Kick - an asya love story with an extra kick! Updated pg 4 - Page 3

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Posted: 10 years ago
#21
yes i knew that asad did all that for a reason :)... yay i'm right :)
intersting, loved it :)
plzz clear this confusion of humeira and zoya :)
i'm sure it has to be zoya ... plzz update soon :)
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Posted: 10 years ago
#22
Wow I am liking this
So asad is not a bad guy he is a good guy with a bad attitude
So he defends them then take thier hefty fees he charges and gives it to their victims
Nice really nice
But how is this and asya story we have as we don't have ya but we have SJ as humeria
U sure u got the name right
Ok just trying to find the ya in asya
Continue soon
Love the first kick
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Posted: 10 years ago
#23
Nice one...
I was shocked reading the cs... but I think I got what it is...
Waiting for twist...update soon!
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Posted: 10 years ago
#24
Hola... Interesting story
Plz pm me next update 😊
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Some days after in a mansion somewhere in Bhopal
A girl is attempting a suicide, her eyes are shown and soon they close since she had slit her wrist. Blood is gushing out from her wrist and has filled in the wash basin and a red pool has set. The door was knocked off and an elderly man came in rushing calling her daughter, what did you do?

Asad's office

Asad picks up a call

"Am I speaking to Asad Ahmed Khan?"

"Yes speaking, May i know who are you?"

A silent scene is shown and Asad hears through the ear piece.

"Sure, sir I am coming soon, just text me your address sir"

Asad stopped the car and notices a hospital's name in a board just in front of the gate.

"I m Asad Ahmed Khan" handshakes with an old man

"and I m Gaffur Ahmed Siddique, father of Humeira"

"where is she?"

"upstairs" they heard noises from tv playing

"Are you sure that she will listen to me?"

"Convince her that you are our lawyer, perhaps she may"

Asad blowed a puff of air and blew it and went upstairs and saw a young girl coming down.

She explained "Voh, uncle ne kaha tha ki Humeria ko akele nahin chodna chahiye, tho main company de rahi thi, main ghar jaa rahi hoon"

Gaffur nodded and proceeded with Asad

Before Gaffur introduced Asad to Humeria

"Oh he is the man who has come now to advice me not to do this and that"

"please to meet you Miss Humeira, I m Asad Ahmed Khan, your counsellor"

She handshaked with him and jolt of electicity was felt by both of them which made them withdraw thier hands immediately

"have your seat Mr Khan"

"I prefer to be called Asad"

"So Mr Asad Khan, sit down and watch the movie with me as of now I m not interested in your boring lecture"

"Seems you r so stubborn, well there are movies like this too, you dont watch this type of movies" he pointed out to a book which was something divine.

"Well movies should have some spice too, like some hot smooches, two three bed scenes, then bath room scenes etc, then only its interesting"

Asad was taken aback by her bold talk but he felt a lit bit emabarassed too at the same time.

Seeing him looking here and there Humeria initiated a convo

"Mr Asad Khan, you have been called by my father to advice me not to file a case against my boy friend Haider Sheikh who happened to cheat and betray me, right"

"Well Humeira, if you file a case then a case will be filed on you too, for attempt to suicide, that too is a crime, so its better to avoid isnt it?"

She was watching the movie without giving any eye contact to Asad and then was going on flipping channels showing her irritation. the suddenly said

"I will not change my mind, I want to teach him a lesson that he will not even dare to do it again."

"Then why did you attempt for suicide seems like you are a brave girl, you shud forget him and move on"

"See Mr Asad Khan, suicide is a momentary feeling at that moment I felt like doing so, even in your life too you wud have experienced at least one single moment where you thought you must end your life isnt it?

"No I havnt felt anything like that till now"

"Okay I dont care about it either, well I want to to this at least before showing a middle finger to him or else I wont be able to sleep for nights to come, cursing my foolishness for loving him"

"So you still want to file a case against him?"

"I wont change my decision"

Asad felt defeated for the first time he found out a girl whom he had searching for the entire life time Humeira was a blend of fairy and feiry. But alas she got betrayed by her love and he didnt know how to convince her to move her. He badly wanted her to move on in her life rather than waste time on a doucebag like Haider. But he also got the fact that she is strong headed and stubborn and to convince her is not a one night's game. He resigned for the day and went downstairs to meet her father

"She is too much stubborn, this is her comfort zone, I want to take her out of this surroundings so that she can think openly and more clearly, staying here she may not even listen to me like she did to me today, If I take her for a long drive outside the city maybe I will be able to convince her, Sir please give me one chance."

Gaffur nodded and Asad bid goodnight

Asad before exiting asked him

"sir you had a mutlispeciality hospital in your neighbourhood then why did you take her to a private clinic which was 5 kms far away?"

Gaffur coughed a little bit and said " I m worried for the involvment of media and I m a very private person so I took her to my family doctor whose clinic is 5 kms away"

Feeling convinced Asad drove back while remembering the face of Humeria.

Next day Asad was waiting in his SUV

Humeira came and sat on the passenger seat and said

"I am not interested in this drive and your sultry talks but I just wanted to get out of the boredom I felt right now so I agreed for this, dont think that i will agree to your whims and fancies."

There was a knock on the driver window. Asad rolled it down to see gaffur

"she is the apple of my eye, if anything happens to her I will not spare you Mr Asad Ahmed Khan." He said with a serious and threatening tone

Humeria giggled and chipped in "Mr Asad Khan last chance to back out, its risky taking me with you, you know I can attempt for a suicide again"

Asad looked skeptical and then said "I think I can manage" and drove off.
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Posted: 10 years ago
#26
Thanks for PM.
It was Very Nice Part.😊
Asad(KSG) now taking Humeria's case,it was interesting.😊
Humeria committed suicide and she wanted to put case on Haider who betray her but Her father called Asad(KSG) to convince not to put case on Haider.
Asad(KSG) and Humeria conversation was so nice.😊
Asad(KSG) took Humeria to a Long Drive to feels better to her.😊
Gaffur warning to Asad(KSG) was so nice,it was love towards her daughter.😊
Let's See how Asad(KSG) manages Humeria?😊
Waiting for Zoya's entry.😊
Please Update Next part soon,I am waiting here.
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(MISSING ASAD(KSG) and ASYA(KABHI) Very Much)
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Posted: 10 years ago
#27
Pretty Interesting Update
enjoy reading it
&
yeah Anurada aren't U sending PMs of this Story?
Coz I am not getting any PMs yar.
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Posted: 10 years ago
#28
Nice update...
Asad caught between gaffur and humeria...
Some secret is there behind. ...
Waiting eagerly for next update
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Posted: 10 years ago
#29
interesting
yet confusing
hope u will update next parts soon
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Posted: 10 years ago
#30
Oh God!! it's getting more interesting!!

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