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Adhoori Mohabbat...


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Part 26:

Asad hadn't expected that Allah can bless him with such happiness... his life his Zoya was back and Aman was there as a gift... the cutest n the loving gift... time was flying like a carefree bird and it has been 8 months since Asad was living with his own family... sometimes he felt like it's a dream but when he found them in his arms in mornings he just thanked Allah for such blessings...
Asad had taken Zoya n Aman to Mumbai as per Aman's wish... he obliged happily bcox he never wanted to say no to his son... Aman introduced his father to his friends in Mumbai... actually Asad wanted to create new memories so can Aman n Zoya can forget that they had spent some years all alone...
Aman was with Arman n Nuzhat as AsYa were out for a party... actually Asad was invited by his associates so he took Zoya with him and introduced her as Zoya Asad Ahmad Khan... Zoya had attended such parties being a PA of Rehan Malik but now she felt different bcox Asad was there with her... she felt overwhelmed with emotions...
AsYa were enjoying at the party... they were having their dinner when Mr. Kapoor spotted them...
Mr. Kapoor: if I m not wrong you are Ayesha Khan... we met in Delhi remember...
AsYa looked at him... Asad immediately remembered him and fisted his hands bcox he didn't to create a scene here... Zoya ignored Mr. Kapoor and focused on Asad who was controlling his anger...
Mr. Kapoor: well I think you guys are together... he said pulling a chair near them...
Asad: excuse us Mr. Kapoor... we need to go... he got up and came to Zoya's side...
Zoya too stood up and collected her clutch n turned to go but she felt a tug at her hand... Mr. Kapoor had grabbed her wrist... Asad signaled Zoya to move but she was still on her spot... he felt that something is wrong and turned and found Mr. Kapoor's holding out her hand...
Asad: leave her hand... he said gritting his teeth...
Mr. Kapoor: that's none of your business Khan... you were going so what are you waiting for???
Asad: she is here with me... so stay away from here... he said freeing her hand from his grip...
Mr. Kapoor: last time she was with Rehan Malik... now she is with you and may be tomorrow... he stopped in his sentence as he got a slap from Asad...
Asad had enough... he can't hear out single word against his wife... isn't it obvious??? He slapped across his face... all tuned their attention and witnessed the scene... Zoya sighed in relief by seeing Asad at her rescue...
Asad: dare to utter a word against her and I promise that will be your last word... he was about to grab his collar but Zoya stopped him...
Zoya: let's go Asad... sab log dekh rahy hain...
Asad: I m not scared of anyone... he shouted back at her...
Mr. Kapoor: look here Khan is getting over me bcox of...
Asad: Zoya Asad Ahmad Khan... biwi hai meri... kuch bhi bolny se pehly ek bar zaroor soch lena... he grbbed his collar and warned him...
Zoya: leave him Asad... I don't want any issue bcox of me... lets go... she cried...
Asad: I m leaving you for now Kapoor... aagy se kuch aisa wesa kiya na to jaan se maar dunga...
Asad grabbed Zoya's hand and dragged her with him... Zoya knew that he was really angry so she followed him... In parking lot, Asad opened the car door for her and turned to go but Zoya grabbed his hand...
Zoya: I m sorry Asad... its all bcox of me... she turned him around and hugged him... she wanted to finish this matter here only...
Asad: I should be sorry Zoya... I was not there with you... he hugged her back...
Zoya: but that was...
Asad: I don't want to talk about past Zoya...
Zoya nodded in yes and sat on the passenger seat... Asad too sat on driving seat and started the car... Asad was angry on himself bcox he was real reason behind their separation that why Zoya had to face such situations... and Zoya was thinking some ways to cheer him up...
AsYa were headed to Arman's house but their car stopped with a jerk... Asad removed his seat-belt and came out of the car... Zoya too followed him... Asad checked the car and after over-viewing the engine he decided to call mechanic but to his luck there was no network... Zoya suggested for a walk bcox there was just 20 minutes walking distance left... Asad was taking long strides while Zoya was the slow one...
Zoya: Asaddd... she stopped and shouted from behind...
Asad: now what... he was in no mood to behave normal... he just wanted to go away from her... his guilt was killing him...
Zoya: you have 2 options... walk slowly or pick me up in your arms... I m tired...
Asad: we are on road Zoya... what if someone sees... suddenly the old Akdu came back...
Zoya: abhi to chilla k bol rahy thy k main apki biwi hoon... ab kya hua...
Asad: that was other thing Zoya... leave that topic... I don't want to talk about that...
Asad replied controlling his emotions and turned but Zoya grabbed his hand...

Agar Tum Mil Jao
Zamana Chod Denge Hum
Zoya came closer to him and cupped his cheek...

Agar Tum Mil Jao
Zamana Chod Denge Hum
Tumhe Paa Kar Zamane Bhar Se Rishta Tod Denge Hum
Agar Tum Mil Jao
Zamana Chod Denge Hum
Agar Tum Mil Jao
Zamana Chod Denge Hum
Asad remembered his deeds and felt guilty bcox he was the sole reason for Zoya's problems... he can't take this any more... he pulled her and hugged her tightly... he cried and cried... Zoya too hugged him back and felt his pain... she broke apart and wiped his tears...




Asad came closer and he was about to kiss her when he took backward steps... Asad was confused bcox they were in the middle of the road and she was moving backwards...

Tumhe Hum Apne Jism-O-Jaan Mein Kuch Aise Basa Lenge
Teri Khushboo Apne Jism Ki Khushboo Bana Lenge
Khuda Se Bhi Na Jo Toote
Khuda Se Bhi Na Jo Toote
Woh Rishta Jod Lenge Hum
Agar Tum Mil Jao
Zamana Chod Denge Hum
Tumhe Paa Kar Zamane Bhar Se Rishta Tod Denge Hum
Zoya wanted to move back and than came running to him so she can hug him tightly but unknown to her a car was coming on high speed and hit her...
Agar Tum Mil Jao
Zamana Chod Denge Hum
Agar Tum Mil Jao
Zamana Chod Denge Hum

Asad saw her moving away from him... unknowingly his heart itched by seeing her moving away and his fears came running his mind when a car hit her...
Asad: Zoyaaa... he yelled...
Asad was rooted on his stop... eyes were fixed on her while tears made their way... her head was bleeding badly... he somehow managed and came to her and sat... with his shaking hands he touched her... he was thinking that its all a bad dream but after touching her he came back to earth and gather Zoya in her arms...
Asad: Zoyaaa... open your eyes... plzzz... Zoya utho... you can't do this to me... Zoyaaa... he cried and hugged her lifeless body...
Asad took Zoya to the hospital and informed Arman... Zoya was in ICU and doctors were treating her... Asad was looking at her through the window... he just wanted to erase her pain but now he again became the reason of her state... Arman was there to support Asad but he was worried for Aman... actually he had informed Nuzhat about Zoya but told her to stay at home with Aman... he didn't want to scare Aman... he just wished that his aapi will get well soon...
It has been 2 hours and Zoya was still unconscious... doctor came outside and Asad jumped on him with questions...
Asad: how's my wife... is she fine... tell me she is alright...
Dr: your wife is fine Mr. Khan...
Asad: are you sure doctor... I mean she got very bad injury and she was bleeding from head and...
Dr: relax Mr. Khan... your wife n baby; both are fine... doctor assured him...
Asad: ba... baby... you mean Zoya is pregnant... he asked unbelievingly...
Dr: yeah... your wife is pregnant... don't you know???
Asad: no... I don't know... even Zoya didn't know about this...
Dr: ohh... well congratulations Mr. Khan...
Asad: but Zoya... she injured badly na... he again asked about Zoya...
Arman came and placed a hand on his shoulder and signaled him to relax...
Dr: Mr. Khan you wife is alright... trust me... she is completely fine... she will regain consciousness in a hour or two... take care of her... doctor smiled and left...
Asad sat on the chair while Arman too sat there... he cried n thanked to Allah... he had thought that Zoya will again forget him and all but Allah has blessed him with such a beautiful gift... he was going to be a father... he smiled with teary eyes and immediately he thought about Aman...
Asad: Arman... you stay here... Zoya will be up soon... wo Aman k bary main pochy gi main Aman ko lekar aata hoon...
Arman: app be-fikar ho k jaiye amin yahi hoon... aapi k pass... or haan change bhi kar lena... appi aisi halat main dekh k darr jayengi...
Asad: aisi halat???
Asad looked at him and then realized that his shirt was soaked with blood... he sighed and nodded at Arman and left... he again came to ICU door and looked at her...
Asad: thank you so much Zoya... you fulfilled your promise and stayed with me... I was actually a fool and thought that you left me again... but you came back with world's best gift... thank you... he smiled and touched her through the glass door...
Asad came at Arman's place... he freshens up and got changed... he came to Nuzhat and told her about Zoya... she congratulated her brother...
On the other hand, Arman came to Zoya... actually he too got scarred by seeing her in that state... he was happy for her aapi... she got a really good family... he was remembering some family moments when Zoya stirred in sleep... Arman came closer and creased her hair... Zoya opened her eyes and blinked for several times... she looked here n there and found a man beside her bed...
Arman: how are you feeling now...?
Zoya: app... app koun hain... ahh... my head is spinning... she cried in pain...
Arman: aapi relax... I m Arman... you had an accident... he replied with realizing her earlier words...
Zoya: app koun hai... plzzz call my husband... Mr. Khan... she looked for Asad...
Arman: you don't know me???
Zoya: no... app plzzz Mr. Khan ko bula dejieye... she pleaded...
Arman got shocked... his aapi didn't recognized him... he came out of her room and sat there...
Asad told Aman that his mama is in hospital... Aman got worried but Asad told him that his mama had planned a surprise for him... both left for the hospital... Aman asked Asad to buy him flowers as he wanted to surprise his mama too... Asad smiled and fulfilled his wish... both reached the hospital and found Arman who was sitting there...
Asad: Zoya ko hosh aya...
Arman: ji...
Asad: shukar hai Allah ka... let's go Aman...
Arman: nahi... pehly app mil lejieye... she is calling for you...
Asad: haan par Aman sath hoga to Zoya ko acha lagy ga...
Arman: she is calling for Mr. Khan only...
Asad: yeah... I m going... Aman app ruko... papa abhi bulaty hain...
Aman sat with Arman while Asad entered in Zoya's room... Zoya heard the click of the door and looked at Asad...

Tumko dekh ke yun lagta hai
Koi bichda khwab aaya
Barso lambi raat se guzre
Subah ka jhonka laut aaya hai
Asad came closer to her and smiled... Zoya too smiled with tears in her eyes...

Bahut der jaagi
Bahut door aayi
Khwab ne na chhodi meri kalayi
Asad sat on her bed and took her hands in his... Zoya traced his face with another hand...

Kab se meri saans ruki thi
Mujhe saans aayi
Mujhe saans aayi
Mujhe saans aayi



Asad wiped her tears and nodded in no...


Zoya moved ahead and hugged him... Asad too hugged her back...

Saans me teri saans mili toh mujhe saans aayi
Mujhe saans aayi
Mujhe saans aayi..
Asad broke apart and kissed her on forehead... Zoya hugged him again and cried...
Zoya: I m sorry Mr. Khan but I can't do this... I don't want divorce... plzzz Mr. Khan I can't live without you... I m pregnant Mr. Khan and our child need us...
Zoya hugged him tightly and cried her heart out... she didn't want to go away from him... she was repeating her words and passed out...



Sooo that's it...
ignore my mistakes...
hit like n leave ur long replies...
Ashii...
Edited by ashiii333 - 10 years ago
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res 4 arzoo, jas, afu, hena, mayur, abi, asif, anopama, nilu, niya, sasir, yumi, mags, cinderella
Edited by ashiii333 - 10 years ago
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res...
unres...
milgaya chaen tujhe... history repeat karake... 😡
pehle accident mai zoya ki memory gai... this one mai memory k sath sath akal.b ayi...
but i m concerned abt aman.. hopefully i take him as a samajhdaar boy... hope he can cope vd all this...
arman is also sad... he lost his api...
asad got his purani zoya bt loat amans mother fr now...
it wud b quite difficult fr him to handle the situation...
plz continue soon
Edited by aarzoo50 - 10 years ago
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awesome...
Now Zoya got her memory back and forgot about Aman...
Waiting for next update..
Edited by ammusjyoti - 10 years ago
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Awesome Update Ashii
&
Interesting Twist
glad that Zoya is fine
but
also feeling bad for Aman
poor child his mom forget him🥺
CONTINUE SOON
Edited by -ABI- - 10 years ago

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