morrow
love u🤗
bye😊


love u tooo 🤗
miss me haan 😳
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Posted: 10 years ago
ress...
unres...
jas ki bachi tjhe aj hi ka din mila asad ko date pe le jane ka!!!
aj jb curfew hat gaya ... very bad puttar 🤣 🤣
loved the update aashii...
zoya ne apna promise nibhaya... nice girl but asad ko tym diya tha date pe spend krne ka but Businessman ka mind yaha bhi overtime kr diya...😆
aj ghar aane do zoya chodegi nahi 😡
continue soon plz
Edited by aarzoo50 - 10 years ago
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Lovely update
Asad and jas date good hope she not to react any problem
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Posted: 10 years ago
Wow wow wow.. Lovely update...

Mazaa aa gaya..

Loving the way you create the adorable little moments so lovely. ...

Waiting for the next..
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Salaam Ashiii...
Thanx for the Res' ...and P.M...
Well it was a well written and fantastic update...
So AsYa was with her parents in S.M...because her Daadi wanted her to be their...( ofcourse for Zoya only )...but it was well thought by Dilshaad..
ASYA ...Stealing naughty moments...in their room...and Zoya being the more naughtier...one in this...she even demanded or can say ordered Asad to kiss her...and even took it when he hesitated...hahaha...
So Dr.Heena was very much in touch with Zoya...hmm...you didn't missed her...
Sooo...Jas made an entry and directly went to Asad's office for the Date... Asad being little hesitant went to S.M to take and Zoya's permission..
Zoya now cursing herself...so bad...but she also can't see somebody unhappy also...
So finally Asad and Jas went on their Date and Asad wanted to make Zoya jealous...and for that he spent a quality time with Jas ...and when it was time to leave..Jas pulled Asad in a Hug and pecked his cheek also...so fierce...and dominating...but we know for obvious reasons...why she did that...Bravo

So Zoya got angry...did she went to mannat alone...or somewhere else...?
Can't wait for the next part...already...
Continue soon...
# Jas you were good in here...
# It is little messy when we read ASYA & ASYA at the same time...
# And the song was the best you can take in this situation...it is one of my favourite song...
Edited by MayurChan - 10 years ago

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