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Posted: 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: H.e.n.a

Mine

Unres!
Finally!

Me cried while reading!!😭
But I love u for not showing death!😃
Overall very well written! Loved it!
Revelation plot was too good.

Waise Humari Adhuri kahani kab likh rahi ho??


hena death Allah reham tum sabko main etniii zalim lagti hoon 😡😡
hamari adhoori kahani yh to mai socha hi nahi 😆
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: nilusoni

firstly happy to see update after so long

this is really shocking part for me
so emotional moment for asya and aman
omg zoya in hospital and your cliffy but complete end
i hope you are going to give epilouge and reunite asya plzzz
i dont want sad ending and that to cliffy
are you planning for sequel to this
plz pm me for your work


thank you so much dear 😊
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Originally posted by: Tunailuvsahil

I dnt like it.i possible try to end this story with happy ending,zoya and her child didnt deserve died.adhuri mahhabat ko mukammal kijia aur ak epilodge dijia.


death to dekhayi hai nahi
that was just a cliffy update dear
hope u lyk my latest update 😊
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: asyakabhidreamy

Allah miya what's wrong with u aashi

U can't do this ..
Please please please yaar ..
Just one more update !
I have been loving this ff from God knows when !
Please make it happy ending
Qh mai to ksg ke bad Qh maine bhi quit kiya
So mere most favourite couples ka happy ending dekh nahi payi
Please make its happy ending
Tumhe hamare Asya ki kasam ..
I am your new reader na ..
Please do its little thing 4 me
4 our Asya ! I want them together please please please ..


Allah Miyan !!! kiya kya mene 😆
asya ki kasam kyun di
mai to khud etniii badi asya fan hn 😳
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: MayurChan

Salaam Ashiii... 😊
Thanx for the PM... 😛 & the Res* also after a longest gap. 😳
Emotional 😭 , Very Emotional 😭😭 ,
Very Very Emotional 😭 😭 😭.
But Kudos to you...for going on with this part... 👏 now their no diff btw you and Sara...but a very well written part. ⭐️
Zoya this update was mostly about her only...her past revelations , then those dreams and haullicantions and then her confrontation with the family...then her own confrontation with Asad...meeting with Aman...and then the last fall.
I don't know...how could so sudden a life threatening situation...aroused... 😲 but never the less...writer's liberty at bay...I don't know about they love for Such climaxes..😕 and you named this as the end chapt...😊
But this was Asad's adhoori mohabbat...but still their adhoori kahani has to be written...lets see...if their is a kahani still left here... but truly Ashiii...you stood your ground with the title..and gave us this emotional part..😃
Still as a reader...i would expect a deservin end...
Well a very good part...if ignoring it as a AsYa fan...you wrote it brilliantly.. 😃
Agar Epilogue hai...toh intezar rahega.. 😳


w. salaam mayur
thank you so much dear 😊
u know vat mjhy bhi yakeen nahi aaraha vat i did 😆
khair cliffy tha n sab ko dar bhi laga which i badly wanted 😉

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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: SanKsgian

truth finally out
but this is bad...zoya is serious
will she and the baby make it



let's see 😉
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: ajanshul

😭 sad end. But a beautiful .story.great job


thanks dear 😊

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