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Posted: 10 years ago
beautiful update...
with asad little confession...
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: Alai123

Awesome update

Love the way Asad confessed his feelings to Zoya.
Who is the new entry? Guess that person is related to Asad's past...
Continue soon!
Thanks for the pm😉


thank you so much dear
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: tacker_karan

What a asyalicious part...loved it

d start scene pf d blue shirt ws cute esp d way zoya made asad wear it...n of course d extra sweet coffee fr now..
thn asad's realisation...I cn understand how embarrassing n awkard ws it fr him to prevent others accompanying thm ti d farm house...
d farm house scenes wr all very beautiful...n d song...just perfect...but d evil shadow in d end...hmmm



thank you so much we are glad that people are liking it 😊
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: swapno

Wow..beautiful, mind blowing update...minus the last lines...

Why you both have to ruin this almost perfect update???
You can post it in the next na...!
Anyways I love that song Kitne dafe and it suits well in Asad's situation...
and Zoya, love her ways of changing Asad...!
Continue soon



thanks a lot swapno ❤️
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: sanah12

OMG got no words to describe how beautiful n well written this update was

Loved it to the core!!!!
It was surely an asyalicious update n just too good...
Aww asad is changing n he has actually changed all because of zoya...
Asya surely make the best couple ever...
Loved the part where asad was remembering the moments n smiling...
His realisation was also very well written..
Ayaan is the mischievous one
He knew what asad was upto n didn't leave a chance to tease him
Najma is just too cute blushing n getting all red like a tomato
Just love the khan family really cute n sweet small family...
The farmhouse idea wasn't bad asad miyaan
Zoya is just zoya love how she brings out the best in asad...
The rain part was really nice n cute
Love the way asad was consoling her with his soothing words n also to take her attention off that incident he told her bwt the secret place..
Both gifting each other sumthn was just too sweet n cute
Loved all asya's parts specially the date one where he confessed thru his song n how he planned the surprise for her was just too sweet...all her fav foods n then him confessing bwt how is life changed was wonderfully written...
The whole update was just mindblowing n awesome
Loved every bit of n eager to read more
Do continue asap
Thanks a lot for the pm Aditi n Srashti




I have got such looong comment after looong time and I am more than glad for it 😳

Thank you so so very much dear sorry for being late to reply but thank you so very much for your reviews
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: ajanshul

I became fan of ur writing
Amazing update


thats a huge compliment for us
thank you so much dear😊
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: PriyaCherry

Thanks for PM,Dear.😊

Thank you so much for this Long part.😊
It was Super Part.😊
ASad(KSG) Changed so much because of Zoya,it was so Interesting.😊
The Shirt and Coffee part was so Nice.😊
The feelings of Asad(KSG) thinking about Zoya Cute.😊
The way Asad(KSG) convinced his family members to took Zoya with him to Farm House was so Nice.😊
Rain Part was so Cute.😊
The way Asad(KSG) consoled Zoya when she was stunk in Dark room was so Nice.😊
Asad(KSG) took Zoya for Date,it was so interesting.😊
The whole Date part was so Beautifully explained,I Loves it.😳
Who was behind ASYA(KABHI) wanted to take their happiness away,I'm so scarring.
Please Update Next Part soon,I am waiting here.😊
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(MISSING KSG and KABHI So Much)
PriyaCherry.



thanks a lot dear
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: --Aishwarya--

Well written part and it was a fantastic one!!! 👏


Thank you so much for the pm!! 😊


thank you so much
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: anopama

Wow

Totally loved it
It was absolutely asadlicious not asyalicious
His change his thinking his realization his plan
His attempt him being tease his lie being caught
All of it loved it
Him being a wonderful son ,brother and dutiful hubby
Aww taking care of her
Zoya is totally taken by him she is bowled over he is different
Does he has feelings is their a chance for her for them
So she has her own desires to for her hot hunky husband
The gifts the date the song the little dance the hug
Love the confession through the song leaves Zoya wondering
Is he trying to say something does he have feelings for me
Omg who we have coming into the story now who is out to destroy asad happiness
Plz don't let it be tanveer
Continue soon


lets see ...thanks a lot
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: Amin21

Just one word for the update

PERFECT👏⭐️
Wonderfully written
love love love it
each and every part was superb
enjoyed reading it
but who the hell was that jealous now😡


have patience girl...

Thanks dear

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