SaHil TS: The Big Secret - Page 2

Thank you so much for writing.. Now a days i dont have enough words to express how brilliant it is.. ! Thank you for the PM.. I love these kind of stories..like Guy being hard outside and have feelings for a girl whom he hardly acknowledge..!!

Awesome start!!

This was so good! I was reading on the bus and nearly missed my stop lmao your writing style is amazing! Loved reading Aahil and Sanam as teens... Reminded me of some books I read and loved in HS such as Perfect Chemistry, Leaving Paradise etc... Where the guy was involved with the wrong crowd yet was so protective of his girl... The emotional bonding in those stories were very strong and I felt a very similar connection between SaHil here! I loved Asad and Zoya... I read the first part on the Beautiful Chaos thread and loved it! I am happy you continued it! Glad Tanveer is just a name in ur story lol the less of her the better lol But yes I am interested to know the secret and how Aahil will talk to Asad and Zoya! Great job!

This is sooo interesting.. Can't wait for the next update

Originally posted by: jasminerose

Hey u posted .. Yayy

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Tamara Darling!!

How do you do this every time?

Its always such a romantic ride reading your piece. Sets me in a dreamy world. 😃

Beautifully written once again.

I just loved the way u portrayed them as teens. Innocent and so so so cute. Sets me into my high school days. I am gushing. HEHE.

Loved it.

I would love to see how Aahil stands upto Asad. Oh man!! That would be so interesting.

Asad I love you! Still and always.😆 (you know what I mean 😆)

Update soon.

And and AWESOME Banner.👏

thank you for pm ...nice and lovely update...I like it

Originally posted by: jasminerose

Hey u posted .. Yayy

Res 😃

Unres

Tamara Darling!!

How do you do this every time?

Its always such a romantic ride reading your piece. Sets me in a dreamy world. 😃

Beautifully written once again.

I just loved the way u portrayed them as teens. Innocent and so so so cute. Sets me into my high school days. I am gushing. HEHE.

Loved it.

I would love to see how Aahil stands upto Asad. Oh man!! That would be so interesting.

Asad I love you! Still and always.😆 (you know what I mean 😆)

Update soon.

And and AWESOME Banner.👏

Originally posted by: najma123

Amazing as usual... Zoya flustered instead of Asad? Funny... If it were my daughter. Asad has become cool in the years... Wow. Aahil and Sanam... Awesome. Btw, I am losing track of all that you write... There was something else you wrote... Only Part 1 is posted though... Sorry I don't remember the name. As I said, I lost track.xD So, please, PM, whenever you write any... So I don't miss out.

Originally posted by: sabrinsz91

Fabulous update

Loved it

Originally posted by: ak020203

Lovely.. Very curious to know what is that secret

Thanks