| 'Sahil OS: Shattered Hopes' |

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Posted: 10 years ago
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Hi friends , I was thinking about Sahil nikaah and suddenly this thought came to my mind, so I tried to write an OS on Sahil. Please do read and give ur reviews.and please excuse my mistakes.


Sahil OS : Shattered Hopes


Characters:


Aahil Raza Ibrahim:

Arrogant-Hard working-full of attitude, wants everything the way he wishes, but a die hard romantic and a man with a golden heart.

Sanam Ahmed Khan:

Sweet-full of life-Caring-confident and responsible, believes that nothing is more important than her family.

PART-1


This happens the night before the wedding of Aahil and Sanam. Aahil and Sanam were madly in love with eachother. They understood eachother well. Though there was a mismatch in their status. Aahil was determined to marry her.So the two families fixed their wedding and both were happy thinking that they will be together for the rest of their lives.

Place: Sanam's room.

Sanam's mind was occupied with a cluster of emotions, she was happy that finally she is gonna be with her Aahil, she loved him from the bottom of her heart, at the same time she was sad about the fact that she is gonna leave her family i.e , her badi ammi and haya .But she was sure about the fact that Aahil's love for her is not gonna be any less. She was thinking about her future life . Suddenly she could hear her ringtone from her phone, it was Aahil.She pushed aside the pillow which she was holding ran towards the phone.She took the call and before Aahil could speak anything she started to express her excitement.

Sanam: "Aahil, you know what! , I was just thinking about you. I can't believe that we are going to get married tomorrow.I am so excited.But I know that you will always be with me and won't let me feel alone, even for a second. I love you Aahil" she paused.

She was feeling weird that Aahil didn't say a word ,all that she could hear a was a long silence .

Sanam: "Aahil, are you there..hello?" .

After a long pause, he started to speak.

Aahil: "Sanam..Do you really love me?"..he said,with gasping continuosly.

Sanam was feeling puzzled about this behaviour of Aahil. She knew that Aahil was very possessive about her, he could even stake his life for her, but the only thing he couldn't change of himself was the fear of losing her . He felt very protective of her. As he suffered through an unfortunate childhood with betrayal and guilt. The only person who could love him was Sanam.

Sanam:"What kind of question is this Aahil?".

Aahil:"Just answer the question !Do you love me or not?" with a trembling voice.

Sanam(gasps):"Ofcourse I do, I love you more than anything in this world."

Aahil(raised his voice slowly): "But I feel that our relationship won't last long!".

Sanam opened her eyes wide out, she couldn't believe of what she was hearing and those words came out from the man who loves her unconditionally.

She took a moment to get her thoughts in right place.

Sanam: "Why do you say a thing like that?...why?..What happened suddenly?".

Aahil:"Nothing...".He couldn't utter and a word after that.

Sanam:"Please tell me that the reason for your sudden question!".

Aahil:"Do you really want to know?".

Sanam(in a determined tone): "Yes".

Aahil:"okay then, let me get this straight...Do you love Rehan?".

Sanam raised her voice:"Ofcourse not. I love you.He is my friend,I can't believe that you asked a question like this on the day before our marriage!"

Aahil:"Then what do you want me to do, Your actions show that you love him more , Why were you dancing so close with him in today's party?..Even khala-khalu pointed this to me. But I didn't believe until I saw you both with my very own eyes. Looking at you both anybody can say that you two are in love with eachother...and..and.."

Sanam:"why did you stop , go on..go on..until you feel satisfied venting out your stupid thoughts".

Aahil got angry and started shouting at her. They both started to argue.

Sanam couldn't believe Aahil's words, she knew Aahil was possessive about her but she didn't know that the man on whom she had high hopes is turning into someone else whom she never imagined. This wasn't the first time for sanam seeing Aahil's possessive nature , his possessive nature almost broke their relationship many times, but Sanam was determined to keep this relationship intact.She tried to convince him every time when he got angry.

Aahil was feeling insecure about Sanam, the constant thought of losing her made him vulnerable day by day. Ofcourse he believed in her more than anything in this world, but he gave more space to his insecure nature than his belief on her. The things which he tamed-jealousy,ego,insecurity and possessiveness finally took an ugly turn and came as an hindrance to his relationship.

After a long argument.

Aahil:"I don't think we can take this any longer."

Sanam(in a low voice):"what do you mean?"

As both of their eyes were filled with tears.

Aahil:"I want to break -up.."

Before he could say that she understood his intention.she stopped him before he could utter any word further as she didn't have any strength to hear those words.

Sanam(whispered):"fine..." and she cut the call.

She could feel that the world that she constructed with Aahil was slowly shattering and both were not in the right state of mind, as they lost the one whom they loved unconditionally.

Aahil started to break his liquor bottles one by one and his heart was filled with rage.

Where Sanam- shattered and she sat on the floor and started to cry even more thinking The day for which they were waiting for a long time-the day on which they had high hopes is not gonna be happening.

Edited by Enigmatic_Angel - 10 years ago

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surbhi163 thumbnail
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Nice one...I like possesive aahil... but not to this extent. ...
He broke their relationship ...
Hope everything gets cleared soon...
Waiting for next update. ...
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Posted: 10 years ago
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I like this story :) please update soon !😉
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Omg...Aahil can go till this extent...😭
he broke up with Sanam...😡
feel sooo sad for Sanam..!!! 😭
hope Aahil will regret his decision...
can you pls pm me the next update...😊
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Oh goodness gracious!!

When I first read I thought this was an OS.



And I thought omg what amazing thing this girl has done making us weep so bad!


And then I was just reading it again (yes that's how good it is)


and then I saw the really big and bolded too line that says PART 1!!


Oh boyyy!!!



Jyesss!!!!



There's more to come!



Wow love!


You've done a great job with this one!


Thank you so very much for sharing this here!



There must be a reason why Aahil did what he did!


But I LOVE IT so very much! So sad man. Like how do you do this! Write so amazingly well making us readers feel the pain too.


Excellent!



Mwahhh!!!



Can't wait for more! Looking forward to it already!



Now excuse me while I take another round of read, tissue in hand!
Edited by farz_parachute - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Too good dear but Itz too short yaar ! Please update na !! A lenghty one please😉
Edited by ANNA90ALEX - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
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OH man !!

CLiffhangers !!!

What happens next ??

Tell.. tell !!!

Amazing stuff... 👍🏼
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Wow aliya amazing ⭐️
Edited by Surbhiholic. - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Sorry 😊 😆
Edited by Surbhiholic. - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
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nice start.. 😊
continue soon

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