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Nice update
So all is good Asad got his abbu
So nice
Zoya her dost and ayaan his family he always wanted
So the khans and moving to SM this will be fun
So love Asad all loving and caring
So exams done divorce clear yay still together
So now bags pack and off to our new home
Love the welcome they give themselves
So love the bikini bit too good
Omg love zoya saree so beautiful love waht she told razia
Loving the supportive and loving and adorable hubby Asad is now
Loving the precap asya making out he don't care
Continue soon off to read the promo
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Nice update

So all is good Asad got his abbu
So nice
Zoya her dost and ayaan his family he always wanted
So the khans and moving to SM this will be fun
So love Asad all loving and caring
So exams done divorce clear yay still together
So now bags pack and off to our new home
Love the welcome they give themselves
So love the bikini bit too good
Omg love zoya saree so beautiful love waht she told razia
Loving the supportive and loving and adorable hubby Asad is now
Loving the precap asya making out he don't care
Continue soon off to read the promo


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Important Dialogues: 1. "Wat did I do, darling?" asked Asad innocently.

"U never do anything," replied Zoya sarcastically, "I told u not to do anything there but u did not listened to me. Now, dat tubelight(Shirin) will open her mouth in front of everyone."

2. "I am here to tell u wat I wanted to tell u 4m so long 4m more than a month. I want to tell u dat I love u, Humeira," replied Ayaan wid a smile finally confessing his feelings to her.

3. "Both of u stop fighting," said Dilshad calmly.

"He started it, ammi. If dis continues then I will leave dis house. I will divorce Asad," said Zoya in a clear tone.

"I wish u leave dis house. I will be very happy to divorce u," said Asad in a clear tone.

(This is a a flashback part)

4. "Asad's birthday is on Friday. Wat to do?" thinks Zoya in her mind.

Part 34

Asad was walking in d garden. He saw Gaffur cumn in d garden talking to someone. He overhears Gaffur talking abt an important deal wid a client which will get him a great profit. He learns dat d deal will happen 2mrw.

He goes inside n tells Ayaan n Najma abt it.

"Bhaijan, u remember bhabhi once told us abt a software we can talk in any voice of a person," said Najma.

"For dat, we will need dat man's voice sample too," said Asad.

"I know where dat man lives n I will get his voice sample," said Ayaan.

"Dats great. I will call Zoya n tell her everything," said Asad.

He calls Zoya. Zoya was watching d photoshoot of an ad. She answers d call.

"Hello," said Zoya.

"Zoya, I want to tell u sumthn abt ur father hvng a deal wid someone," said Asad.

"Tell," said Zoya.

He tells her everything.

"We have time till 2mrw. Ayaan will get d voice sample n then we will do our work in stopping dat deal," said Zoya.

"I am going to office now. How r u?" asked Asad.

"I am fine," replied Zoya n asked, "Wat abt u?"

"I am also fine," replied Asad.

"Well, take care," said Zoya.

"U also take care," said Asad n hung up.

Asad leaves d house for his office.

Scene shifts to Sunshine Corporations Mr. Malhotra's house. Ayaan who is hiding near d house waits for Mr. Malhotra to come out. As Mr. Malhotra comes out, he has a little talk wid his driver. Ayaan records his voice in his cell n smiles.

In d evening, Asad returns home before Zoya. He along wid Ayaan n Najma r waiting for her in his room. Zoya told them dat she will be home in 5 minutes. Wen Zoya arrives, she shuts d door locking it so dat no one can see or hear them.

"Lets call maamu 1st," said Ayaan.

Zoya opened her I-Pad n then opened dat software. She used Mr. Malhotra's voice sample n called Gaffur 4m her I-Pad. Gaffur in his room answers d call. 4 of them wears earphones so dat their voice comes as Mr. Malhotra' voice.

"Hello," said Gaffur.

"Speak something," whispers Zoya.

"Mr. Siddiqui, dis is Mr. Malhotra. I called to inform u dat I changed my plan on doing d deal wid u. I learned dat d deal has no proper profit like it lukd earlier," said Asad.

"How can u say dat, Mr. Malhotra?" asked Gaffur.

"Dats only d truth, Mr. Siddiqui," replied Zoya.

"Now plz, I don't want to talk further on anything abt dis," replied Ayaan.

"Okay, we will not talk anything abt dis," said Gaffur.

"I wish we never talk again, Mr. Siddiqui," said Najma.

"Okay," said Gaffur n hung up.

Asad who had earlier done a deal wid Mr. Malhotra knew dat he was d type of a person who wud not talk wid d person again wid whom he had nothing to do or those who refused his deal. Asad used dis nature of his.

(Anyone of those 4 talking, only Mr. Malhotra's voice wil be heard to Gaffur. Dis prank was used in d serial Sadda Haq.)

4 of them smiles at each other.

"Now, its Mr. Malhotra's turn," said Asad.

Zoya used Gaffur's voice sample which was recorded by Najma n call on his call. Mr. Malhotra received d call 4m his room.

"Hello," said Mr. Malhotra.

"Mr. Malhotra, we don't want to do d deal wid u," said Zoya.

"Okay, as u wish. I will do d deal wid someone else," said Mr. Malhotra.

"Good luck," said Asad.

"Okay, I have some work now," said Mr. Malhotra n hung up.

Zoya exited d software n closed her I-Pad. 4 of them did hi-fives wid each other.

"Wow, we did it," said Najma happily.

"Now, Mr. Siddiqui will have any profit of d deal cuz d deal will not be done wid him," said Asad wid a smirk.

"Its our 1st victory against Siddiquis," said Ayaan wid a smile.

"It was so nice to defeat them," said Zoya wid a smile.

Ayaan n Najma leaves d room. After they left d room, Asad hugs Zoya 4m back feeling her bare waist n stomach as she was still in her saree.

"Asad, I need to change," said Zoya.

"I will help u change," said Asad huskily near her ear.

She tuk off his hands n went to d cupboard. She tuk out a yellow top and a black pyjama 4m d cupboard. She felt her saree end being pulled n lukd back to find Asad pulling her saree wid a smile on his face. She pulled her saree 4m his hand n glared at him. She went into d bathroom wid her clothes as he smiled seeing her going inside.

Scene shifts to Asad n Zoya r eating kachoris in d hall. They see Gaffur n Razia cumn in d hall lukn unhappy. They were talking abt how Mr. Malhotra did not wanted to do d deal n never wanted to talk to them again. AsYa gets happy to see them unhappy.

"Asad, tumhe aur kachoriyan chaahiye kya?" asked Zoya.

GaZia came out of their thoughts hearing Zoya saying 'tumhe' to Asad. Till now, they hardly saw Asad n Zoya talking to each other n even wen they heard their talks, they never them speaking any sentence which will need d way to address each of them.

"Ya Allah," said Razia shockingly.

"Wat happened, Razia Bi?" asked Asad.

"Zoya said 'tumhe' to u instead of 'aapko'," replied Razia.

"So?" asked Asad.

"A woman only speaks wid aap' wid her husband instead of tu' n tum'," replied Razia.

AsYa r frustrated by her reply.

"Look, its not necessary to talk wid 'aap'. I and Asad r comfortable wid tum' n sumtyms 'tu' as they seem more friendly. We used to talk wid aap' till 5-6 days wen I went to live in his house as a guest. Keep ur stupid logics wid u only, Razia Bi," said Zoya.

"By d way, Razia Bi. Ur husband talks wid u wid 'tum' eventhough u talk wid him wid 'aap'. Why its like dat?" asked Asad.

"Cuz only woman r supposed to talk like dat," replied Razia.

"Asad, let it be. She is a hypocrite," said Zoya.

GaZia leaves d hall annoyingly while AsYa smiles.

"Hum kaha the?" asked Asad.

"Main tumhe kachoriyon k baare me pooch rahi thi," replied Zoya.

"Muje aur chaahiye," said Asad.

"Okay, main aur banakar laati hu," said Zoya.

"Ur kachoris r very tasty," said Asad wid a smile.

"Thanks," said Zoya wid a smile, "Dis was among d things I knew to make 4m a long time."

After dinner, Zoya is walking by d pool. Asad hugs her 4m back. Shirin was walking by d pool unknown to AsYa.

"Asad, dis is not our dat house where we had less ppl living. Here, so many ppl lives. So, leave me," said Zoya.

"As if I care," said Asad.

"Asad, don't be so childish," said Zoya.

"Its u who is being childish," said Asad n turned her around.

"Asad, stop it," said Zoya.

He then grabbed her face n smacked his lips on her to stop her 4m speaking anything else. At 1st she was shocked then she started responding to d kiss. His hands held her waist while her hands grabbed his hairs. Shirin was watching their kiss shockingly.

"Yaa Allah, ye dono ko yahi jagah mila kya?" said Shirin shockingly in a low voice.

After they finished, they noticed Shirin n got embarrassed. They ran to their room while Shirin stood there still shocked.

On entering their room, Zoya pushed Asad on d bed annoyingly. She sat on d bed beside him n pinched his arm.

"Ahhh," shrieked Asad.

"Cuz of u, dat tubelight saw us," said Zoya annoyingly.

"Wat did I do, darling?" asked Asad innocently.

"U never do anything," replied Zoya sarcastically, "I told u not to do anything there but u did not listened to me. Now, dat tubelight will open her mouth in front of everyone."

"Let her open her mouth," said Asad wid a laugh.

"If she does dat then we will not be spared 4m anyone's teasing," said Zoya glaring at him.

"Darling, u know na how she is a tubelight. If she will open her mouth then we will only embarrass her," said Asad wid a smile.

"Fine," said Zoya wid a smile.

Next morning, Zoya dresses up in a grey t-shirt n jeans wid a red blazer. She n Asad comes for breakfast. Shirin recalled AsYa's kiss on seeing them.

"2day's kids na don't have any shame. U all don't know wat they were doing yesterday by d pool after dinner," said Shirin irritatingly.

AsYa got embarrassed.

"Wat we were doing, chhoti ammi?" asked Zoya innocently.

"Yaa tell na everyone, chhoti ammi wat we both were doing," said Asad wid a smile.

Shirin gets embarrassed n shuts up.

Others were wondering wat she wanted to say.

After breakfast, Asad n Zoya were getn ready to leave for their work in their separate cars. Dilshad, Najma n Ayaan came to them.

"Wat was Shirin talking abt?" asked Dilshad in a teasing voice.

"Ammi, u don't pay attention to dat tubelight. She speaks anything," replied Asad.

"Wat u both were doing at night at d pool?" asked Ayaan teasing them.

"Why u r so eager to know dat?" asked Zoya.

"Let it be, Ayaan bhaijaan. They will not tell anything," said Najma wid a laugh.

Scene shifts to Humeira sitting in her room. Ayaan knocks at her door.

"Come in," said Humeira.

"Humeira, I want to tell u sumthn," said Ayaan.

"Wat?" asked Humeira.

"I am here to tell u wat I wanted to tell u 4m so long 4m more than a month. I want to tell u dat I love u, Humeira," replied Ayaan wid a smile finally confessing his feelings to her.

Humeira was shocked at his confession. She did not knew whether she sud be happy or not.

"Ayaan, its true dat I am loving u 4m my childhood but I did not want to force my feelings on u like my ammi," said Humeira seriously.

"U r not forcing ur feelings on me, Humeira. I am confessing my feelings to u on my own. I too started loving u 4m more than a month ago," said Ayaan honestly.

Humeira smiled as she cud not believe dat Ayaan too has fallen in love wid her.

"I am very happy Ayaan dat u have fallen in love wid me n confessed me. I love u too, Ayaan," said Humeira wid a smile.

Ayaan pulled her into a hug wid AyRa music playing in d bg. They broke d hug.

"Ayaan, I don't want to marry so soon. I want to study further," said Humeira.

"I know, Humeira. I also want to study furthur," said Ayaan.

"I am not understanding wat to study further. Zoya did studies in fashion but she had d hobby of designing 4m d age of 6. So, she succeeded in her work," said Humeria.

"Humeira, I think u sud do ur PG in Mass Communication as u were interested in media studies," said Ayaan.

"Dats a very great idea, Ayaan. Thanks for helping me," said Humeira wid a smile.

"U welcome, Humeira," said Ayaan wid a smile.

"Wat abt u, Ayaan?" asked Humeira.

"I am preparing for MBA," replied Ayaan, "I want to do MBA before joining business."

"Great," said Humeira.

At dinner, everyone gets to know abt Ayaan n Humeira as they told everyone abt them confessing to each other. Everyone got very happy for them.

"Then u both sud quickly get married," said Razia happily.

"Ammi, we both have decided dat we both will study further n do jobs before getn married," said Humeira.

GaZia Rin got shocked.

"Humeira, its okay to study further. But u will do job?" asked Gaffur shockingly.

"Wats wrong in dat, abbu?" asked Humeira, "Women working outside r so common. Even Dilshad Bi n Zoya works outside. Dilshad Bi runs a NGO n Zoya is a fashion designer."

"Mamu, I will be very happy if Humeira fulfills her dreams n do job after her studies," said Ayaan wid a smile.

"Okay, as she wish," said Gaffur.

Everyone was relieved dat dis discussion ended.

"I am so happy, Ayaan to see u supporting Humeira like dat. I wish I was like u 4m d beginning," said Asad.

Zoya, Dilshad n Najma lukd at him softly knowing wat he meant.

Yes, Dilshad worked outside. Wen Asad told Zoya after their 1st wedding dat women of their house don't work outside, he meant for women except his mother dat is Najma n Zoya or any other women. Dilshad started to do various jobs after Rashid left her. Then wen Asad became 15, she started running her own NGO. Asad recalls an incident after their 1st marriage dat happened after he tore Zoya's dress dat she designed a day before she had her outburst n left d house for d 1st time.

-----Flashback-----

D same afternoon d day Asad told Zoya dat she will not work outside n tore her dress, he saw her talking wid ammi n Najma in d hall. Asad came to them n sat on d couch.

"Now, u may be filling their ears against me," said Asad wid hatred.

Zoya felt hurt at his accusation.

"Asad, mind ur language. 1st of all, u do a mistake n then u have d audacity to talk like dat to her," said Dilshad firmly, "U even tore her dress which she designed."

"I did not done anything wrong. She will ruin our family's reputation by working outside being a woman," said Asad.

"Asad, don't forget dat even I used to work. Even, now I work," said Dilshad.

"U were working cuz u had to raise me n Najma wen ur husband left us. Now, u r working cuz u r used to it 4m years," said Asad.

"Hypocrites have various reasons to explain anything," said Zoya in a serious tone.

"How dare u call me a hypocrite?" asked Asad angrily.

"Cuz u just now proved dat u r hypocrite wid ur explanation of ammi working but if I or Najma work outside then ur family's reputation will ruin," replied Zoya staring at him.

"U r not going to work. Dats final," said Asad in an ordering tone.

"U will stop me 4m working. U can't rule over me or my life. Got it," said Zoya harshly.

"I can't believe ammi told me to marry a girl like u," said Asad angrily.

"Even I can't believe data mmi told me to marry an orthodox, old-fashioned, primitive, Neanderthal type of man like u who can never change," said Zoya angrily.

"Wat d hell r u saying to me?" asked Asad angrily.

"I am saying d truth n dis truth is very bitter," replied Zoya angrily.

Dilshad n Najma were getn worried wid their fight which got a lot worse after their marriage. They wud feel bad for Zoya due to Asad's behaviour 2wards her.

"Both of u stop fighting," said Dilshad calmly.

"He started it, ammi. If dis continues then I will leave dis house. I will divorce Asad," said Zoya in a clear tone.

"I wish u leave dis house. I will be very happy to divorce u," said Asad in a clear tone.

"Do u know wat u both r talking?" asked Dilshad shockingly.

"I know very well wat I am talking, ammi. I can't leave wid dis shameless n characterless girl anymore," shouted Asad.

"Its u who is shameless n characterless not me. Even I am not interested in living wid a jerk like u," shouted Zoya.

"I wish I cud get to marry a decent n traditional girl like Tanu," said Asad in frustration.

"Why a girl like Tanu?" asked Zoya tauntingly, "U can marry her only after our divorce. U both will be perfect for each other. And then u both can romance by saying Tanu n Jammy to each other."

"U r insulting our friendship," said Asad angrily.

"U felt bad wen I said sumthn against her but u never respect ur own wife. Anyways, I did not said any wrong. U wanted to marry a girl like Tanu only na. hen why not marry her only? She is d type of girl who u always wanted not a girl like me," said Zoya angrily.

"She has respect for Indian culture not like u who wears modern clothes," said Asad.

"U r talking abt Indian culture na? Then why u always wear modern clothes urself?" asked Zoya tauntily, "U sud wear dhoti, kurta, lungi n all if u r so concerned abt Indian culture. U again proved dat u are a hypocrite. Now, go n wear some Indian clothes."

"Just shut up," replied Asad angrily.

"Why r u teln me to shut up wen u don't have answer to my question, u bloody MCP creature?" asked Zoya angrily.

"Asad, u sud speaking nonsense," said Dilshad.

"Yaa ammi, I am d only one who speak nonsense in dis house while only dis girl always speaks right," said Asad sarcastically.

"Dis girl is ur wife, Asad," said Dilshad firmly.

"I know, ammi. Marrying her was my biggest mistake of my life," said Asad wid hatred.

"Same here, Asad. Marrying u was d biggest mistake of my life," said Zoya wid hatred.

"Ammi, I am going out for some time," said Zoya.

Asad leaves d hall annoyingly.

-----Flashback Ends-----

"Asad, kya soch rahe ho tum?" asked Zoya, "Khaana start karo na."

"Kuch nahi," said Asad as he came out of his thoughts.

He started his dinner. He lukd at Zoya n felt guilty for being a jerk before. Dat was d day wen d divorce topic was brought by Zoya. At dat time, he was such a bad person dat he did not realized wat all he did to make her threatening him for divorce.

"Asad's birthday is on Friday. Wat to do?" thinks Zoya in her mind.

Precap: #Zoya is sitting alone on d bench at d pool lost in thoughts. Badi Bi comes to her n asks her wat she is thinking so much. She tells her abt Asad's birthday on Friday n her not knowing wat to do for him on his 1st birthday wid her. Badi Bi smiles n tells her to arrange a surprise party for him. Zoya thanks her for d idea n hugs her.

#Wen Asad is working in his room, Zoya asks Najma n Zingo Hotties abt how to arrange a surprise party for Asad.

#Najma n Zingo Hotties tells Zoya to make sure Asad does not comes out of his room d night before his birthday. Humeira even suggests Zoya to do a belly dance for him to keep him in d room. Zoya is shocked by her idea but she agrees.

#Before d clock striking 12, Zoya manages to keep Asad in a room for a long time at night. Asad wants to go in d kitchen to have sumthn but Zoya stops him. She tells him to wait. She takes some clothes inside n comes outside in a blue belly dancing costume. She starts dancing on Mayya Mayya shocking him at 1st but he starts smiling seeing her dance. She dances for him to keep him inside d room while Najma n Zingo Hotties r decorating d hall.


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