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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: Rarepearl


Sis, here's a big hug for the res. Love you!

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Hey Choco,
You know I stopped myself so many times from asking you again about this Os. Little did I know this gave you the push to write sooner. Next time se stay warned, Im going to be on your back all the time ;)


Coming to the Os, it was Amazing and so so so cute. I simply loved it.


Bechari Zoya, sahi to bol rahi thi, sab Asad ki galti hai. Shit I had almost fallen off the sofa how she burst out at him in the office. Asad should send thanks heavenwards that his wife decided to storm off after accusing him instead of elaborating on his fault. Lol. Sach mein trust Zoe to make a hungama out of anything.


I laughed at the dilemma poor Khans faced the whole day due to her childishness. Something dat ought to be celebrated was spent worrying on what had made her so upset.



Finally after a whole day Asad took things in his hands. Bohat dair lagi Mr. Khan ko akal aanay mein. Poor thing had to go through a session of tears and sighs with his crazy yet adorable wife.


Zoe is super cute. Her reservations and insecurities all revolved around losing her Mr. Khan. Aww she made him so so happy with the news.


Dilshad is smart enough to put two n two together. I lobed how she teased the couple at dinnet. Lol. Bechara Asad had to go through this due to Zoya"s big mouth and exaggerated expressions.


Oh my heart fell in love once again with Asad hearing his words to Zoe at night.

"Zoya. I promise to love you the way you are. For me what matters is your pure soul and the beauty you hold within. On the outside what you look like now or later on in life will never affect my love for you. I was, am and always will be with you. Will always love you like I do today. For me you are and will always remain the most beautiful woman. You never need to feel insecure."


You know Choco despite this being a funny os it was emotional as well as it revolved around the love AsYa have for each other and its always a treat to read one on them especially coming from you.

I loved every bit of it.

Looking forward to many such os n fully faltus from you.. soonish.

Lots n lots of love. Muaaah.



Lol you're most welcome to push me and keep reminding me that I have to finish writing what I have started 😉

That's what my point was "Sab galti asad ki thi"😆 but kya galti thi hayy

Show mein bhi Mr. Khan ko akal aane mein bahut der lagi thi. He is a tube light I think 😆

Somehow I end up writing maybe the best leg pulling scenes for Dilshaad. Don't know why or maybe cause my mum is like that. So I end up making dillu mom like that in my stories.

Aww Nim's you make me feel honored. Itna bada compliment... Me blush blush like this ☺️
Then happy happy like this 😃

You made my day dear 🤗 mwah right back at ya
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Posted: 10 years ago
#52

thanks Smitha glad you liked it 😊
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: Crazzyasyafan

Awesome OS

Zoyas antics very cute
whe she accused him at that time i taught she was preggy
and my prediction was true
I loved this OS



Thank you so much dear. I know the plot was old but I wanted to see what I could do with it. Thanks for reading 😊
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Thanks dear 😊
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Thanks As if.hope you are well.😊
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: pinks2911

And I am backkk!!! 😃😃


And so are you! 😃😃😃

Abhi tho I gotta go and I haven't read it even..

Atleast I made it to the res stage this time.. This time pakka I will comment..

And Sis so happy to see you here..🤗 Kitne din ho gaye baat karke.. 😕

Will be back to unress..😃

Love you loads!❤️

Hwy Shravs. I muss talking to you too. Am happy ki him dono ki comeback timing same hai 😃. Telepathy you call it or what. Me bad at all these things.

Aww going already. I will wait for your comment.

I love you too dear 🤗 itna saara 🤗
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: -Crazy4AsYa-

super cute os
i got an inkling initially that what was happening but how nicely u penned it made me awed...
it was brilliantly written
especially loved asya's last scene!!

do write more 'verbal vomits ...'



Lol I know these verbal vomits are really catching up with me. I have so many ideas but very little time to write. But am writing slowly. That's the reason am only concentrating on OS's as they are easier. Ff or as needs a lot more time.

Aww thanks Srashti. Glasnyou liked this 😃
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: Amin21

Beautiful

Amazing
splendid job yaar
really love it
thanks for the pm do write more


Thanks dear 😊.hopefully will write as and when life gives me time 😊
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: 1788shreya

Long time

Amazing
Fabulous
Keep writing



Hey Shreya. Glad you enjoyed this one too 😊

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