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Posted: 10 years ago
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In the shadows...

The last time we parted,

There were tears in your eyes...

My parting gift...

That you refused to part with...

Today, my search ends-

I have found you.

Only, this is not the you' I left,

You grew wings out of the fires of hell...

I hear laughter...

See the joy you spread...

I feel the warmth...

My chill could not touch...

I see your eyes...

They speak of nothing but love...

I look deeper...

I am not there anymore!

A shy smile, a silent question...

I am just another somebody'

Deserve you, I did not...

But to be a nobody'...

To be wiped out like that...

Insignificant me!

I hang around...

Giving you space...

Watching from a distance,

In ardent admiration...

I dare not touch...

For fear of staining you...

I remain in the shadows...

Guarding you in stealth...

In your happiness...

I find my salvation...

Nearer...farther...

Where you need me to be...

But I will be here...

Till my last breath be.

PS: What would happen if Sanam had an accident and suffered from amnesia at the end of this torture track?...And Seher took her away to some place safe...far away...

These are my thoughts on that...kind of like an OS...😳😆


The title applies to both of them- Sanam is only a shadow of her real self, until she regains her memory...And Aahil vows to remain in her shadows, lest he ends up hurting her again by refreshing the painful memories...

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Posted: 10 years ago
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WHY R U SO OBSESSED with this Amnesia track mommy.. 😲
After Ajmer you wanted this I clearly remember..

but these lines

I remain in the shadows...
Guarding you in stealth...
In your happiness...
I find my salvation...




how ironic... that these lines screams out my unsaid love saga with the fictitious man who ruled this place until a yr ago 😭
Edited by MisHumptyDumpty - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: MisHumptyDumpty

WHY R U SO OBSESSED with this Amnesia track mommy.. 😲

After Ajmer you wanted this I clearly remember..

but these lines

I remain in the shadows...
Guarding you in stealth...
In your happiness...
I find my salvation...




how ironic... that these lines screams out my unsaid love saga with the fictitious man who ruled this place until a yr ago 😭



😆
🤣

Yeah..I am obsessed with it!😃😆 And there are so many instances it can be used in, I have discovered...jab tak Gul doesn't give- main bhookhi rehoongi!😲😆

😲 Unsaid love saga...😲..hawww...!

He still rules.😳😉👍🏼

But Aahil...😳..sweetheart...
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Wow this is really good! Hmm im usually not so fond of amnesia tracks lol but I wud love for Sanam to fake a memory loss 😉 Just for the sake of Seher and the revenge track I would not want her to forget her twin nor who murdered her parents... that wud b too painful... But for Billi to let down her guard and Aahil to reveal his true feelings towards Sanam, as in become devastated n try to make her realize their love, I wouldn't mind a fake amnesia track where Sanam has "partial" loss and her last memory is the night before the first nikah when she claims to hate Aahil. How fun would that be! (Ok im so mean lol) 😆 So she wud still recognize Rehan n Billi and even Aahil but pretend to not believe that she is married to Aahil. But before all that I want Sanam2 out lol and the day she leaves this happens... Will teach Aahil a lesson 😆 We wud get many SaHil moments with Sanam pretending to be uncomfortable in their bedroom n then at night secretly meeting Seher! Billi wud b super excited n hopefully confess, Rehan super confused and Aahil super sad lol Just a crazy idea... Wont happen cuz Sanam truly loves Aahil n wont want to hurt him tho he sure deserves to be taught a lesson lol but yes loved ur piece! It was really nice 👏
Edited by Raingoddess - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
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There's something super sad about forgetting your loved one. Reading "The Vow" sort of killed me... so unfair and no one to blame... 😭

Beautiful prose soup !! Very heartfelt...and wistful
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Beautiful, Soup, as always. I hope Sanam doesn't allow Ahil near her ever without losing her memory.
Amnesia - its the audience who need amnesia to forget a lot of things and watch the crap that they are dishing out in the name of drama.

Even without the amensia track, Sanam is just a shadow of her real self.
Edited by GitaIyer - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
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soup ...brilliant !
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: chicksoup


😆
🤣

Yeah..I am obsessed with it!😃😆 And there are so many instances it can be used in, I have discovered...jab tak Gul doesn't give- main bhookhi rehoongi!😲😆

Song apt - Noddle Momy : Katra katra milti hai. Katra katra jeene do. Zindagi hai.. Behne do, behne do. Pyaasi hoon main pyaasi rehne do.

Gullo will continue : Rehne doo 😆 🤣

😲 Unsaid love saga...😲..hawww...!

He still rules.😳😉👍🏼

Bigger Screen, he will, In sha Allah 😎

But Aahil...😳..sweetheart...

Gorky pa 😎


edited - Katra.. ☺️ okay.. 😳
Edited by MisHumptyDumpty - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
#9
Sad...to be a shadow
It's torture.. ...
Shadow cannot scream...

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