SS: The Mark of Innocence II - Ch 9 Pg 109 COMPLETED - Page 43

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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: ASYAaishu

awesome update..

im really happy to see the story back on line...
end of chap 5 was really shocking and exciting..
plz cont soon...


Thank you so much, am glad u liked it

Will update tomorrow 😊
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: sasir

I have an inkling that it is zoya...
But I can never accept zoya to be this heartless...whatever the motive may be..
Whatever the reason may be they are not bad then how can she think of killing them...just be oz once they are dark angels...
I don't know about humeira ayaan n others but I know Zack n ayesha are good ...
If I am not wrong she thought of killing them too except asad...
I don't know zoya is wrong or right...but I is hard to accept her to be cold hearted person


Thank u so much for your feedback. A little more will come to light in the next chapter but what Zoya did and why will come out in chapter 5 part C

Lots of love
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: muh07

aoa plzz update saima di

i loved it

god waiting impatiently for zoyas reply

and asad reaction


Thank u so much sweetie 😊
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: asyaarshilover

Res for Choco api, Nimz api, all our Gang aka bacha party, 3no bhai n api's regular readers..

CONGO UPDATE MIL RAHA HAI😉😎

Huggie Aloo🤗

Sam di pehle toh huggie u resumed d story 🤗
U left at such a twist na we could stay in peace unless truth is revealed
& this was a interesting thriller after long time I read so wanted 2 read it badly
coming 2 updt OMG Zoya is d evil angel...Nooo😲
I can't believe she's killing every1 & now brought her gang there 2 kill them as well kya?
MAyb she loves & doesn't wanna kill Asad that's why she had a issue wid those guys following her
Di yeh kya ho gya me sad
I hope this is also some suppense & no1 dies from this family atleast
Btw Loved how Asad doubted & pointed that she's d 1
Humara Bond is best😛 this was best thing in d updt😆😆
Love U di but I want an updt of this 1 first this is so exciting & my patience is running off already
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: jas91


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Huggie Aloo🤗


<div>Sam di pehle toh huggie u resumed d story 🤗

U left at such a twist na we could stay in peace unless truth is revealed

& this was a interesting thriller after long time I read so wanted 2 read it badly

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<em>coming 2 updt OMG Zoya is d evil angel...Nooo😲

I can't believe she's killing every1 & now brought her gang there 2 kill them as well kya?

MAyb she loves & doesn't wanna kill Asad that's why she had a issue wid those guys following her

Di yeh kya ho gya me sad

I hope this is also some suppense & no1 dies from this family atleast

Btw Loved how Asad doubted & pointed that she's d 1

Humara Bond is best😛this was best thing in d updt😆😆

Love U di but I want an updt of this 1 first this is so exciting & my patience is running off already



Hey Jas

Thank you so much sweetie

I always did promise to revive it

It is just taking me that much longer as I have no idea in which direction to take it

Am glad u liked it

Will be updating shortly managed to pen down part B of chapter 5
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Please do have a look

Thank you Aroo for putting it together for me

Love you lots Little Api

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Posted: 9 years ago
Five Part B

Ayesha covered her mouth, as her eyes widened in disbelief, Zack looked at her totally dumbfounded and me, all I saw was red, I couldn't believe the girl that I loved so much was the traitor amongst us.

'Zoya...what...why...why would you do that...is that why you brought us here...to...to kill us?' Ayesha said trying to control her sobs.

Zoya looked at her and then towards me, her expression gave absolutely nothing away, she was so cold, she couldn't be our Zoya, my Zoya. I stepped up to her and grabbed her arm with as much force as I could, I saw her face wince in pain but I was far from caring 'why...why are you doing this...who are you working for Zoya?'

Zoya placed her hand over mine and pulled it away 'somethings are better left unknown...it is safer' I couldn't help laughing 'safer, really Zoya...you have travelled the world in search of our family, our angels and mercilessly killed them and you think it would be safer for us if we didn't know why...isn't that what you were going to do to us...kill us?' Her eyes widened, I saw her hitch a breath 'no...what ever I say or do right now will hold no value, you won't believe me...' 'Try us...let us be the judge of what ever explanation you give' Zoya stepped away from me and looked at all three of us 'none of this is my fault...its yours, no one asked you to get together and come looking for me...you wouldn't be here if you had just carried on getting on with your lives...for now, I have no answers...you are all free to go'. We couldn't believe what she was coming out with 'free to go...what the hell does that mean Zoya?' Ayesha asked 'it means that I am walking out of this door and when I do...you go back to your lives...away from here and away from me' 'and you think it's that simple...we need answers Zoya...and you are not going anywhere' I screamed out.

As she took another step back I took one forward, I was not going to let her go untill I knew why she had done this, what made her become a devil amongst us. Just as I was about to grab her arm the door behind her slammed open. Standing in the door were two guys holding guns that pointed towards us.

I looked at her 'if this is your mission Zoya then at least have the courage to pull the trigger yourself' Zoya didn't say anything, she held my gaze, one that was fast filling with disgust and hate. Turning away from me she looked at her men behind her 'tie them up...make sure they can't move until we get what we want' she ordered and left the room without taking a second look.

One of the men grabbed Ayesha and held the gun to her head 'you do not play ball, I will load her head with every single bullet I have in here'. I fisted my hands, I had never felt so many emotions in one go, I was angry, hurt, I felt helpless, betrayed, all I wanted to do was beat the hell out of the men before me and then go in search of Zoya.

The men ordered Zack to tie me up, which he did, and then he did the same to him, with us sitting tied up they were in no danger. The man holding Ayesha tied her hands behind her back and then tied her feet to bed post 'now like good little Angels sit and try not to make too just can noise' laughing at our helplessness they both walked out.

As much as we all struggled we couldn't move, I saw tears fall down Ayesha's face, I shook my head telling her not to cry 'this can't be happening...Zoya is not a traitor Asad, there has to be a reason, a logic explanation' Zack said 'if there was one Zack, she would have given one...she deceived us, she wore a mask that none of us could see through...but no more'

The mask of deceit will surely fade
How long can you keep up the masquerade

Naive I am no more

A little love
Misguided trust

A little faith
Twisted fate

Naive I am no more

A bleeding heart
A troublesome past

The veil of truth
The mountain of lies
What will conquer these heart of ours

Naive I am no more

Words of abuse
Words that accuse

Shadows of doubt
Loyalties dismount

Naive I am no more

Fear instilled
Fear an over kill

The never ending pain
The constant strain

Naive I am no more

The minute
The hour
The days so sour

The ticking time
The wondering soul
The darkened eye that says it all

Naive I am no more

If never before
Believe it now

For I have gone
Forever gone

Naive I am no more

Where Zack was adamant that Zoya had good reason for her betrayal my heart was over powered by my mind that was saying that she could not be trusted.

As we sat there through the night we saw the rays of the sun brightening the sky. We had gone through absolutely everything between us but nothing made sense. Where was Zoya and what was she here to do, why were we a part of her plan?

My wrist started to burn, the rope caused friction against my skin as I kept on struggling. I let out a frustrated growl, at the same time is saw Ayesha manage to finally wriggle her hands free. 'Asad, Zack...wait' she called out as she quickly untied her feet and ran towards us. Once we were free we ran towards the door only to stop upon hearing loud bangs and noises of crashes outside.

Running back towards the window we saw a whole army of officers surrounding the place 'Ya Allah what is going on?' Ayesha said 'we need to get out of her and find Zoya now' Zack said. As we exited our room we saw a lot of people running around.

I grabbed the first member of staff I could find 'excuse me, what is going on...why have we been surrounded' the young girl looked back at me with fear seeping through her eyes 'Sir, please stay in your rooms until we notify you otherwise' 'ok...but tell us what has happened' I urged her 'two delegates from the Indian government that were here for the conference have been killed...I don't know the full details but we have been surrounded by every law enforcement you can think of...you need to go back inside, please sir' I looked towards Ayesha, who understood what I was asking of her. As me and Zack walked back towards our room Ayesha slipped away trying to find out what had happened.

'Zack, I can't just sit here...we need to get out' 'Asad stop...don't forget who we are...were, we can't afford to be caught' 'we won't...we need to go' as much as he was against us leaving we walked towards the door to find Ayesha standing before us 'Tariq Mishra...its him behind this...I just saw him walk out with one of the men from last night'.

Both Zack and I looked at her 'Tariq is behind this...with Zoya...why is she with him...I thought he was looking after your assignments...what possible link does he have to Zoya' 'Asad, after Commando it was Tariq who overtook everything...where all of us stepped away from being the Dark Angels...I guess Zoya never did, after she escaped...I mean maybe she never did, who knows she has never really told us what had happened to her and whatever she did say we don't know how much of that was the truth'

'Zoya...did you see her?' 'No, I didn't. The countries involved...they think it was a setup...one that went wrong, there is going to be a sever back lash' 'this is a lot bigger than we thought...but I still don't get what they wanted, what is Tariq and his team after?' Not being able to withstand any longer I picked up my phone and walked out, Zack tried to call out to me only to be stopped by Ayesha 'let him go Zack, he won't rest in peace until he knows that she is ok...he may show to be angry but he is more concerned, no matter what he loves her'.

Whilst Asad was gone Ayesha and Zack packed their equipment away 'Zoya has been abroad for a good few years...she built her fashion empire...she travelled the world, why would she get involved with Tariq...and why kill the Angels, what purpose did that fulfil?' Zack asked. Ayesha sat down 'Zack, every known agency is after us. We were trained by Commando, his own personal killing machines, the intel we have is worth millions and definitely worth our deaths...if Zoya never really stopped living her life as a Dark Angel then Tariq would narrow down and created his elite army by killing off any one who posed as a threat' 'ok...but then why are we still alive, are we not a threat?' Maybe she was ordered to kill us...but didn't follow it through...or maybe she just used us to get us here' 'she didn't need to use us...she would have got here regardless' 'nothing makes sense...I hope Asad can find her before anyone else finds us'.

Edited by Saima-Syed - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
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yay..!

me first..😊

Awesome update..
But still Zoya's part is not clear..
Asad is angry on her and felt betrayed..
she wants them to be safe..but not revealing the real reason behind all this..
Hope everything goes well ..
Want to know whether she really got out of Dark Angels..
Want to read more ...
Continue soon...

Edited by --Arpita-- - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Yaa Allah!!!! Itta sara suspense... I dnt knw how to react... zoee 😭 api it was awesome I just loved it how you explained asad's condition but now I really can't wait for zoya's reasons to get cleared... what's her reason behind doing all this... is she a killer... no she can't be a killer😲

Ahhh I m so impatient to read more... cont as soon as u can api🤗
Edited by asyaarshilover - 9 years ago
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Res for bacha party, ainnu, choco api, nimz api, mayur bhai, asif bhai n abi bhai, aseelah api, fatima, sush, sukhi, binnu

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