Payback Time - AsYa OS - Page 5

Originally posted by: MayurChan

Heyy...Aish...
Well a lovely O.S...
Why a last one..?
I really liked the concept...
Actually Asad"s torment and pain was well written here...
Zoya came back for him and then his life became normal again.
Well written...
Continue soon...

Originally posted by: SprinklesOfLove

Wonderful! Miss AsYa so much! Stories like your revive them for me again! Why is it the last? I want more!

Originally posted by: annanyaksgian

very nice

and the banner is awesome

Originally posted by: sweetluck

Wonderful OS... 😳

Originally posted by: ankiecool

aww it was super duper lovely i loved how u put emotions n romance in a mix in this story well done keep it up

Originally posted by: -Crazy4AsYa-

this was terrific!!!
asad was really broken n reading the title i somehow thought that this is a sad os...
but it was a surprise package!!!
cute n emotional in its own sense...

and why is this ur last os??? i want more...

Originally posted by: Niya_789

Cute and emotional 😛

Aishu why haven't you liked or commented my work ? 😕

Originally posted by: PrettYSmile

Beyond beautiful...

Plllzzz write more ...

Fan job...brilliant

Originally posted by: kajenilious

wowww!!!!lanothr os:-):-)i wil be vry hapy to recieve pms frm u often;-);-)nd dis was so beautifuly wrtnnlvd d cncpt nd zoe carng nature !!!!!feelng bad fr asad tat hw he would b livd lonely nd nw extrmely hapy ofcoursend y it would be ur last os:'(pls do write more nd more nd update ur ss asap pls

Originally posted by: anopama

Nice

I was a bit confuse

Until u clear tht is when she was sent back

So no engagement no Nikaah no tanveer

And 2 yrs later they unite

Nice so true love do triumph