You Ripped me apart!

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Posted: 10 years ago
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Hello everyone! How are you guys?🤗 I missed you a lott !🤗
Many asked me when would I return and I said that I would. So I'm back
after a short break!😃
hope you're having a great time.😃 anyway here comes the post. Go on!


Woman You ripped me apart!



My passion my life--my love --you robbed me of everything. I offered you my heart--but with what promise?--

A thorn in return?!!


When a body is torn, pain insinuates, but when a soul takes the blow flames leap out and perish whatever it finds in its wake!


Sanam--his fire--his soul---the name of his unrequited dream and desire had been snatched from his hands. .
banished from his hopes he is been dashed into a leaping fire of abomination and deceit.
And we see a smile turn into tears, a face of unprecedented joy drown into darkness of torment and hatred!


And Aahil is the name of that fire now, a wounded leopard who had been promised love and affection but ending up bruised. Having Denied what he sought turns his starlit night into a nightmare of irrevocable sorrow. Screaming in agony of betrayal and heartbreak unknown of the treachery that lurks in his own house under his own eyes but without his knowledge, Aahil writhes. His peril is unbearable to our eyes. Sad.
:(

Aahil reminds me so much of Hamlet. For some odd reason I find them so alike. Their torment, self doubt and disapproval towards everything-almost every relation makes them tragic as characters.

Although unlike Hamlet Aahil has some hope left still. He has Sanam as his guiding light.

All that Aahil wants is to be loved. All through the years he had hated himself.With Sanam by his side he had begun to admire the Aahil he had lost somewhere, under the influence of a manupulative vile mother--Tanveer.


It's saddening and both tragic that the only truthful and honest relation of his life was manhandled by the biggest ever lie of his life! if only he knew! Sigh. . .


He had loved Sanam insanely. And with a passion so enormous that it could break even the boundaries of time.

When Aahil laments we feel his pain right here-inside our ribcage! When he throws the bottle and sreams in need of solace, we breath pangs of sorrow!

Inevitable it is -when he shed tears, drops of water mirror in our eyes as well.


I hope Aahil encounters with the truth and comes to see that his love and trust had never been in the wrong hands. And I hope it happens soon.


Sanam and her compassion for the unseen man, is quite a thoughtful interlink and irony of fate. Cvs have utilized that very well.👏

KVB has again done an amazing job as expected.👏
and So has SJ. She was brilliant as both Sunehri and Sanam. But of course for me Sanam tops the chart.😃

I shall leave the rest.

Precap not to mention is highly disheartening! :(
Let's wait and see what comes of this unexpected situation . . . and how this encounters fares for both!

I would love to hear from you. Please tell me what you think. 😳


take care my darlings. Have an amazing weekend.🤗

Edited by Paint.It.BlacK. - 10 years ago

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Ms.Sherlocked thumbnail
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Posted: 10 years ago
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And your back with your awesome takes! I missed your heart touching posts! You make it all the more beautiful!
Pain and angst and agony really does something to us eh? 😆

So its a RES for now. I am gonna read it araam se.. 😃


Unres. Yeah finally! 😆

I had to read it with a proper and focused mind, and yesterday I wasn't in my senses, well you know the reason why! My baby Aahil is so..so..broken! 😭😭 God! It just pains and cringes my heart to see him like this.

Thats what we dread for and thats waht we also love to see when it happens. Love to cry over that broken heart..coz its kinda known that at some point this heartbreak is gonna be there, and we wait for just that..sometimes it looks quite creepy actually 😆

So. Um. The post? Its just beautiful beyond words. I just love your play around the words, They are so deep. The immersion in the character is displayed so well with your descriptions, its just so deep, And painfully beautiful to read and go through again with all that..sigh!

I can't just even begin to say how i feel for the situation he is in. He is broken. Like actually his heart is broken into pieces. And there was no noise..at all. It broke so silently, so quietly, that it was only his feelings who heard that. Its almost like, he is searching and picking up those shards, and is not able to pick them...or worse even not able to find...Ugh I am tearing up already 😭

I can go on and on his condition..lets just stop here for now.

He has cried and yelled his heart out. Poured everything. Now his heart seems to be empty, again with her only. If that is even possible? He thinks he has got over with her, her memories, little does he know, memories remain only when that person is gone, and she has never left him. His heart and his soul.

He would try to forget her, her memories. her every damn memory only to remember her even more and loving her even more. He needs to get back to his own self, he needs to have a clear brain.

For he himself said "I would live with this pain, with this broken heart"

This turned out long sorry!

And about the precap? Um. Actually I liked it! 😆 Although I think it was a red herring. Thye din't see him like that. But if it is, It gives more scope for a more Junooni Junoon from both the sides. As betrayal takes over..
Bring it on! More angst on the way..

Awesome awesome post that was!! 😃
Edited by Prags_Sociopath - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
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So glad to see you back.😊
Amazing post.

It's saddening and both tragic that the only truthful and honest relation of his life was manhandled by the biggest ever lie of his life

How true is this?
His truth becomes a lie and the lie remains a holy truth for him. Poor Ahil. His sorrow, his pain, he who had vowed never to love, fell madly in love and now doesn't know how to fall out of love.

Ahil's pain was painful to watch. KVB was awesome. These are the kind of scenes all actors look forward to, and some like KVB take it to another level. 👏

Precap - 🤢

Edited by GitaIyer - 10 years ago
micshy thumbnail
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Posted: 10 years ago
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so glad to see u back... with the comeback of great writers like you, prags, gita, i can feel the same ambience of the forum back too.. i so missed those good old days . when SaHil were the common factor which bound all of us together ... n i m feeling the same ambience now ...
brilliant brilliant writing... I have been quite angry at Aahil till last night but i felt his pain .. i saw through his eyes ... n it was so heart breaking... he loved thsi purely only once and what he got in returnn... in his words "dhoka" ... his reaction his words his tears his pain was so genuinely depicted ... u can see how deep he is in love ... n if he thinks he can forget her thats such a lie... he wants to tell himself this lie.. it wont be possible...

that indirect connection was also brilliantly done... symbolism here means Aahil will cause pain to Sanam and Seher would be the one to help her out of this pain ????

kher jo bhi hai... i want to see howw this track establishes...
the only thing i dont want to see is any sort of relationship between Aahil n Sanam 2 ... i hope he stays as far as posiible from her...
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Thank you. 😊
rakshaanra thumbnail
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Nice to see u back

Indeed Ahil has blossomed into a tragic hero, and I hope he starts thinking independently and manges to expose Tanveer on his own, but hope he doesn't get distracted by his new wife
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Beautiful post.
"When a body is torn, pain insinuates, but when a soul takes the blow flames leap out and perish whatever it finds in its wake!"

So true. But don't want his anger to be misdirected. Looks like Sanam isn't in misunderstood mode.

Have to wait for next week to see the facts and factor.
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Posted: 10 years ago
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So Glad to see you back Dear..😃


Missed you and your posts..😳

Amazing write up on the episode ..👏

And Aahil is the name of that fire now, a wounded leopard who had been promised love and affection but ending up bruised. Having Denied what he sought turns his starlit night into a nightmare of irrevocable sorrow. Screaming in agony of betrayal and heartbreak unknown of the treachery that lurks in his own house under his own eyes but without his knowledge, Aahil writhes. His peril is unbearable to our eyes. Sad.

Well written dear.. Aahil just made me cry..😭His life his love is no more for him..KVB just rocked..👏

Wish Sanam called him atleast once..did she not think how Aahil will miss and fear for her the whole night..😭
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Beautifully said Divs !!

The premise that both Sanam and Aahil will be hurting, for reasons different.

"Ever has it been that love knows not its own depth until the hour of separation."
Khalil Gibran

I await their eventual meeting, will the wounded leopard snarl and attack, or circle and observe his mate... but the meeting itself will be spectacular...


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Posted: 10 years ago
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what a lovely post.
Aahil's pain is so palpable, feels real, .. until we see the other side where stands Sanam, with her midas touch

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