Haath chodiye AAHIL.. mein SANAM nahi hoon.part 7 updated PAGE 11 - Page 6

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Posted: 10 years ago
#51
Thanks for the pm😊, really loved Part 5 plz contiune writing👏. Can't wait for the nxt part, plz post soon. 😛
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Posted: 10 years ago
#52
whoah...nice update !! 😊😉
i feel so sad for aahil...🥱
but finally the truth is out...😃
do pm me the next update...😳
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Posted: 10 years ago
#53

Rehaan: YES..!!! ahil bhai... im REHAAN.. son of tanveer and imran quershi

(rehaan falls on his knees)

Rehaan: Im d son of d woman who neva gave her own child d opportunity to call her as ammi.. who kept her child orphanage and she married d nawab of Bhopal coz of her greed towards her money..u believed a lot in me ahil bhai...!!... bt d lov I had towards my mother overshadowed it.. and restricted me from saying dis truth to u.. I waited till today dat begum sahiba will give me a chance to call her as ammi...bt I had enough.. I understood dat truths of criminals shud neva b hidden.. and im happy dat I neva called her as ammi

Ahil makes rehaan stand

Rehaan: no, rehaan I believed in my so called ammi so much dat.. I believed dat I have done a murder which I have never committed in reality.. I called a person as ammi... who actually never knew wht it worth...v both have under gone equal amounts of pain in our lives...

Both brothers hug and goes to find tanveer...

Ahil: how could u kill dese many ppl jst fr money?? Hw could u make 3 children parent less? How could u make a 6 yr child murderer?? Worst of all how could u leave ur own son in orphanage???

Rehaan: its waste speaking to her ahil bhai.. she doesn't care if its her step son or own son...

While saying rehaan moves forward...

Tanveer suddenly takes her hand from her saree and points d gun at rehaan..

Tanveer: I always wanted u to liv d life of nawab rehaan.. bt u wanted to live simple life.. now u also came to know d truth about me...yes I killed dem all for money..i don't matter who ever it is..whether dey are my child hood friends or even if it is my own child.. so I don't mind killing u too... Sanam and aahil if u bth don't sign d property pprs.. ahil's so called bro will b no more...!!!

All r shocked dat tanveer cud go dis low...

Ahil: leave rehaan.. v will sign d pprs rite nw...

Rehaan: ahil bhai..dont sign dem... nxt she will kill u ppl too.. its better to die.. dan being known as murderer tanveer's son.. dis woman gave me birth..lemme die in her own hands..

Rehaan looked for d last time at seher... Seher was soo shocked she had no expressions.. jst b4 few minutes she thought dat she had a family n life partner which she neva had in her entire life.. but things turned topsy-turvy again...

Ahil-sanam: tanveer no plzz dnt kill him..

Ahil pushes rehaan and stands in rehaan's place...

Tanveer releases d trigger...All dat ppl cud hear was a bullet sound...

D gun was pointed towards aahil... tanveer was d one who used d gun... but guess wht.. tanveer was d one who was shot down..by d bullet...tanveer was shot dead because of the Marble struck in the barrel of the gun which caused a backfire... d bullet hit her straight on her head.. and nxt minute she laid on d ground..

Everyone was shell shocked..!!!!


(A flash back scene is shown.. ahil's father had many guns as he was nawab of Bhopal.. little aahil who was 6 yrs plays wid his frnds wid a gun of his father..as aahil din knew d difference between original and fake gun.. however aahil couldn't find bullets.. nd replaced bullets with marbles in d gun.. nd played wid his frnds.. his dad found him and was angry and scolded ahil for playing wid dangerous weapons at a very young age.. so ahil n his friends removed all d marbles.. bt a single marble was stuck in d gun...)


Coming to d present.. tanveer loaded bullets in d same gun and cudnt find d marble in gun coz she was blind.. allah made her blind for a reason.. to pay herself for her own sins...


PRESENT:No one cud a utter a single word... rehaan immediately hugged aahil..

Rehaan: aahil bhai my own mother neva looked afta me..n eva tried to kill me.. but u thought f sacrificing ur life fr me?? Hw u thought dat I cud live wid out u??

Hw will sanam live?? Thnx fr everyding ahil bhai.. its time fr me to leave..u hav already given me evryding frm childhood ..n protected me till nw...

Saying this rehaan moves forward to leave...

Aahil: so rehaan ur making me orphan again by leaving me right?? Though im a married man...d world will know know me as an orphan coz I don't have parents and siblings... ur leaving coz u don't hav relation wid anyone in dis mansion.. bt dis very minute ur going to b my official brother.. Im calling qazi saheb right nw and adopt you as my brother... from today u vll b REHHAN RAZA IBRAHIM,, d CHOTA NAWAB of BHOPAL..

Aahil opens his hands wide open for rehaan and both hug...and aahil brushes rehhan's hair as his elder bro.. and finds sanam and seher to b happiest..bth have happy teras in deir eyes


D next day aahil adopts him as his younger brother and makes him chota nawab..everone forgives razia and accepts her to stay wid dem..


Sahil-sehaan admit dilashad at a good hospital and she regains back her voice n she can speak too nw..

Dilshad: I always wanted to c my grandchildren nikaah wid my own eyes..bt I cudnt c sanam-ahil's wedding.. so I want to c aahil-sanam's re-nikaah.. nd seher-rehaan's nikkah.. though rehhan is tanveer's son I know dat he has none of her qualities.. nd is opposite to her...n im confident dat seher will b happy wid him... will u ppl fulfill my wish??

Sanam-ahil nod deir head in yes...rehaan too nods.. bt seher leaves frm dere



Ahil goes near seher and sanam near rehaan

Ahil: saali.. will u marry my bro??

Seher: jiju.. im sooo sorry dat I irritated u a lot wen sanam was not dere.. wen I was swapped in sanam's place.i respect u a lot nw...I din knew dat I was doing bad to my own family..

Ahil : (moving his hand over her hair) its okie saali.. atleast I should have identified by our weird behavior.. v both have done equal mistakes..so I already forgave u..

Seher: im happy dat u forgave me... bt it doesn't mean dat I will say yes to wht ever u say..

Ahil: u love him right?? Afta all he is d chota nawab of Bhopal.. he is well educated too..hansdome..

Seher: jiju now don't try to convince me...

Ahil: okie okie..as u wish

Ahil leaves frm dere..



Sanam-rehaan convo

Sanam : im happy dat seher will b in ur hands.. im confident dat she will not do a single mistake frm nw..coz she will b with u... frm d beginning I knew dat who marries u will b d luckiest... bt plzz don't get irritated if my sis irritates u wid her talks devarji...(nd pinches his cheeks...)

Rehaan: no babhi jaan... neva.. I can neva leave her.. I will b incomplete wid her...

Ahil comes dere..

Ahil: seher is not listening.. u have to make her agree fr d nikaah by your self..rehann

Rehaan: okie ahil bhai...I will deal wid her


Rehaan reaches seher.. nd finds her back facing him..

Rehaan: seher I love u.. will u marry me??

Seher..: no...neva...!!!

Rehaan: bt y?? y did u suddenly change ur mind..???

Seher: before ahil jiju adopted u as his bro. u thought of leaving Ibrahim mansion nd going away u din eva think a sec abt me...

Rehaan understands her rant...nd her drama

Rehaan: DRAMEBAAAZZZ...

(nd starts running behind her... dey both fall on d bed.. nd it breaks..similar to ipkknd style.. a huge noise occurs.. bt still both r aware of d surroundings n r lost in each other)

Sanam nd ahil run upstairs afta listening to d noise thinking dat seher might be beating rehaan..

Bt find dem close..ahil n sanam stand at corner of both doors..

Sanam: devarji...agar aap nikkah tak ruk jaayega toh...

Seher nd rehhaan feel embrassed nd seher hids her face by placing her head on rehenn's shirt and covering her face wid rehaan's shirt..

Aahil: Sali ..u have not given ur reply yet?? Shall I go n say badi ammi dat u r not interested in d nikaah...

Seher- rehaan: no v r ready fr d nikaah..!!!!

To b continued..!!!!



Ps: I always wanted tanveer to b victim of her own plans...:D

for d tanveer killing scene u can c d video of a telugu mvie athadu.. in dat mvie d villan sonu sood dies coz d gun backfires on him bcoz f a marble is stuck in it...im giving d link below...

LINK: https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=EP_wJ1NG7t0

U cn wtch it frm 02:46:06


Edited by asyaian - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
#54
Awesome update ... it was quite different... ek dum filmy climax... I liked it...so double marriage on cards...sahil and sehan. ... I like dramebaaz seher...just like her mother...waiting eagerly for next update. ...thanks for p m
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Posted: 10 years ago
#55
Thanks for updating😊
Finally tanveer dies
I wish they kill tanveer soon in the serial too
Lovely update
Waiting for the marraige
Continue soon

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Posted: 10 years ago
#56
lovely update
thank u so much for the PM,.
love the way tanveer died
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Posted: 10 years ago
#57
I just read this story and it was very interesting! Liked it a lot. Especially the way Tanveer died and the IPKKND style Bed break! Lol
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Posted: 10 years ago
#58
Veey nyce

Finally tanveer got her own bullet
good


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Posted: 10 years ago
#59

Ahil-sanam's re-nikaah and rehaan-seher's nikaah celebrations started in full swing...under dishad's supervision.. the happiness f dilshad was clearly seen in her eyes.. she became a child wid her grandchildren again...

The first rasam was mehandi... sanam was dressed in beautiful blue lehanga where as seher in pink lahenga.. ahil n rehaan were dresses in black n cream sherwani's... it was difficult to say who looked d most georgeous n handsome dat day...the brothes cudnt take off their eyes from their brides

Sanam was having her mehandi done first...while ahil was sitting beside her..secretly trying to find his name in her mehandi...

Seher danced to "DIDI TERA DEVAR DEWANA" wid rehaan...nd afta d dance cmpltd seher had her mehendi done..

Sanam was hungry and wanted to eat.. but cudnt as she got mehandi applied.. she searched fr her badi ammi..and found dat dilshad was feeding seher.. she didn't want to disturb dem.. sanam thought dat badi ammi fed me many times... dis might b d frst time someone is feeding my twin sis.. she had tears in her eyes for her long lost twin...when sanam turned bck she found her nawab ahil holding a plate which had her favourite poudina chutney in it.. but gave a look to ahil as if she dint notice it...

Ahil: come sanam.. I will feed you..

Sanam: no..ahil.. im not hungry...

Ahil: (tries to feed her).. she moves her face away

(reverse manmarziyan started.. sanam was trying to b like a spoilt child like ahil)

Ahil: sanam... enough of games.. have ur food nw... ur trying take revenge on me right?? Coz I acted d same way wen u tried to feed me when I was sick...

Sanam: jiii.. bilkul nahiii

Ahil smiles... n tries many times to feed her...but she doesn't open her mouth.. he remembers exactly how she fed him.. dis time he feeds her with a more seductive smile on his face...balm**** sanam opens her mouth..

Sanam: aapko patha hai ahil.. ur not my first bride groom...

Ahil: .. oh.. really...(a bit jealous..)

Sanam: actually I shud get married to a guy.. but u was d one who spoiled my first nikaah unknowingly...by burning my dabha

Ahil: sry sanam.. I actually didn't mean to hurt u by burning ur dabha..(interrupted)

Sanam: I knw ahil.. wen I had mehandi applied on my hands fr my first nikaah... my heart knew dat d "A" letter was nt anwar and someone else... anwar cheated me and ran away... bt destiny bought me to Bhopal where u lived...im so thankful to god dat im ur wife..

Ahil: im d luckier one sanam.. I got u... I was d happiest when d mehendi fell on ur hand and not on nida's hand.. bt then,I did not have d courage to say u dat I love u...I was always a puppet in tanveer's hands... what ever im today its only because of u.. ur d best gift I received from allah...

Both hug...bt gets interrupted by rehaan-seher...nd sanam gets shy n hids behind ahil

Seher: wow how romantic...dinner u both had...jiju.. ur brother knows nothing.. rather than fighting wid me.. he is damn boring..

Rehaan: u call me boring.. its hard to feed u...coz u will eat up half d items prepared for guests.. at least sometimes try to learn cooking ...my babhi cooks d best food in d world.. u endup eating whole day..

Seher: u call me a foodie...

Seher strts running behind...rehaan

Ahil , sanam, dilshad have a heart laugh seeing dem..

Dilshad: I don't know wen will seher and rehaan will grow up.. they r still fighting like school kids eva b4 marriage..

Ahil: im actually happy to c d playfull and happier rehaan..he seems more happier wid seher... through out his life he was comitted wid work... badi ammi and sanam I promise dat seher would b happiest wid rehaan...J

Sanam and seher wash their hands ...all d relatives gather.. ahil and rehaan have to find their names in their repective bride's hands...Ahil finds his name in sanam's mehendi... rehan challenges dat if he finds his name in seher's mehendi.. she has to cook lunch for everyone tmrw...n seher challenges him bck dat if he doesn't find.. he has to stop teasing her.. finally rehan finds his name..n seher has to make lunch for everyone tomorrow...!!!...

Ahil-sanam, rehaan-seher dance on bole choodiyan...wid soo much of masti, fun, dance and laughter mehendi ceremony ends...

The nxt day was haldi ceremony d brothers n sisters were all dressed in white... dey were shinning wid haldi on their faces... sahil, sehaan celebrated haldi ceremony more like holi..dilshad applied haldi to her granddaughters and tears rolled down her cheeks dat she has to send dem away afta nikaah.. kabira song in d background..ahil n reahaan stand on their knees and ask dilshad to come to Ibrahim mansion as their badi ammi andtheir family head.. they both place their heads on dilshad lap... dilshad nods in agreement and thanks allah for giving her not 3 but 5 grand children... flash backs of asad-zoya haldi is shown... in similar way sanam-ahil-rehaan-seher are celebrating their haldi...

Dilshad gives a photo of asad-zoya's haldi to ahil.. nd says four of dem to take blessings frm asad-zoya.. but seher comes n grabs the pic frm him... rehaan runs behind her... followed by ahil.. nd sanam running behind him... they were running happily.. as though dey had no worries in their life... happy jst bcoz their life partner's and siblings were happy...

ITS FINALLY TIME FOR LUNCH... and according to the challenge seher-rehaan had yesterday..seher has to cook lunch today.. seher tries to cook but burns everding like zoya.. rehaan makes an entry again n helps her... all of dem have d yummy food prepared by sehaan.. d food might not b d tastiest.. but had lots of lov in it...

In d eve dilsahd, sanam-ahil. Rehhan-seher goes to asad-zoya's grave... ahil n rehaan prays that dey will keep their better half's happy...afta returning home dilshad announces dat d brides n grooms shudnt c each other till d nikaah..dey leave to their rooms...wid most anticipation, eagerness waiting fr d nikaah tmrw

To b continued...!!!!..

P.S: one more part left... thnq fr loving my O.S... I din include rahafa coz.. I don't feel dem to b connected to d main story.. I don't understand whether haya wont take revenge of her mom's death.. afta alla tanveer is her step mom N HER MOM'S sautan...okiee.. finally dat's d reason y I din include dem..

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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: asyaloveu

Awesome update ... it was quite different... ek dum filmy climax... I liked it...so double marriage on cards...sahil and sehan. ... I like dramebaaz seher...just like her mother...waiting eagerly for next update. ...thanks for p m


i always wanted tanveer to fall in her own trap.. n felt dis is apt fr her... othr name f seher is DRAMEBAAZ..😆😆😆

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