AsYa Collab SS || Hidden Desires||*THE END* - Page 17

Originally posted by: aarzoo50

awww the best present ever...
thanx a lot adi JD...
luv u so much...
beautiful start of the story...
flashbacks gonna b a major part of the story i guess...
so AsYa married fr their loved ones n hv already decided to nva fall in luv... but least they kno ki mitwa ishq pe zor nahi...
waiting fr further updates...
thanx again 🤗

Originally posted by: MayurChan

Whoa...
Heyy...Aditi & srashti...
What a mindblowing update it was...
This was the kick start and it was like a first ball six kind of update...and the start only shows how amazing this story is going to be...
So i was somewhat right in my assumptions...marriage , ayaan and Zoya...though that is what i haven't concluded but was right ...hahaha
But the funny part is Ayaan trying to fix ASYA's marriage...
Well is Dilshaad really having a serious medical problem here...?
But i loved this update so much...
Now suddenly i feel why Zoya said this as a mistake in the prologue...What must have happened in between them that though they fell in love but Zoya decided to leave now...
And i think Jas guessed it right about Zoya being Asad"s wife from that whole curtain thing only...smart girl...or i think we haven't given much of thought while reading the update...
Continue soon...

very nice update.loved it

OMG!
Aditi and Srash !!!
Superb prologue!!!
Loved it!!
well portrayed emotions!!!
So excited!!
Going to read part 1

Originally posted by: AsyaManeet

OMG!
Aditi and Srash !!!
Superb prologue!!!
Loved it!!
well portrayed emotions!!!
So excited!!
Going to read part 1

Originally posted by: ksen

very nice update.loved it

so they are going have contract marriage

waiting for the next part

Originally posted by: -Mrinalini-

Awesome update. I loved the flashback! Waiting to see how things fall into place. Contract marriage eh? 😃

Continue soon.

~ Mrina <333

Originally posted by: jas91

Yes i m very smart or i can say only smart here🤣

Love u Mayu mera talent samaj gayi tum jaldi😆

I guess u read my prediction on pg 11😉😆

Originally posted by: jas91

Beautiful updt Adu Srash👏👏

Mera guess sou takka sahi tha😎

I m so intelligent😳

Asya r married & Ayaan link tha unhe milane ka😉

both had bitter experience cuz of their parents failed mrg

both hate love & mrg but ends up doing both😆

Dono shaadi nahi karna chahte but apne apno ki wajah se majboor hain

but i think Dillu ka plan bhi hai accident might b real but baaki sab jo Doc ne bola woh jhoot hoga which she did as per Dillu's orders😉

pehle sab soch rahe the Zoyaan r married😆 ab thinking Asad did something bad wid Zoe😆

phir galat soch rahe hain she's going cuz dono ne decide kiya hoga 6 months mrg but ab dono ko love ho gaya & Zoe is leaving thinking she is cheating there mutual agreement🤣

awesomely penned i loved it👏⭐️👏