~Bring Me Back To Life~ AsYa SS UPDATED!!!!! Page 30 - Page 13

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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: --Arpita--

it seems both have some fishy past...
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: shailu143

Hey after a long time u updated it was lovely 👍🏼 finally the wedding happened 🥳 and what is asad past now please continue soon😃



Thankooo 😃
yeah! me karwa di shaadi!
ab wo to keep reading to know Asad's past! 😉
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: MayurChan

Helloo Nayab... 😊
Thanx alot for the P.M...
And this was a well written and good part... 👏 ⭐️
Zoya has i think has started accepting her new life with Asad... 😊
Asad' also have a past 😲 which is going to be revealed in coming updates ...
But amidst all this they are now married 😃
Looking forward to the next part ...
Waiting eagerly for the new twists to enroll and the story to enfold...
Continue soon.. 😉



Hey!
my pleasure! :)
Thank you so much!
really? batana what do you think after reading this part.
ya mahn! they are married... ab mere se or interzaar nai hota tha... 😉
please keep reading!
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: ayat20

Nice update

waiting for next part
Interesting story
Thanks for pm



Thank you so much
Keep reading :)
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: asifiqbalsh

Nice update
Asad was surprised by zoya relation with her parents but he ignored. Zaroon a good friend, teased asad. Cliffy end. Asad past as well. Still curious to know abt zoya reaction whatever happened in OT & now asad past. Continue soon plz. Thanks for pm



Thank you so much for reading...
keep giving barre barre comments.. 😉😛
bus thora or wait and you'll know.. but please tab tak.. sath dena ok?
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: anopama

Nice update

So asya married
Asad mesmerized by his bride his wife
She decides to leave the pain for today and enjoy the moment
So he was shocked at the way she bid goodbye to her parents
But to muskaan she cried her heart out
Love his cuz teasing him
But his cuz knows something is up with the quick marriage
So what is Asad afraid to tell zoya
What haunts him still is he connected to her or her pass
Continue getting interesting and scary



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thank you...or bus thank youuu😳
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Posted: 10 years ago

Thank you
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: Amin21

Read all in one go😛

you really writebeautifully yaar
splendid job👏
do pm me
waiting



Thank you sooo much...
bus please ye wala part parh ke dont go anywhere... pakka aage bohot achi story hai! :/
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Posted: 10 years ago



Warning: Extremely boring part ahead please font sleep while reading,guys this one is a filler... and somewhere this was needed also...but please bus is baar maafi... next time i promise to give you an interesting one.

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Part 6
Silence before the Storm


Asad entered his room and bolted the door. Turning around he saw her.

Zoya stood by the window, looking at the sky, the moon light enhancing her bridal glory all the more, she stood upright when she felt a presence around her, she was about to turn around when she felt him. He was standing just behind her, so close that if she turned around she would have jammed into his chest. Deciding otherwise, she stood rooted to her spot and shut her eyes, contemplating his next move.
Asad on the other hand was enthralled, He took another step forward, almost hugging her from behind and put his hands right next to where her hands rested on the window sill.
"Beautiful", he whispered in her ear and he felt her whole body constricting, thinking it as her nervousness he waited for a while and then very slowly he turned her around. He was shocked.
He saw her eyes shut tightly while her face had gone completely pale. Not knowing what to do, he stood like that looking at her.
When Zoya opened her eyes she saw him looking at her. She tried to read his face but in vain.
Here Asad looked at her right in the eyes, he could read... fear? It may be the kind of what every bride feels but his mind knew better, it was something else... something dark...


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Asad woke up yawning and was about to stretch when he saw her face. Zoya sat on the couch looking somewhere in the air, strain on her face showing the uneasy sleep she had had in the night.
"Good Morning...", Asad decided to break the ice.
"huh?... Go-good Morning", she said suddenly surprised.
"Tum yahan kyun bethi ho? I mean you could have gone out, everyone is out there... you must be getting bored sitting alone?", He said with a genuine smile. She was all dressed-up like a new bride should be on her first day.
"I can?", she said with eyes popped out.
"You can what?"
"I can go out to everyone?", her eyes were still a size of a tape ball.
"Of course you can Zoya! They are you're family".
And Before Asad could give her behavior another thought there was a knock at the door. Asad got on his feet and opened the door
"Good Morning Asad", Came a smiling Dilshaad.
"Good Morning Ammi"
"Where's Zoya?", she tried to look past him in the room. "And- Aree... you are still not ready, everyone is waiting for you at the table"
"Oh yea, I- Ammi just give me five minutes I'll be there tab tak.. ap Zoya ko le jaiye apne sath" He called Zoya who immediately appeared as if she were light and then simply nodding she went quietly along with Dilshaad.


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A few minutes later Asad took seat besides Zoya. His ears were already turning red by the teasing that had just started. Also, he was looking daggers at Zaroon, that man was running so high on his horses with the teasing.
Sitting with Zoya he realized that she was shaking. Badly.
Not knowing what to do he held her hand under the table and when she raised her eyes they were watery and scarlet and then she immediately lowered them.


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It was three weeks past Asad and Zoya's marriage, and here Asad sat at the beach looking past the horizon, thinking... thinking about where his life was heading? Specially his married life! He knew at the time of marriage that he'll have to start from the scratch but he never realized until now that even the scratch had to be made, he was pondering over Zoya's behavior... From the second she had entered his life... till just now.
And it was all...Odd. Very Odd. And it made his head spin.
Somewhere he knew she was different but still he failed to understand her behavior. The same reason had stopped him to go any further on his wedding night. Then at the breakfast table. Then he rest of the day when she had done nothing but nodding her head, crying and suddenly appearing out of nowhere the moment he called her, even when he thought she would take time to come, she had been there in the blink of an eye- all tensed up. He may have considered it an all-bridy-behavior but it was the same till date. He would find her eyes blood shot in the morning, indicating her sleepless nights. Her lightning fast speed and fearful expression whenever he called her. And her turning rigid whenever he touched her. Moreover those big doe-y eyes of hers... they held so much that at some point he was also afraid to read them,' He sighed shaking his head. They had to share their whole life and here she was not comfortable sharing a bed with him', he wondered.
He knew their life was going nowhere and he had to take the charge now! But for that he needed to know the unknown. He wanted Answers, and for the same reason he had called Muskaan.
"Hey"
"Oh hi... come sit", Asad said smiling, although they had met only a couple of times but both of them had grown very fond of each other. Asad had found another sister in her.
"So..?" said once she settled besides him.
"Well... Kesi hai?" he didn't know where to start.
"Me to theek hoon... but you- you look... weird", she twisted her nose.
"No I don't... or bata?"
"haan baaki sab theek hai..."
"Acha! Mosam acha hai na?", he was still struggling.
"Haan bohot acha! Kal barish ka forecast hai... banana ki price phir barh gayi!...Or pata hai zoo me bander ka haan baby hua hai!", she said taking the drink he offered her.
"Kya bakwas kar rahi ho? Pagal ho gayi hai kya?", he looked at her closely.
"Bakwas me nai tu kar raha hai, meherbaani kar or ise band kar Asad...tu ne yaha mujhe mosam ke bare me puchne k liye bulaya hai?"
He sighed.
"whats wrong?"
"Yaar...", he passed a hand through his hair.
"It's about her... isn't it?" she said observing him seriously.
"Well... yes!", he sighed yet again.
"Tch..tch..tch tired of her just yet?" she teased raising a brow.
"Bakwas nahi chahiye mujhe Muskaan..."
"Acha Ok... Bata what's wrong?"
And Asad narrated her the whole story of Zoya's behavior, very cleanly censoring the bedroom part, though Muskaan had noticed it but she decided to let go of the topic.
"WHAT?" she spilled out her drink. "She sat with you guys at the table!"
"To Muskaan khana table par hi beth ke khate hain na"
"Oho... the thing is that-" she stopped midway.
"Ek baat to batao..."
"what?"
"ye tumhare poore khandan ko beech beech me rukne ki beemari hai kya?"
"Asaaad... I'm going to kill you"
"Acha peace", he made the peace sign with his hands. "bolo kya keh rahi thi?"
"Hmm... Asad she... she has not had her food on the table since...like years... she didn't even come on the table at my wedding day, or ever after that and I have been married for like 8 years now"
"Seriously?" he sucked in a breath "but kyun?"
"I told you before marriage too... she has her own reasons for that, besides Asad, its her story to tell... I wont tell you, wo khudhi tujhe bataye gi"
"She won't"
"huh?"
"wo nahi bataye gi Muski, we are still on the same place that we were jab hum strangers the... if anything has changed then that is that she lives in my house, my room now... ya phir wo mere kuch kaam karti hai. Par Muskaan..." he turned to her "me use kaam karne to nahi laya apne ghar! Not that I mind, but marriage is not only about doing your husband's laundry or taking out his clothes every morning. Infact, its not at all about that... its about... about sharing... "he continued " sharing not only your things but yourself as well- I mean your thoughts, likings etc... or yahan... she even has problem sharing a bed..."
"what?" Muskaan raised a brow.
"Yeah... she sleeps on the edge or saari raat ek hi pose me rehti hai... away from me... pata nahi soti bhi hai ya nahi..." he faltered. "Aur kuch aisi cheezain bhi hain Muskaan which I have seen... I cannot tell you about them but they... they confuse me like anything!" Asad was now literally pulling his hair out.
"I have an idea Asad..."
"What?"
and then Muskaan narrated her the whole plan.


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Asad entered the living room to find Rashid and Dilshaad sitting on the love seat discussing something...
"Mom-dad".
"Aao Asad... zoya kahan hai?"
"Mom wo uski night shift hai aaj"
"Oh" she said while Asad settled himself near them.
"Kya baat hai Asad... kuch kehna hai?" Rashid took part in the conversation.
"Jee dad wo actually..." while Rashid raised his brow. "I wanted to take zoya out"
"Asad?" Dilshaad looked at him baffled "Tumhari biwi hai... take her anywhere you want, pooch kyun rahe ho?"
"No... matlab me use out of city le kr jana chahta hoon..." he lowered his eyes.
"ohhh! To seedha seedha kaho na honeymoon par jana hai" Rashid said smiling "or dekho to Dilshaad kese mooh neeche kr ke betha hai" to which Dilshaad smiled.
"Daaad! Me serious hoon!"
"han to asad honeymoon pe seriously hi jaate hain, han wahan ja kar..." He was having fun teasing Asad. While asad's eyes came out of their sockets and his cheeks turned crimson, he wondered if his dad was for real.
"Rashid bus!" Said Dilshaad "Tum bolo Asad kya keh rahe the"
"Jee mom! Wo actually I wanted to take zoya out of city...shimla, honeymoon ke liye nahi" he said eyeing rashid who looked at him confused "actually I wanted to go there for some months... transfer lena chahta hoon"
"Par beta why? I mean you have a life here, tum ese..." Dilshhad immediately made a point.
"Life banane hi to ja raha hoon mom...see" he looked into their eyes "you guys.. know the truth about my marriage... apko sab pata hai, and frankly mujhe nahi lagta k it will work if I stay here... and I really want to make it work mom... I really do. Yaha rahe to zoya will keep escaping me... yahan sab hai, she can slip away easily... but agar we go out... in a hostile environment to shayad us nayi jagah par when she'll only have me then she might just...open up!"
"kehte to tum theek ho...what do you think Dilshaad?" Rashid said giving Asad's idea a serious thought.
"I think he's right... but what about zoya? I mean what if she might not agree?" she posed looking at Asad.
"She wont say no maa, I know!" he said closing his eyes.


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And just as expected, here they were driving on the roads to Shimla. When Asad had told zoya about the transfer she looked baffled one second and then the next moment she was packing around. Talking about Mrs. Zoya Asad Ahmed Khan being a mystery! Asad thought smiling at her full name.


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Unlocking the apartment, Asad opened the door for Zoya and then followed her carrying the luggage... For this moment Asad seemed to be in peace. His heart felt a new vigor he knew things will change from here onwards; he knew that now when he'll set his foot out of this place, things will be different. He knew now was the time when a change stood at their doorstep. Little did he know that the change will turn his life into an abyss...


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Precap:

A one sided argument..
Zoya's past...
Asad's reaction...

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Hey Everyone!
How are you all? long time no?😛
All your jootas.. chappals and tomatoes are accepted (but please araam se marna) ok?

NOTE:
My semester has ended and i have exams by the end of May and unlike other times, i have not even opened my books this time! pata nahi kya bane ga... please pray?
And about the next update, you have the precap just wanted to say that it will be some time in mid-june... please bear with me! please? *puppy face*


So until the next time...
Take care
Regards,
Nayab
Edited by janaa_way - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
mine😉
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Pirtty Awesome Update Nayab

Dieing to know Zoyas past
So, Nayab try to give one more Update before U starts prepareing for Ur exam&Nayab all the Very Best for Ur exam dear
Edited by -ABI- - 10 years ago

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