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PrettYSmile

@PrettYSmile

Inactive

Posted: 10 years ago

#21

Beyond beautiful...

Plllzzz write more ...

Fan job...brilliant

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Shama_zz

@Shama_zz

Dazzler

Posted: 10 years ago

#22

wowww!!!!lanothr os:-):-)i wil be vry hapy to recieve pms frm u often;-);-)nd dis was so beautifuly wrtnnlvd d cncpt nd zoe carng nature !!!!!feelng bad fr asad tat hw he would b livd lonely nd nw extrmely hapy ofcoursend y it would be ur last os:'(pls do write more nd more nd update ur ss asap pls

Edited by kajenilious - 10 years ago

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anopama

@anopama

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 10 years ago

#23

Nice

I was a bit confuse

Until u clear tht is when she was sent back

So no engagement no Nikaah no tanveer

And 2 yrs later they unite

Nice so true love do triumph

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Avie

@Avie

Dazzler

Posted: 10 years ago

#24

Beautiful OS Aish..

Poor Asad was so broken when Najma and Dilshad left him.. And ZOya left him too..

That scene where he breaks all photos was truly heart-touching.. And the way he cries..

Nice of Zoya to come back.. Haww!! he so cutely asked her not to leave him..

Finally ending mein sab happy happy ho gaya.. I so wish Dilshad aur Najma bhi aa jate..

Great one Aish... And keep writing more and more..

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nilusoni

@nilusoni

Rocker

Posted: 10 years ago

#25

Its wonderful loved it

Thanks for pm

Plz pm me for your next work

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jas91

@jas91

Sparkler

+ 2

Posted: 10 years ago

#26

Some times i lack words 2 praise u Aish

that's my state right know😊

Cuz we all love Asya so must know i loved this 1 2😛

Very well written gr8 job👏

Asad's emotional state & Asya's reunion was amzing

Loved Asad's dailogues😛

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Ashii

@AkaiBara

Sparkler

Posted: 10 years ago

#27

amazing os...

loved it...

enjoyed a lot...

thnxxx for pm...

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soumya.g

@soumya.g

Explorer

Posted: 10 years ago

#28

Amazing os
bichaara asad he suffered a lot
Dillu nazma dono asad ko chodakar chalegaye
the famous runaway bride
thank god zoya waapis agayi
they will be for each other forever
Really nice os
dont say it is your last os
you are a wonderful writer pls
dont stop writing on asya
pls...