#2||AsYa FF: Strings, Tying Us Together||CH Twenty Five(B) ~Pg 146

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BlackNWhite

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BlackNWhite

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Hafsa

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Posted: 10 years ago

#734

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unress

Yes!😃

Finally an update!😊

Loved it!

It was amazing!

well written!

Zoya told about what the registar officer did to her!

He was supporting her

Zoya and Asad got home

Zoya told not to tell anyone in the house!

Ayaan snuck in Asad's room

Zoya heard voices in Asad's room and went through the window

Zoya saw Ayaan

waiting for the next update!!

Thanks for the PM in advance!

Please continue soon!😊

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Mayur Chan

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Posted: 10 years ago

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Hey Aditi... 😊
Well Finally we got an update to this story...and Iam Thankful to you for that...😳
The Update was long due...And I deliberately ignored your earlier post..😉 because I don't believe in that...😳
This Update was Wonderfully written👏 , Fantastic... ⭐️ and a Very Good part..👏
Zoya's fear and state in which she was found was very horrible..and painful..
I feel anger rush through me...when I read such news in real life also.. about molestations...then anger at myself...ki Iam just wasting my energy commenting on that subject not doing much about the issue... 😡
But the whole first part was a very well written scene...AsYa's confrontation , Hug...then Zoya telling about this incident.. Asad's rage...Ayaan's advice and then the ride back home...very good executed part... 👏
Ayaan seemed quite matured...here but he still have that innocent mischeviouness in his thinking... 😛
Zoya's monologues about Asad's behaviour were funny to read...but right also... 😳
All and all a brilliant comeback chapt for this story Aditi... 👏
Loved and enjoyed reading it... ⭐️😊
Continue soonish... 😃
# Update ArSh's also...soon.😛

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Abi

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Posted: 10 years ago

#736

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well Aditi so good to see U Updateing almost after 2month

anyways

It was a

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Edited by -ABI- - 10 years ago

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Mehvish Fatima

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Posted: 10 years ago

#737

nice I want d reveletn yar

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misbah93

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Posted: 10 years ago

#738

This Update was Wonderfully written👏 , Fantastic... ⭐️ and a Very Good part..👏

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jottjott

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Posted: 10 years ago

#739

poor Zoya feeling really bad for her!!😭

thanks for the PM 😊

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Alone111

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Posted: 10 years ago

#740

Aaahhh adiii...

Ab tho hona hi chahiye.. Nai !!!!!!?

Tu bhi daily soap k tarah keech rahi hai ye revelation...

Ab woh dono kuch aur bolke convince kardenge shayad...

Gggrrr...

And dat register officer... Asad k haaton do padna chahiye tha...
Though ayaan was r8 at dat tym.. Zoya needed him more than anyone els..
And he was der fr her.. I loved d way u write his expressions...
He does care fr her.. A lot.. Pyar bhi shayad...

Awesome updt adi.. Loved it...

And how r u !? Hogay exams !?