SaHil OS~ A Shirtless Attempt.

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Posted: 10 years ago

#11

Originally posted by: mahwash22
This was really beautiful! I really enjoyed reading the passion and love between them. I just hope something like this happens on the show as well.. Only difference would be that it has to take time for her to forgive him. :-)
Thank you for writing this!

You are most welcome! :)

Really looking forward to a patch up in QH soon, but with lukewarm hopes.

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Posted: 10 years ago

#12

Originally posted by: najma123
Brilliant. You write damn well. Wish this happens in the show but who am I kidding? xD Do write more. Can you send me a PM?

Sure, I will :)

And thank you :)

I have one other OS on Ashar and Khirad of Humsafar. Do tell me if you want the link :)

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Posted: 10 years ago

#13

Originally posted by: evedallas1
Thanks ! nice but I couldn't understand the dialogues in Hindi 😕. Could you please translate it in English :) but I like it ! 😉

Thank you! :)

Will edit the post and add the translations ASAP!

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Posted: 10 years ago

#14

Originally posted by: cutie15
That was soo awesome. .!!
It gave me goosebumps. .!!
Amazingly written. .
do write more..:)
Nd loved saahil in this.. I miss dem..!!
Thanks for the hot os..!!:)

Thank you so much! :)

Will certainly pen down the next crazy idea I get 😆

Edited by RomAtHeart - 10 years ago

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Posted: 10 years ago

#15

Arushi, how awesome was that?! Brilliant stuff man! Can i just say I LOVED the title!! Shirtless - this term does strange things, I know 😆

Amazing-ly written! Loved how you brought back the gud ol' "Miss Dhabevaali" Loved how she got flustered still maintained her composure😆

Loved this attempt by Aahil and how he brought back her jealous streak too! 😆

How much I am missing my babies man! A great attempt at bringing those days back, definitely worth reading! Thank you for this! :)

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Posted: 10 years ago

#16

nice,,, but I hope Sanam takes longer to come around in the serial😊 this is good for a regular couple fight,

Edited by JShukla - 10 years ago

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Posted: 10 years ago

#17

Originally posted by: Prags_Sociopath
Arushi, how awesome was that?! Brilliant stuff man! Can i just say I LOVED the title!! Shirtless - this term does strange things, I know 😆
Amazing-ly written! Loved how you brought back the gud ol' "Miss Dhabevaali" Loved how she got flustered still maintained her composure😆

Loved this attempt by Aahil and how he brought back her jealous streak too! 😆

How much I am missing my babies man! A great attempt at bringing those days back, definitely worth reading! Thank you for this! :)

Hey! Thank you sooo much. It's my first attempt with SaHil and such amazing response is truly overwhelming! :)

I too miss the good old days, their little tiffs, the subtle love and the brimming romance! Hell knows what the CVs have done with such a potent couple.

Thank you nonetheless! :)

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Posted: 10 years ago

#18

Originally posted by: JShukla
nice,,, but I hope Sanam takes longer to come around in the serial😊 this is good for a regular couple fight,

Your never gonna leave this forum, are you? 😆

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Esha

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Posted: 10 years ago

#19

This was really good! I loved it! Yup def after all the tension n arguments, reading an OS like this feels real good! The show is def disappointing but ur writing is just so awesome! Plz do write more n pm them to me if possible!