SaHil OS : Hints of truth

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Hi friends!! M here with an OS. Hope u will like it. M waiting for ur views...

Update is coming shrtly in next post.

Hena 😊


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HINTS OF TRUTH
Ahil walked in the room to see Sanam smilingly packing his back. In the morning he have informed her that he have to leave this night as he had an meeting regarding some project, outskirts of the town. He cant ignore it as its very important. He expected Sanam to be sad, n he have to make her understand but nothing happened as he thought! Sanam was happy! Not a sigle sign of sadness is present in her behaviour. How can this possible? How can she be so much happy! Sometime he felt that this is not his Sanam. Then he let it go thinking that may be she is upto something.
N he proved right now...
Sunehri was very happy to hear the news, the Romeo will leave her alone for sometime, but she have to act normally. She cant let him doubt on her. She was packing his bag like a dutieful wife when she saw him standing at the door way.
"Ap wahan kyun hai? Aiye na. Maine aapka bag pack kar diye hai, ap check kar lijiyega, sab thik hai ke nahi", she said acting like Sanam as possible.
Ahil walked upto her n holds her hand. "Sanam come sit with me". Sunehri felt uncomfortable but follows him.
" Tum khush ho mere jane se?"
"Haan bohot", she thought, "Kaisi bat kar rahe hai aap. Main khush kaha hu?" she said, gulping nervously.
"To phir yun smile kyun kar rahe the?"
"Bappa kya ye mujhpe jasusi kar raha tha?" she thought but repleid quickly making up something, " Ahil mai smile isliye kar rahi thi kyunki ap jab wapas ayenge, aapke liye ek surprize hai.."
"Sach? I knew it! That u r upto something. Ab batao kya surprize hai?"
"Ahil!" she got up "..surprize hai.." she handed him his bag "Aap jaldi se jaiye aur jaldi wapas aiye. Phir maloom chal jayega"
Ahil took the bag n placed it down, he caughr her hand n cornered her near tge wardrobe. All romantically looking at her eyes. He advanced towards her.
"Kya kar rahe hai aap?" Sunehri asked nervously.
"Kyun itna haq to biwi pe banta haina?"
"Aapko late ho raha hai" she tried to divert his mind.
"Nahi bikul nahi.."
Just then Rehan walks in knocking the door. Sunehri looked at him embarrassedly while Ahil got angry.
"Wo Ahil bhai sorry to disturb, Begum Sahiba aapko bula rahi hai.." he left from there leaving a emotional Sunehri n a dissapointed Ahil.
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Meanwhile in a old factory a lady is tied up in a chair, unconcious. Razia walked in there with a plate of food n water. She smiled evilly n throws the water on the lady's face. A flickering light of bulb fell on her face, she is none other than Sanam who was kidnapped by Razia.
Sanam got back her conciousness n saw Razia sitting there, "Tum! Tumne kiya ye sab? Par kyun? Kabhi maine tumhe kuch ulta sidha nahi kaha! Maine kya bigada tumhara?"
"Chup bikul chup! Itna janne ki jarurat nahi hai, chupchap iyah pari rahe mera maksad puri hone tak. Samjhi?" she holds her cheek.
"Nahi! Mai janti hu Ahil ayenge aur mujhe le jayenge tumhara koi bhi maksad pura nahi hoga!"
Razia laughed evilly, " Ahil iyan to tab pohuchega na jab wi tujhe dhoondega?"
"Kya matlab?"
"Uss gar mei kisiko teri fikar nahi hai, ye sochne mein waqt jaya mat karna ki koi tujhe dhoond raha hai. Samjhi? Ab chupchap khana kha aur pari rahe" saying so she left from there warning the goon she hired.
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Meanwhile Ahil left from his house waving good bye to Sanam n his Ammi..
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Sanam was shocked to know that no one is finding her. How can this possible. She knew that Ahil would have gone mad not finding her. She is determind to find out the truth. She managed to defeat the goon n ran away from there. Her only aim is to meet Ahil in anyway n tell him the truth.
Ahil was in his car driving to his destination, thinking about Sanam. "I m already missing her. Unbelievable!" he muttered smilingly.
Just then someone collided with his car. He quickly hit the break n got down to see the matter. He saw a lady is sitting on the ground holding her head, her face isnt visible due to her hair.
"Excuse me, r u ok?"
Sanam recognised ghis voice, "Ahil" she spoke shockingly n turned towards him.
Ahil got shock of his life. Sanam! How can this possible?
"Ahil ap agaye? Mujhe pata tha ap jarur ayenge wo jhoot bol rahi thi."
She stood up with difficulty n hugged him tightly. Here Ahil is too shocked to do anything. He just couldnt understand how is this possible! He just left her in their house. Before he could do anything he sensed that the lady, looked alike Sanam, has passed out. He looked carefully at her, she is wearing the same sari which Sanam was wearing in the party. Moreover the feeling of her in his arm is too much familiar. He carried her to his car. Then he called Sanam hoping that this is not what he is thinking but when Sanam aka Sunehri received the call, his doubt got stronger. He quickly drove to a hospital.
He need to know everything. How came she looked alike Sanam, how did she know him n for that she have to be in her senses.
There awaits a big truth which will turned their world upside down...
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So this is what it is! M not happy with this as it didn't trun out what I have thought!
Phir bhi waiting for ur comments...😳😳
Edited by H.e.n.a - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
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i m 1st...
hey sorry sorry sorry for late unres,,,,

well its amazing hena...
i loved it...😛
saahil r together yeah...😳
plzzz cont soon...
nd do pm me...
wesy kehny ki zaroorat nahi thi phr b keh dia...😉
Edited by ashiii333 - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Amazing hope this happens in the show
Continue soon and Thanx for the PM

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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: loveassh

Amazing hope this happens in the show

Continue soon and Thanx for the PM

Thank u so much dr!

But m not going to continue it. It ends here. Its an OS!😊
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Posted: 10 years ago
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its lovely.. please update soon
nikki.171 thumbnail
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Now this was something that I would have liked to see on the show... A good start, do continue soon.
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Posted: 10 years ago
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this is the first time i red something by u n it's really good...
i m not watching QH but m aware if the on going track so five stars by me for ths concept
⭐️⭐️
Edited by asyaarshilover - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
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That was superb...continue soon. :)
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Good job. Update soon please.

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