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Salam... how are you all... hope fine and doing your best...
well first of all thank you sooo much for your love n support towards my story... my updates were ready but i delayed it for some reasons...
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Adhoori Mohabbat


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Part 23 A:

AsYa were coming closer day by day... both were enjoying their closeness... Asad was giving her some space so she can adjust herself completely... Zoya being an independent joined Asad's office like other employees... she didn't wanted to work on high post using her husband's name so she started working like others... Aman was enjoying his life with his parents... AsYa had got admission for him in the best school of Bhopal... AsYa dropped Aman at school and went office together then Zoya picked up Aman from school and came to office again where the trio can have their lunch together... then Zoya and Aman left for home while Asad came in evening usually late...
Asad was working really hard so he can secure his son's future in all means... no doubt he was rich but he wanted to work in front of his son so his son can learn the concept of working... Zoya always waited for him when he came late at nights... he had told her several times not to do so but she never listened to her... actually she loved to wait for him... she had fallen for him when he was her Sir but now a wife was falling in love with her hubby... Asad had to attend a business conference in US... he wanted to take his family with him but Aman's doctor didn't allow him to travel o long so he had to go alone...
Asad took Zoya and Aman for a dinner bcox the day after tomorrow he has to go to Mumbai then US so he spent a quality time with them... later that night, Aman was sleeping peacefully and Asad was playing with his hair... he just wanted to freeze that moment... his son and wife, both were with him that too happy... what else he can from his life... he looked at Zoya who was engrossed in packing... he quietly got up from the bed... covered Aman with quilt and came behind her... she was not aware of his moves but when he hugged her from behind she felt his presence and immediately leaned against his chest...
Asad: Aman ko to US se boht kuch mangana hai in fact us ne apni list bana kar di hai... so Aman ki mama ko kya chahieye... he held her hands and intertwined their fingers...
Zoya: Aman k papa... she said shyly...
Asad: bas or kuch nahi... he said turning her around...
Zoya: nahi... app bas jaldi wapis aa jayengey mere liye vohi boht hai... she blushed and played with the buttons of his shirt...
Asad: app mjhy miss karengi... he said making her face him...
Zoya: hmm... she nodded her head in agreement...
Asad: or agar main jail wapis aa jaon to mjhy kya milega... he said pulling her flushed against himself...
Zoya: apko mere se mangney ki zaroorat nahi hai... app jo chahy ly sakty hain... she said lookingd deep in his eyes...
Asad: soch lejieye Mrs. Khan... kuch bhi...
Zoya: soch kar hi bol rahi hoon... kuch bhi... she said cupping his cheek...
Asad: okay... or agar main abhi kuch lena chahon to... he said moving near to her lips...
Zoya: or agar main apko kuch dena chahon to???
AsYa were inches apart... both looked in each others eyes and moved closer to seal their lips but Aman's voice broke their moment...
Aman: papa mjhy kuch or bhi mangana hai US se...
Zoya turned red while Asad looked at her with a smirk... both smiled at each other and came to Aman...
Asad: app so rahy thy na... he asked to confirm... bcox he was going to kiss his wife but his son was awake so he have to be careful next time...
Aman: haan par app uth kar gaye mjhy nend nahi aa rahi thi or phir mjhy aik or gift bhi to chahieye...
Zoya: no Aman... no more gifts... app pehly etni lambi list dy chuky ho papa ko...
Aman: haan to kya hua mama mjhy papa ne promise kiya hai k wo mjhy boht sary gifts la kar dengey... haina papa...
Asad: I will... but app subha bhi to bta sakty thy na... apko subha school bhi jana hai Aman... be a good boy and sleep... he trued to lay him down...
Aman: app dono bhi to abhi nahi soye... he said looking at his parents...
Zoya: Aman...
Aman: kya Aman... he said and lay down and covered himself from head to toe...
Asad motioned her with his eyes and she nodded in yes... AsYa lay down with Aman and hugged him from either side...
Aman: mjhy nend aayi hai... he lied...
Asad: par papa ko nahi aayi na to app ab papa ko company naho dogey...
Zoya: haan or aaj apko mama ko story sunani hai...
Aman: app ne meri bat nahi suni thi so no story and no company good night... he replied...
Asad: acha koi bat nahi papa aisy hi bethy raheingy app so jao or kal app raat bhi papa apko kuch nahi kahengy phir next night se app or mama sath main ho gey wo bhi 10 days k liye achy se enjoy karna app dono... he faked anger and turned to his side of bed...
Aman looked out of the quilt and faced Asad's back then he looked at Zoya and she raised his brows at him... Aman came closer to her and whispered...
Aman: papa gussa ho gaye na...
Zoya: app bhi to gussa thy na...
Aman: par main to papa ko tease kar raha tha mama...
Asad was hearing out his confession and when Aman said the word "tease" he tuned and hugged him...
Asad: papa bhi to tease kar rahy thy... he said kissing his cheek...
Aman: mjhy laga app gussa ho...
Asad: papa Aman se gussa nahi ho sakty... kabhi bhi nahi...
Aman: to mera ek or gift...
Asad: apka ek or gift hmm done... bolo kya chahieye...
Zoya: Asad you are spoiling him... he is too young or app uski har zidd puri kar rahy hain...
Asad: yeh hum dono papa bety ka masla hai... so Aman ki mama app apny gift k abry main plan kejieye... he winked at her...
Zoya: okay... app dono plan karo I m going to sleep... good night...
Aman: papa ab mama ko naraz kar dia na...
Asad: mama maan jaye gi app apna new gift btao...
Aman: new gift mama bhi to sath main dengi...
Zoya immediately turned towards them... she was 101% sure what was coming next...
Zoya: mama kesy sath main gift dengi...
Asad: haan Aman app mama kyun keh rahy wo nahi dengi... app mjhy btao...
Aman: par Sarah ko to us k mama papa ne mil kar gift dia tha...
Asad: kon Sarah...
Aman: wo Mumbai main meri friend hai... mama apko pata hai na Sara ka...
Zoya: huh... she was lost in her own thoughts... she closed her eyes and composed herself... actually she didn't want to embarrass Asad so she spoke... Aman its late app so jao... papa ko kal oht se kaam khatam karny hain... Sarah k barey main hu bad main bat karengey haan...
Aman: par papa ko Sara k barey main btao na mama...
Asad: haan Zoya btao na mjhy Sarah k barey main... wait a sec Aman... you are too young or app Sarah Sarah kar rahy ho... apko aisy bat nahi karni chahieye...
Aman: papa Sarah meri friend hai... nothing else...
Asad: nothing else matlab...
Zoya: Asad isy Arman ne boht kuch sekha rakha hai to eska nothing else ka matlab vohi hai jo app samajh rahy hain... she tried to avert the topic...
Asad: Arman ko to main btaonga... he is just 5 or kya kya sekha rakha hai mere bety ko...
Aman: app Mamo se bad main poch lena... mera gift... he said getting irritate... his parents were not listening to him...
Asad: haan apka gift btao kya chahieye...
Aman: wo Sarah ka last birthday tha...
Zoya: mjhy pata hai app Sarah ko miss kar rahy ho papa jab wapis aa jayengey hum Sarah ko milny jayengey now happy...
Asad: Zoya tum usy btaney deti... he faked anger just to show Aman...
Aman: mama apko kuch bhi nahi pata... papa main apko btata hoon... Sarah ko last birthday par us ka mama papa ne chota sa baby-boy gift kiya tha or ab mjhy bhi wesa gift chahieye...
Asad was beyond shock... he didn't imagine such demands from Aman... he looked at Zoya who was red due to embarrassment...
Zoya: pata chal gaya kya gift chahieye...
Asad: wo... actually... wo mjhy laga k... Aman wo...
Aman: papa ab mjhy bhai kab milega...
Zoya: haan Aman k papa app usy har tarha ka gift lekar dy rahy hain to btaiye... she loved seeing her hubby blushing so she pulled his leg to enjoy the whole scene...
Asad: Aman app ne kaha k Sarah k mama papa ne mil kar usy gift dia tha to papa is ready ab app mama se pocho k kya wo reay hain... he wanted to avert the topic but when Zoya teased him, he too played with her...
Aman: mama app ready ho...
Zoya: huh... she was unable to answer...
Aman: mama btao na... he asked again...
Asad: Zoya btao Aman ko... are you ready... he winked at her...
Zoya: I m ready... she said looking straight in his eyes...
Asad again asked her raising his brows and she nodded in yes and blinked her eyes in approval...
Aman: yeah... ab mera bhi chota sa bhai hoga... lekin mama mjhy baby-girl chahieye...
AsYa looked at over excited Aman and came closer to him...
Asad: haan Zoya mjhy bhi baby-girl chahieye... he too asked her shamelessly...
Zoya: app dono aisy demand kar rahy ho jesy main koi shopkeeper hoon app dono aye to shopping ki or cheez mil gayi...
Aman: mama abhi plzzz...
Asad: Mrs. Khan abhi plzzz... he said controlling his laughter...
Zoya: acha mama next birthday tak try karengi par app dono ko promise karna hoga...
Aman: haan promise mama...
Asad: promise kyun???
Zoya: yeh gift vali bat hum kisi ko nahi btayengey... matlab hum btayengey par abhi nahi... she didn't want to make it tomorrows headline... after all Aman is Zoya's son... the old Zoe who can't hid anything from others...
Aman/Asad: okay mama/Zoya Khans Promise... both said in union...
Zoya: that's like a good boy... she kissed Aman while Asad too came forward... she kissed him too and trio called it a night...



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Edited by ashiii333 - 10 years ago
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Part 23 B:

Next day, Asad finished his pending works... he came home quite early and spend some time with Radil... he then got hold on Ayan and gave him lots of responsibilities... he ate dinner with his entire family and ended the day with a happy note... later that night, he went on terrace bcox he was feeling low from last few days... actually he was going away from Zoya and it reminded him their long separation so he was scarred to go alone... he didn't want history to repeat itself... but his heart was not at comfort... Zoya felt his absence next to Aman and got up... she didn't find him in the room... she searched him in the whole house and at last she found him on terrace... she came and placed a hand on his shoulder... he looked at her with teary eyes...
Zoya: Asad what happened...
Asad crashed himself on her and hugged her tight... Zoya hugged him back but she did not understand why he was crying... she pulled apart and cupped his cheek...
Zoya: kya hua... app ro kyun rahy hain... she said wiping his tears...
Asad: I... I m scarred Zoya...
Zoya: scarred but why Asad... she said making him sit near the railing...
Asad: what if I lost you again Zoya... main tumhy nahi khona chahta... Aman or tum meri zindagii ko Zoya or main... he cried and didn't bother to complete his sentence...
Zoya: app aisa kyun soch rahy hain Asad... hum app k sath hain... app apny kaam se bahir ja rahy hain or Aman or main yahan hain sab k sath...
Asad: agar... agar app mee pechy chali gayi to...
Zoya: main kyun jaongi Asad???
Asad: mene app k sath jo sab kiya uski vaja se app chali gayi to main kya karnga... fresh tears made their way...
Zoya: agar mjhy apko chorna hota to jis din app ne mjhy sach btaya tha main Zoya hoon tabhi chali jati... now plzzz stop crying... she again wiped his tears...
Asad: haan par...
Asad was going to speak further but Zoya didn't allow him and took him in a kiss... Asad was hesitant at first but when Zoya broke apart and kissed away his tears he smiled and took him in an urgent kiss... both were lost in the kiss... Asad leaned on the railing so Zoya can lean on him easily... there deepened the kiss and brought out their insecurities in that kiss only... they broke apart in need of oxygen... Zoya rested her forehead against his forehead...
Zoya: ab yakeen ho gaya na k main apko chor k kahi nah jaaney vali... she said catching her breaths...
Asad: hmm... he nodded and took her in a bone crushing hug... AsYa were on terrace only ... Asad rested his back against the railing and Zoya sat beside him and rested her head on his shoulder... but Asad laid her down and rested her head in his lap and asked her to sleep... Zoya too wanted to sleep in his lap but his continuous gaze was not allowing her to sleep... she asked him to look away and he refused...

Mujhe Haq hai ...

Tujhko jee bhar ke mein dekhu
Mujhe Haq hai
Bas yuhhi dekhta jao
Mujhe Haq hai
Zoya held his hand and kissed it... she sat and hugged him again...

Piyaaa piyaaa
Piyaaa piyaaa
Bole mere jiyaaa

Tumhe haq hai

Asad wanted to go back to their room but she made him lay on her lap... he wanted to spend some alone time with him... he obliged happily and closed his eyes... Zoya played with his black silky hair and blessed him with some unexpected pecks...

Kal subah tujhse mein
Door chala jaunga
Ek pal ko bhi tujhe bhool nahi paunga
Yeh chehara ,Yeh muskaan
Ankhon mein bhar ke

Yeh chehara ,Yeh muskaan
Ankhon mein bhar ke

Mein teri yaad mein tadpu
Mujhe haq hai
Tujhse milne ko mein tarsuu
Mujhe haq hai
A lone tear escaped from his eye... she kissed it away and he hugged her from waist and hid his face... she too hugged him in that position with teary eyes...

Piyaaa piyaaa
Piyaaa piyaaa
Bole mere jiyaaa

Tumhe haq hai...
As it was getting cold outside, Asad took Zoya in his arms and made his way towards their room... both entered with silly smiles on their faces but when they found Aman awake, Asad immediately made Zoya stand at her own... Asad sighed in irritation and Zoya smiled at his behavior...
Aman: app dono kahan thy... I was missing you... she said rubbing his eyes...
Asad: wo... hum bahir thy... wo mama ko chot lag gayi to papa help kar rahy thy... he lied...
Aman: chot kesy lag gayi mama???
Asad: bas mama girny vali thi papa ne pakar liya...
Zoya looked at him in disbelief... she was shocked by hearing his lies... okay she understands that Asad can't tell him truth but a lie... God... she hate lies...
Asad: so my sleepy boy... papa ko mid main sona hai... phir kal se to papa akely hongy na...
Asad laid down in the middle of the bed and Aman came on his left side happily... Zoya was hesitant but seeing Asad happy she came and laid down at his right side... Asad hugged both of them...
Aman: I love you papa and I will miss you... he said with closed eyes...
Asad: papa loves you too... he kissed him...
Aman: but not more than your wife... he said with a wink...
Asad smiled at his son while Zoya shoot him a death glare...
Asad: mene yeh bat apny best friend se kahi thi ab agar mera best friend mera beta hai to main kya kar sakta hoon... he said sheepishly...
Aman: mama wesy papa k sath sath I love you too... he said innocently...
Zoya: I know... ab sona nahi hai kya???
Asad: yeah god night Aman/Zoya... he said kissed both of them...
Aman fall asleep in some time and Zoya too closed her eyes but Asad was awake... after some minutes Zoya opened her eyes feeling weir and saw Asa still awake...
Zoya: Asad... she whispere...
Asad: hmm... he said pulling her closer...
Zoya: nend nahi aa rahi...
Asad: nend aayi hai but I m planning something... he said facing her little bcox he didn't want to disturb Aman's sleep...
Zoya: planning for what???
Asad: Aman k liye separate room...
Zoya: par wo kyun...
Asad: kyun kya... ab roz raat ko usy kya jhot bolta rahon... he said with a wink...
Zoya: so mean... she smacked him hard...
Asad: Mrs. Khan... he warned him...
Zoya: kya Mrs. Khan haan... mera beta yahi hamary sath rahy ga... mjhy usy alag room main shift nahi karna...
Asad: okay... as you wish Mrs. Khan... phir Aman ko app hi kahieye ga usy uska gift kyun nahi mila...
Zoya: wo main handle kar longi... she said lowering her eyes...
Asad: wo kesy... he asked to tease her more...
Zoya: gift k lie Aman ka room se jana zaroori nahi hai...
Asad: matlab Aman k samney hi???
Zoya: Allah Miyan... app aik hi bat bar bar kyun kar rahy hain... she smacked him again...
Asad: acha fine... par mere wapis aany tak koi solution nikalna hoga apko... he said seriously...
Zoya: okay... I will... she agreed and closed her eyes and hugged him...
Asad: Zoya...
Zoya: hmm...
Asad: you will manage na... he again teased her...
Zoya: Asad I swear ab phir se pocha na main koi manage nahi karongi... ab aik dum chup... she shouted...
Aman: mama I m here only... papa ko kyun dantt rahy ho app... he sat up by hearing his mama's loud voice...
Asad: app soye nahi Aman...
Aman: apki wife sony hi nahi dy rahi Mr. Khan... kabhi unki chot or kabhi unki baty... he complained to his Mr. Khan...
Zoya: apki wife matlab... I m you mama Aman... bhol gaye kya... she faked anger...
Aman: meri mama aisy chilla k bat nahi karti thi... yeh sab Zoya Asad Ahmad Khan k kaam hain...
Asad: right partner... apki mama pehly jesy shor machati hain phir se...
Zoya: partner haan... mjhy nahi sona app dono k sath... she was about to get up when Asad grabbed her and made her lad down in the middle of them...
Asad: Aman ab mama yahan par sahi hain... aik side se app mat jaaney dena or is side se main nahi jaaney donga...
Aman: okay Mr. Khan...
Zoya smiled at them and trio came closer and closed their eyes to call it a night finally... Asad being over smart came closer and hugged her more tightly...
Zoya: to yeh sab drama is liye tha haan... she whispered and smacked his hands away...
Asad: hmm... ab mera beta so raha hai... be quite Zoya... he whispered back...
Asad turned her towards him and hugged her again... she too hugged him back... Asad kissed her again... she broke the kiss and turned towards Aman so she can sleep with him too...



Sooo that's it...
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Ashii...


Jas Arzoo Pinku...
its your family reunion...
a tharki type AAK like Pinku...😉
a strict type Zoe like Arzoo...😊
a naughty Aman like Jas...😳
ab phir se update check karo...
reunion acha laga to 🤗
or acha na laga to 3 huggies 🤗 🤗 🤗
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Edited by ashiii333 - 10 years ago
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